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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 25)

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Saraella

awesome poem loved it


Thanks Sara Hug

Originally posted by komal jagdesh

omg sneha...tum itna achi likhti kc hoSmile
    its beautiful loved each and every single word of ur wow poemHug



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Thanks yaar... tere comments sone pe suhaga hai Wink

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SunShine_A

Krish - Raghav poem hv to my fav
I just loved every sentence there and thanks for posting it alongw ith avis
made us relive every moment with word of urs


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Glad u liked it dear!!!

me too i love with this duo Day Dreaming

Originally posted by EmraanFanatic

Aww, just loved KriGhav relationship poem. Beautiful and amazing just like their relationship. And hats off to the avis makers, the avis went so well with the lines. I seriously cannot just pick one or two lines because this entire poem was superb. Loved this one, one of my favourites <3


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We just cant get enough of Krighav ever!!!! Day Dreaming

Glad to know that this goes down as one of your your favorites... thanks dear!!! Big smile

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -vandy-

thanku thanku thabku sneha..
these couplets r beautiful...Day Dreaming
can i add them in the next hc fc??


You are welcome welcome welcome DI LOL

Awww ye lo...Hug

Sure you can Di Wink
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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice



 
(1) Vandy Di : Raghavi Relationship ( completed the 1st phase)Dancing
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3135330&TPN=12


(3) Betty  : Raghavi Hug n Kiss (completed)Dancing
  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3135330



Dii !! Sunna !! Hug
Main aa gayi wapas ! Cool
Aapko hairan pareshan karne LOL
Oye, 1st vala thoda difficult hai..so shifting it to the end Tongue LOL
aur ye 3rd kahaan hai ?! Mari jaa rahi hoon main yahaan dhoondte dhoondte ! Ouch
Iss thread ka ek ek page ek ek kona chhan mara par kahi nahi mila Cry Bataao kahaan hai ?!

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice



 
(1) Vandy Di : Raghavi Relationship ( completed the 1st phase)Dancing
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3135330&TPN=12


(3) Betty  : Raghavi Hug n Kiss (completed)Dancing
  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3135330



Dii !! Sunna !! Hug
Main aa gayi wapas ! Cool
Aapko hairan pareshan karne LOL
Oye, 1st vala thoda difficult hai..so shifting it to the end Tongue LOL
aur ye 3rd kahaan hai ?! Mari jaa rahi hoon main yahaan dhoondte dhoondte ! Ouch
Iss thread ka ek ek page ek ek kona chhan mara par kahi nahi mila Cry Bataao kahaan hai ?!


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Main bhi Cool

Angry  LOL

No probs re... apne Viva pe dhyaan de!!!D'oh

ROFL...oye !!!...3rd usi link par hai... scroll kar niche... its hardly 6-8 lines.. chunnu munnu sa hai yaar.Big smile

Shailu D'oh tu na dhakkan hai... meri pyaar dhakkan ... just like HC called someone dhakkan in the SBS seggy... apni aankhen badi karke dhoondti to mil jaata.. just like HC did while imitating Siya in another seggy LOL



Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 16 September 2012 at 1:31am

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:15pm | IP Logged


This sixth wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of Apz 

 

Wish Penny put in by Apz :Ram Sia Raavan Lanka comparative poem on RaghaVi's journey!


Omana penne 2.0   Hug
I hope these lines were able to describe the gist of the comparative story...  and this time the poem is a bit too long... No avis here as yet but then I do have a

detailed word help in the immediate next post LOL

 

Kalyug ka Ramayan

 

Parichay mera  "Samay"...

Aapka sutr dhaar;

Le chaloon aapko...

Beete yugon ke paar.

 

Maana hai sadiyon se ise...

Jeevan ka aadhar;

Ramayan is katha ki...

Khyati aparampaar.

 

Rushi Vyaas ki vaani...

Sri Ganesh ka lekh;

Tretayug ki is katha ke...

Paatr the anek.

 

Siya Ram ke is Ramayan mein...

Daanav bhi tha ek;

Raavan ke kukarm the...

Vibhinn aur atirek.

 

Kuch yugon baad fir...

Wohi katha dohrayi;

Tretayug to beet chuka tha...

Kalyug ki baari aayi.

 

Bhagya ke chall ne jeevan ko...

Ek aisa tha mod diya;

Viraj ke roop mein mila pati...

Manmohit hui Siya.

 

Ghruha pravesh kar jab rakhe...

Komal padh piya ghar mein;

Kya pata tha hoga raktpaath...

Jeevan yunhi kshanbhar mein.

 

 Usi din gyat hua use...

Mann mein vichalit thi jo shanka;

Kal jis Ayodhya ka abhaas hua...

Bhali bhanti thi who Lanka.

 

Fir us daanav ne...

Apna tha kuroop dikhaya;

Viraj ke antarmann mein...

Chipa tha Raavan ka saya.

 

Din pratidin Siya wahan...

Banddhi bani roti rahi;

Atyachar sahti rahi who magar...

Umeed ke moti pirote rahi.

 

 Us daanav ne kuchle har sapne...

Fir har disha se loota;

Saptapadi ka har vachan...

Nir arth nikla jhoota.

 

Kabtak sahti chupchap woh...

Sabr ka baandh fir toota;

Tyag diya is bandhan ko...

Jab jeevan ka moh choota.

 

Mukt kar swayam ko...

Ja pohonchi Ayodhya Siya;

Lekar ek naya asthitva...

Punah jeevan ka prarambh kiya.

 

Is Ayodhya nagari mein...

Praja leti jinka naam;

Nirbal ka bal bane ladte...

Is katha ke Raghav Ram.

 

Jab Siya ne har pal swayam ko...

Atyanth duvidha mein paya;

Raghupati Raghav prakat hue...

Niyati ki palatne kaya.

 

Raghav ke aashray mein Siya ka...

Dukhit mann shant soya;

Fir bhagya ne samay ke bhu mein...

Vyatha ka ek beej boya.

 

Is beej ki aisi vruddhi...

Viraj ke aagman se hui;

Fir us daanav ne rache...

Siya ko pane shadyantra kayi.

 

Raghav ke sang Siya ne...

Nidarta ka vastr ab odh liya;

Viraj ke har sheh ko usne...

Maath ke rukh mein mod diya.

 

Par yeh daanav bhi kapti hai...

Har baar badalta mukh anek;

Paane apne Siya ko sadaiva...

Daanv fekha usne ek.

 

Ab yeh to kaal hi batayega...

Hoga kya is katha ka saar;

Vinaash kar Viraj ka...

Kya hoga Siya ka uddhar???

 

Yeh prashn yahan nahi rukta...

Yeh jata hai peedhiyon paar;

Har baar na Raghav aayenge...

Kintu honge Ravan hazaar.

 

Yaad rahe yeh sabko...

Samay ki chaun dhoop;

Har aurat mein base Siya...

Har aurat mein Kali ka roop.

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I know this poem is a way too long and out and out in Hindi... But i couldnt bring myself to write this poem in English... but then I have the word help for those of you who may find a few words confusing.

Please leave your impressions after you read it... It would surely make my day Day Dreaming



Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 21 September 2012 at 6:24pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:16pm | IP Logged

This is the word help for the above poem is prepared keeping in mind a few of my friends who may find a want to know the meanings of a few words there...  if any other word in the poem is left out which needs to explained please do let me know.Big smile



Word Help

sutr dhaar= narrator;  

khyati = fame; 

aparampaar= seamless

Rushi Vyaas= a hermit who is supposed to have narrated the story of Ramayana to lord Ganesha who wrote it down.

vani= words; 

Sri Ganesh= a hindu deity; 

lekh= writing ;  

Tretayug= second era in the ages of mankind in Hindu religion; 

paatr= characters;  

daanav= demon; 

kukarm= misdeeds; 

vibhinn=varied;

atirek= surplus;

Kalyug= the fourt era  in the ages of mankind in Hindu religion..the current one which we are living in right now ;  

chall= cheating;

padh=feet;

raktpaath= filled with blood; 

kshanbhar= moments;

gyat= know; 

vichalit= shaken; 

shanka=doubt; 

abhaas= appearance; 

bhali bhanti= rightly and clearly; 

kuroop=horrible face;

antarmann=soul; 

banddhi=prisoner;

pirote= to string;

Saptapadi= the seven sacred steps taken around the holy fire in a Hindu marriage;

nr arth= devoid of meaning;

baandh=dam;

moh=endearment; 

asthitva= identity;

prarambh=start;

duvidha=problems;

prakat= reveal ; 

niyati=fate; 

palatne kaya= metamorphosis ;

  aashray= shelter; 

bhu= ground;

vyatha=pain; 

vruddhi=growth; 

aagman= arrival;

shadyantra= conspiracy;

nidarta= fearlessness;

vastr= clothes;

sheh=check;

maath= checkmate;

kapti= deceitful;

daanv= trick;

saar=gist;

uddhar= free

*****

That's all for now... Wink




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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
wah wah wah... mast likha sis Hug
I think, school k baad 1st time itni sudh aur klisht hindi k darshan prapt hue hain mujhe Big smile

gr8 job by your 'team', now they deserve the weekend off.. plsss ROFL

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