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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 36)

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice


The seventh wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my Sis Divs Hug

Sis  Hug

Wish Penny put in by Divs  : Siya-Krish relationship

I so so badly wanted to draw your penny at the end Evil Smile...LOL


But my own love for Siya and Krish overpowered my resolve and here is your wish...
...Hope you like it Wink


Avi credited to:    sidra2007




Life had been mean to me...
Left me devoid of goal;
With no one here to hold on to...
I had no one to console.

***

Just when I was sinking deep...
My angel you reached my soul;
And then I knew you were God sent...
For my heart you did cajole.

***

In you I saw what I had lost...
A son, I would call my own;
And so I guess we were bound...
By this unique bond unknown.

***

I promise you oh little one...
A word that I shall keep;
I'll be there when you call for me...
Be it uphill climb or valley deep.

***

No danger would befall you...
For in its way I shall stay;
If you should someday falter...
I shall carry you along the way.

***

The days will turn to months...
And then the months to years;
I shall watch you grow...
And help you fight your fears.

***

Someday if you get lost...
While finding your life's own way;
Just tun around and find me...
I'll be a stone's throw away.

***

All these moments oh little one...
The future may unfold;
You'll always be my little son...
If the heart's truth is ever told.

***


And I have to thank  sidra2007  here... for the wonderful avi  Clap.

Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets Day Dreaming ... It will propel me to write further Wink



Hug Hug lovely yaar, sis!!! awesome... so sorry for the late reply but u know the reason Embarrassed
that son part brought tears(not teachers Wink LOL) to my eyes... I remembered the 1st time Sia comes to know of the name 'krishna' and how she remembers her unborn child and how krish becomes a part of her life!

n I'm listening to this song while posting reply so it's here for u:



Edited by _dkmystery_ - 04 October 2012 at 6:07pm

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 8:29am | IP Logged
wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line...  this is for u  and this is for ur mehnat  that u put into fulfilling all our wishes 

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged
wow each and every word is amazing

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Sneha loved your poem.  Too good.  I wii miss this trio.

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by flutterby

wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line...  this is for u  and this is for ur mehnat  that u put into fulfilling all our wishes 
Its a beautiful job you have done with this poem... Really feel glad to have read it... Keep up the great work.. Clap

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
@tina_1983... i didnt write the poem!! Shocked sneha did !!! meine toh sirf thode emoticons dale.. Wink

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _dkmystery_


Hug Hug lovely yaar, sis!!! awesome... so sorry for the late reply but u know the reason Embarrassed
that son part brought tears(not teachers Wink LOL) to my eyes... I remembered the 1st time Sia comes to know of the name 'krishna' and how she remembers her unborn child and how krish becomes a part of her life!

n I'm listening to this song while posting reply so it's here for u:



Awww Hug
Haan yaar pata hai mujhe tere gumshuda hone ka raaz LOL...Main yunhi thode na kehti hoon ki tu meri Sis hai Big smile.

Sahi mein yaar ... I too had tears in my eyes when I was pennng it down... n tu ye " teachers in my eyes" kab chodegi???... manal tujhe kha jayegi LOL

Ahhh Sujata... kya gaane the re... Love you for this Sis Hug

jalate hai jisake liye, teri aankho ke diye
likhti jaungi vahi, poems mai tere liye

Hug



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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by flutterby

wow, sneha... i loved every word of ur poem... the whole poem depicted so beautifully sia- krish relation... if u want to know which lines, i loved the most... i can quote the entire poem here.. just beautiful... marvelous, moved by every line...  this is for u  and this is for ur mehnat  that u put into fulfilling all our wishes 



Awww Flutter Hug
Your words and emoticon surely lift my spirits Big smile

Glad that you found the poem befitting Sia-Krish relations..

Well here me sending your way all the jhappis pending from so long

Hug..raised to the power of n.



Originally posted by flutterby

@tina_1983... i didnt write the poem!! Shocked sneha did !!! meine toh sirf thode emoticons dale.. Wink


Flutter Hug.. tere emoticon hain hi itne cutey cute... they add the needed zing to my wishing well Wink



Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 01 November 2012 at 12:35am

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