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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 6)

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
I'm one of those who can only say awesome and clap, so I'll do that. Awesome!!!! Clap
 
 
Haar line main itna dard...oh that sweet avi, oh those sweet lines...Sneha you outdid yourself this time!!!! Clap

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
                                  Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze…

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

every line was perfect

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze…

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.

every line was perfect

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Elysia

*dies*
 
Omigod, Snow Ouch That was so beautifully tragic and yet you ended it with this small flicker of hope! AH! BEAUTIFUL. How do you do it? How? I love the part where she said that she was in a daze, but his call and gaze brought her back to her senses... omigod, just beautiful Heart


Awww... Ana sweets Hug

*screams... NAHIIIN(like the old film heroines)*..

*runs and kneels down near Ana and whispers*...

"Gems are many... Diamonds quite few,

Ana meri jaan...We truly need you."

*camera zooms in three times ekta kapoor stlye with the dhan dhan dhan BG score...and Ana opens her eyes and i heave a sigh of relief*

On a tender note... Thanks for your words dear ... you just sprinkled the fairy dust on me... and I'm like Big smile

As for ending the couplets on hope...well I'm a hopeless hoper (if that ever makes any sense)Wink

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
OMG!!! Sneha...how can u do this to me everytime i.e Kill me with ur wordsDay Dreaming

Ghosh...this was soo beautiful...just perfect for the seperation scene ...Wow!!!!Clap

If Sia had to write abt it, she would hav written the same Embarrassed.

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice




 

Wish Penny put in by Sun  : Raghavi separation scene




 

I cried out loud,

To set you free'

But all you did,

Was look at me.


Tears then just,

Brimmed my eyes'

Not a soul,

Did hear my cries.

 


 

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze'

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.


Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope'

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.


 *********************

This is just so touchy Sneha..Cry
i really felt, dat i cud feel RaghavI...Cry
Esp I cried out loud 2 set u free, butall u did was look at me..Day Dreaming
dat look was so passionate nd divine, he cudnt stop getting amaze by her.Day Dreaming
I luv em, nd luv uu...Day Dreaming
i wish sum more painful scenes of RaghavI r awaiting us.Day Dreaming

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by stephenie

The line in which..I mean the one with...*confused*
Ah leave it I won't be able to choose...
                      
                                     EVERY LINE'S A MASTERPICE!
Good..well wonderfull work di..Keep it up!Thumbs Up


Awww Steph Hug ... thanks a ton dear...

I loved Ur comment to the T as they say... see u truly know how to make the smile on my face wider. Big smile
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khota_sikka_sri

I'm one of those who can only say awesome and clap, so I'll do that. Awesome!!!! Clap
 
 
Haar line main itna dard...oh that sweet avi, oh those sweet lines...Sneha you outdid yourself this time!!!! Clap


Sri dear... firstly aaja jhappi paale Hug

A clap goes along way in boosting ones morale and so does the comment.. So u have boosted me double dose here.Wink

Well the Avis had to be sweet... Aakhir Ana sweets ne jo banaya hain.Clap


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