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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 22)

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Oye sunna ! Ek request hai..take it as a wish if you want - har poem ko ek title de de na plijjj Embarrassed Sabse pehle Sia blabbering Raghav smiling wale ko. Abhi to bahar jaana hai, aake 1st comment uspe. NAAM DENA MAT BHOOLNA !! ok tata byeee LOL See ya sooon Wink


Oye bolna... even i was thinking on same lines but fir socha.. rehnede yaar...

but now that u hav brought it up... kuch sochti hoon.

Chal u njoy tera bahar jana... par laut ke jaldi aana

Agar tab tak title na likh payi... to tuhi comment ke saath title suggest kar jana LOL


Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 24 August 2012 at 3:12am

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _dkmystery_



ROFL just wait for a 'gud' raghav sia scene n then watch the gutter minds flow ROFL

abe, wo dhamki kaha deta hai. sirf I'm coming, I'll do this, I'll do that, why why why - yahi to karta rehta hai! n it is his 'team' who does the job.
just like how ur 'team' writes these awesome poems ROFLROFLROFL

warna wo fir muh phoola legi ROFL

still that 'like' isn't working!! ye IF k testers to bogus nikle yar ROFL


Dont ask me about it Blushing

There you go again... kitne baar wahi record bajayegi



I know ROFLROFLROFL

Couldn't agree more LOL


Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 19 August 2012 at 11:38am

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Okay, so A Moment...Bitter-Sweet was the second one I read.
Sneha, again, its beautiful Heart Amazingly written Star
You've put up the scenes very wonderfully -
> The comming and blabbering while he stares Day Dreaming
> The "Are you fine?" Sia amazed at the sheer ironicity (if thats a word Tongue) of the statement Stern Smile
> The sudden urge to fight back, join him in jail Pinch
> Raghav's intentional scorn, to keep them safe Ouch
> Sia's hurt, indignation and new-found determination to fight back Approve

Fantastic dear !! Clap Clap Clap 
And now for the gift I promised (Fingers crossed X Hope you like it Confused) -

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Okay, so A Moment...Bitter-Sweet was the second one I read.
Sneha, again, its beautiful Heart Amazingly written Star
You've put up the scenes very wonderfully -
> The comming and blabbering while he stares Day Dreaming
> The "Are you fine?" Sia amazed at the sheer ironicity (if thats a word Tongue) of the statement Stern Smile
> The sudden urge to fight back, join him in jail Pinch
> Raghav's intentional scorn, to keep them safe Ouch
> Sia's hurt, indignation and new-found determination to fight back Approve

Fantastic dear !! Clap Clap Clap 
And now for the gift I promised (Fingers crossed X Hope you like it Confused) -


That was so so so so chweet of you Shaili... Awww  Hug ... So thoughtful yaar... Oye mujhe senti bana diya *sniff*

Glad that you liked it and found it amazing... And the extra thanks once again because you mentioned the lines that you liked.

I loved the Gift yaar... at loss of words right now... will get back here!!!

Edit: ... still at loss of words so I'll just give a glimpse of how i feel right now...






Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 19 August 2012 at 12:12pm

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Meri wish kb puri hogi Cry

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by silky_harshad

Meri wish kb puri hogi Cry


Awww... ye le Hug

Sabr kar yaar... LOL... Jaisa maine pehle socha...All I can say here is Shocked, doston ke liye paapad to belne padte hain yeh suna tha D'oh... par un paapadon ke types ka andaaza nahi tha LOL 
...however will surely try Wink


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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
awesome poem loved it

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Aww, just loved KriGhav relationship poem. Beautiful and amazing just like their relationship. And hats off to the avis makers, the avis went so well with the lines. I seriously cannot just pick one or two lines because this entire poem was superb. Loved this one, one of my favourites <3

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