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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 7)

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by betty123

OMG!!! Sneha...how can u do this to me everytime i.e Kill me with ur wordsDay Dreaming

Ghosh...this was soo beautiful...just perfect for the seperation scene ...Wow!!!!Clap

If Sia had to write abt it, she would hav written the same Embarrassed.



Awww... Betty dear Hug... Oye mujhe khooni banane pe kyun tule hue ho??Shocked... pehle Ana sweets ab tu... LOL

Ab tujhe revive karna hogaShocked... koi gal nahi...


Indradhanush mein mil jayenge... Sabko rang kayi...

Par tujhsa anaukha rang Betty... Kismat se milega kahin

* dances with a hula hoop as Betty regains conscious*

On a tender note...Thanks for finding it beautiful dear...Hug


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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by harshu.sundas

This is just so touchy Sneha..Cry
i really felt, dat i cud feel RaghavI...Cry
Esp I cried out loud 2 set u free, butall u did was look at me..Day Dreaming
dat look was so passionate nd divine, he cudnt stop getting amaze by her.Day Dreaming
I luv em, nd luv uu...Day Dreaming
i wish sum more painful scenes of RaghavI r awaiting us.Day Dreaming


Awww Sun... Hug... Glad to know that it touched you... and that it took  you back to that sceneBig smile

yes that separation scene was a well thought one... And well executed too.Clap

Awww... i love u too Sun... Ye le Hug

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
*Hides behind the sofa coz of the lil poem*

Thats a sweet poem snehaEmbarrassed.

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by betty123

*Hides behind the sofa coz of the lil poem*

Thats a sweet poem snehaEmbarrassed.



Peekaboo... I see u...LOL
Out ... come out now... There u are...LOL

And that was coined for u sweets Wink


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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 8:03am | IP Logged
 Wow thats a nice thread for  poems  on request.Smile

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by athiraarshi

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze'

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

every line was perfect



Thanks for your feedback Athiraarshi Hug

Originally posted by arunima_LUIT

 Wow thats a nice thread for  poems  on request.Smile


Thanks Arunima dear Hug
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged


The third wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my friends Sun and Athira Hug

 

Wish Penny put in by Sun and Athira :

Raghavi scene where Raghav smiles and gazes at her in jail while she is blabbering.

Sun and Athira dear Hug

Lagta hai tum logone wishing well mein badi shiddath se wish penny dali thi LOL... I really had doubts if I would ever write on this scene.


I hope these lines were able to describe the scene' If not, then like I said before, Ana ke avis se kaam chala lo dears LOL

The below art was created by my dear friend Shaili... and all I can say is
"Abe Sunn na... thanks yaar" Hug





Avis credited to:  Ana Hug





To find you here... in such a state,
Makes me bicker... at my fate;


As I blabber and... then debate,
You smile a smile... I can't relate;


Then you ask... "Are you fine?"
I answer "Yes"... and then resign;


Back to thinking... I ponder again,
To strike the devil... but not in vain;


That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;


Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;


I have done what ... you didn't see,
Slapped the demon... and self pity;


As I walk away... from you tonight
I promise to put up... a valiant fight


 *********************

And I have to thanks my friend Ana here... for the wonderful avis she comes up with... Clap...And also to my sis Shaili here who makes these wonderful siggies for the title...Clap

This goes out to you guys for adding that extra pixie dust  Hug


Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets Day Dreaming





Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 23 August 2012 at 9:18am

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Wonderfully executed di...Can't even express the deepness in wordsDay Dreaming

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