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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 24)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by _dkmystery_


well I don't need to explain, who's u in this pic n which r your ghost writers, hai na? ROFL


Oye aur kitna kheeche gi yaar is baat ko... Sleepy  Isi mein adhe se zyaada thread kat jayega LOL




ROFLROFL achcha hai na! meri waja se dekh tera thread kitne achche se pages kha raha hai ROFL

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Krish - Raghav poem hv to my fav
I just loved every sentence there and thanks for posting it alongw ith avis
made us relive every moment with word of urs

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice


This fourth wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of Vandy Di Hug

This comes as a Birthday Gift too... Jaldi mein likha hai so may not be that good... Sorry...

*Kaan Pakding*

Wish Penny put in by Vandy Di : Raghavi Relationship

Vandy Di  Hug

This is the first phase of the Raghavi relationship... The theme being "Strangers"

The Avis:
 First one credited to: Lennie
Second and Third one credited to: sidra2007





The first time I saw you...

I was engulfed by fear;

But then you lunge to save me...

Like a shining knight you appear.

 

You steer away the danger...

That held me in its grip;

And then the duel followed...

That made my heart beats skip.

 

Even when they took you...

You looked right back at me;

My fear filled eyes and welling tears...

Is all that you could see.

 

I was so wrong when I voiced...

A voice that went against you;

'Cause then I was unaware...

You had done what a very few would do.




 


A few days down the lane...

I saw you in a different light;

When I faltered on the path...

It was you who saw my plight.

 

Coming beside you offered help...

The one which I couldn't deny;

Steering me with you...

My death you did defy.

 

Grabbing me by my hand...

You then looked into my eyes;

Even though I uttered none...

You could still hear my cries.

 

Then it happened the other day...

When I was hounded by those men;

I lost hope and was seeking help...

And then I found you again.

 

You refused to help me out...

If my anger I repress;

Gathering all my might I then...

Let out my distress.

 




You did something that dear ones do...

Saw my soul and touched my heart;

And then it dawned upon me as time went by...

This wasn't the end but just the start.

 

You have been a stranger...

For all the times we met;

But then you are one of a kind...

A stranger I will never forget.


And I have to thanks Lennie and sidra2007  here, for the wonderful avis they come up with Clap


This couplet was a bit hurried one ...

Currently suffering from "creative blank" and "time crunch"...

But had to deliver it on Vandy Di's B'day...

Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets Day Dreaming



thanku thanku thabku sneha..
these couplets r beautiful...Day Dreaming
can i add them in the next hc fc??

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _dkmystery_


ROFLROFL achcha hai na! meri waja se dekh tera thread kitne achche se pages kha raha hai ROFL


So to hai... LOL... Humein nahi to hamare comments ko hi sahi...footage to milega!!!ROFL

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
res <3
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
omg sneha...tum itna achi likhti kc hoSmile
    its beautiful loved each and every single word of ur wow poemHug

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Diii !! Hug
I'm back with another one !
One for The separation scene poem !
Its beautiful, describes Sia's emotions very well..
So, here it is...hopefully its fine enough Confused Sorry if not good !

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Diii !! Hug
I'm back with another one !
One for The separation scene poem !
Its beautiful, describes Sia's emotions very well..
So, here it is...hopefully its fine enough Confused Sorry if not good !



Awww Hug

Yipeee!!!!! Dancing

Thanku Thanku Thanku Big smile

Abe Sunna!!!... Mast hai yaar... loved it... Awesome Clap

Darr mat tujhe chane ke jhaad pe kabhi nahi chadhaungi LOL... *runs to paste the banner* Wink

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