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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 29)

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by _dkmystery_

wah wah wah... mast likha sis Hug
I think, school k baad 1st time itni sudh aur klisht hindi k darshan prapt hue hain mujhe Big smile

gr8 job by your 'team', now they deserve the weekend off.. plsss ROFL


Aaja Jhappi Pa le...Hug

ROFLROFL...Mahavidhyalay (college) ke baad shayad maine bhi ab jaakar pauranik hindi mein kavita likhi hai ROFLROFLROFL

Sis tu kabhi sudhregi nahi D'oh...sudharna bhi matt!!!!...

Main soch rahi thi agli poem teri wish ho...Siya Krish wali...but since "the team" is on leave as per ur wish... u'll have to wait!!!Evil SmileLOL


Hug

ROFLROFL control nahi hua sis

grrr sach kadwa hota hai na Wink

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by _dkmystery_

loved these ones:

Yeh prashn yahan nahi rukta...

Yeh jata hai peedhiyon paar;

Har baar na Raghav aayenge...

Kintu honge Ravan hazaar.

 

Yaad rahe yeh sabko...

Samay ki chaun dhoop;

Har aurat mein base Siya...

Har aurat mein Kali ka roop.



n there should be a competition in your next hindi poem, 'boojho to jane' - no dictionary help will be given n the one who explains it first gets a date with . . . HC ofcourse ROFL


Glad you loved those lines... My personal favorites too LOL...yeh lo...fir se same same LOL

Idea bura nahi hai LOL... that "boojho to  jane" made me go ROFL

Oye date with HC Shocked... to fir to main hi glossary na likhun??? ROFLROFL

we should stop getting amazed on this same2same issue LOL

ROFL

the poet n her 'team' will ofcourse be out of the competition ROFL

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iqbalslover

sneha wonderful poem though i couldnt understand everythign but virat is ravan i got thatROFL
aazing talent u have, keep it up

abe typo queen, viraT nahi viraJ LOL

I know, all went above ur head ROFL

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iqbalslover

Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by iqbalslover

sneha wonderful poem though i couldnt understand everythign but virat is ravan i got thatROFL
aazing talent u have, keep it up


Meri Rabdi Hug... thanks yaar for finding it wonderful.

Yaar!!!... tu na  ROFL...mere detailed word help ka kya achaar daal rahi thi raat ke khane ke liye???D'oh

Aur woh "Viraj" hai ..."Virat" nahi... DSDD ko chod EHMMBH mein chali gayi ROFL

Thanku Thanku yaara ...ye le Hug... aur mithai mat bhooliyo!!!!... Tring Tring!!!!...   Tring Tring!!!..Abe yaar phone to utha!!!!


yaar the list of detailed words is too long naROFL
hahhaa i am soo sorry but i always mess up with names, ask divya. she knows the historyROFL
utha liya fone, hello ji how r you, kya kar rahi ho?

I saw n replied ROFLROFL

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Sneha puri Ramayan hi likh dali RaghaVi ki. LOL It was awesome!!! Sneha is back with a bang!!!! Clap

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
 Kalyug ka Ramayan-just the title made me sit up and the poem was so ooosomeClap, loved reading it. It was a treat for me, and thanks you so much for the PM, lest I would have missed such an amazing workHug

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
SUPER DUPER AWESOME SNEHAHug

it is beautifully written meri jaan


each and every sentence of ur poem is fab


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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

 Kalyug ka Ramayan-just the title made me sit up and the poem was so ooosomeClap, loved reading it. It was a treat for me, and thanks you so much for the PM, lest I would have missed such an amazing workHug


Thanks Chitra Hug... Glad  that the title as well as the poem had the desired effect on you... and that you love reading it Big smile

I will surely make it a point to PM u every time I come up with a new one... Will add u in my PM list dear Wink

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