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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 5)

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by athiraarshi

this one   Sun : Raghavi scene where Raghav smiles and gazes at her in jail while she is blabbering. 


Thanks athiraarshi Hug for letting me know ur wish...That will take some time but will be updating the below mentioned one next

Sun : Raghavi separation scene

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged



The second wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my friend Sun Hug

 

Wish Penny put in by Sun  : Raghavi separation scene

Sun dear Hug
I hope these lines were able to describe the scene... If not  then Ana ke avis aur Shaili ke siggies se kaam chala le dear LOL

The below art was created by my li'l sis  Shaili...
and all I can say is
"Love you Sis"

Hug



 Avis credited to:  Ana Hug


 

I cried out loud,

To set you free...

But all you did,

Was look at me.


Tears then just,

Brimmed my eyes...

Not a soul,

Did hear my cries.

 


 

Thoughts of separation,

Had me in daze...

What brought me back,

Was your call and gaze.


Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope...

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.


 *********************

And I have to thanks my friend Ana here for the wonderful siggies she comes up with...  And also to my sis Shaili here who makes these wonderful siggies for the title...Clap

This goes out to you guys for adding that extra pixie dust  Hug


Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets Day Dreaming



Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 23 August 2012 at 9:14am

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hopeā€¦

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

loved these linesDay Dreaming

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Day Dreaming Day Dreaming 
 
Sorry... I belong to the group who doesnt know how to use words to express myself.. so I just end up doing   Day Dreaming Day Dreaming 
 
That is so beautifully!
 
Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -vandy-

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope'

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

loved these linesDay Dreaming


Thanks Di Hug... glad that u mentioned the lines u loved Big smile
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
*dies*
 
Omigod, Snow Ouch That was so beautifully tragic and yet you ended it with this small flicker of hope! AH! BEAUTIFUL. How do you do it? How? I love the part where she said that she was in a daze, but his call and gaze brought her back to her senses... omigod, just beautiful Heart

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam123_0

Day Dreaming Day Dreaming 
 
Sorry... I belong to the group who doesnt know how to use words to express myself.. so I just end up doing   Day Dreaming Day Dreaming 
 
That is so beautifully!
 
Thanks for the PM!


Sam dear Hug

Your  Day Dreaming Day Dreaming meant a lot and thanks for finding it beautiful... and I do not agree with you when you say that you do not know how to express yourself Ouch... well I have read ur point of views on various threads and you my dear have expressed them wonderfully...Big smile
What???... you think I'm just being utter sweet to you Confused... well I have got a proof of your wonderfully worded statement ... right here:

"What a contrast between the two characters! One does not need his eyes to be open to see the truth... the other does not see the truth even with his eyes open!!LOL"
---- sam123_0

And all i could do was Clap

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged
The line in which..I mean the one with...*confused*
Ah leave it I won't be able to choose...
                      
                                     EVERY LINE'S A MASTERPICE!
Good..well wonderfull work di..Keep it up!Thumbs Up

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