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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 20)

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by betty123

SnehaClap

KriGhav r so sweet n so is ur poemDay Dreaming

I m so pleased that u included their wink n headbump.

Loved every word of itHug


Thanks Sis Hug

Couldnt afford to miss their signature gesture now ...could I???


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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Ok reading your previous poem now.. one you wrote for Vandy's  bday... Very beautiful... I think you summed up Raghav-Sia story so far very nicely... I really loved these lines 
 

You did something that dear ones do...

Saw my soul and touched my heart;

And then it dawned upon me as time went by...

This wasn't the end but just the start.

 


Edited by sam123_0 - 18 August 2012 at 12:56pm

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Sneha, its beautiful ! Heart

Usually, when I love something, I  put forth the part which I love the most. Right now, I'm sorry I cant, since quoting the whole post is against forum rules.

Fabulous Clap Aptly put forth their unsaid, beautiful, heart-to-heart bond Approve Awesome girl, you ROCK !! Cool

P.S. Like button not working..Angry Ouch
P.S.S. Will read the rest soon-holiday coming up Wink


Thanks Shaili Hug

For finding it beautiful Big smile

Awww... Big smile

just love the duo to the T Day Dreaming... n so do u with ur siggies

Sabki pareshhani rahi hi aaj: like button

Holidays Dancing... wil wait for ur impressions Wink

Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Oye ! That was for the KriGhav poem LOL


Oye! Thik hai sweets LOL

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Oh the Raghav-Krish peom... Thank you ... thank you so much... I always wanted one... I just love this relation... and your peom describes them beautifully!!!!
 
Lovely avis by the way... and love the way you use them in between ... my favorite are these words along with this avi... I have loved just loved this actual scene as well... Both HC and Yash had done a spendid job here!

When all desert me midway...

Serving me a mighty blow;

You lunge forward to cling on...

Never letting me go.

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by betty123

SnehaClap

KriGhav r so sweet n so is ur poemDay Dreaming

I m so pleased that u included their wink n headbump.

Loved every word of itHug


Thanks Sis Hug

Couldnt afford to miss their signature gesture now ...could I???


ya I kno u cant miss it coz dere r many KriGhav fans here n u luv ur lifeROFL

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice



Thanks Shaili Hug

For finding it beautiful Big smile

Awww... Big smile

just love the duo to the T Day Dreaming... n so do u with ur siggies

Sabki pareshhani rahi hi aaj: like button

Holidays Dancing... wil wait for ur impressions Wink


Ohh youre always welcome love ! 
Par kis liye thanks ? What's beautiful is beautiful Heart
I love 'em too ! Oye ! Would love to make banners for your poems Big smile (IF you need 'em Tongue)
Arre chhaddo halidays ko ! Kal sunday hai. I can be up till late today.
Off to juggle b/w our "cricket-football-hockey team" ROFL and the poems !

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by _dkmystery_


meri himmat nahi hui, ye sab gutter minds hain ROFL

there, I told u, u r like Viraj Angry how dare u threaten me like this? Shocked
mera jawab Raghav k jaisa hai: dekenge *smirks* ROFL

u know how the code is supposed to be, once a member closes the popup it shouldn't come back, but IF was forcing us to like it... such idiots LOL


ROFL gutter minds ... what a term!!!!

Oye har baar to dhamki tere taraf se aati hai sis... to kaun hua Viraj???... TU Tongue

Aur Raghav ke paas sirf Siya ko dekhne ka waqt hai... *smirks* ROFL

Wahi to sochoon ye chal kya raha tha aaj LOL

ROFL just wait for a 'gud' raghav sia scene n then watch the gutter minds flow ROFL

abe, wo dhamki kaha deta hai. sirf I'm coming, I'll do this, I'll do that, why why why - yahi to karta rehta hai! n it is his 'team' who does the job.
just like how ur 'team' writes these awesome poems ROFLROFLROFL

warna wo fir muh phoola legi ROFL

still that 'like' isn't working!! ye IF k testers to bogus nikle yar ROFL

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam123_0

Ok reading your previous poem now.. one you wrote for Vandy's  bday... Very beautiful... I think you summed up Raghav-Sia story so far very nicely... I really loved these lines 
 

You did something that dear ones do...

Saw my soul and touched my heart;

And then it dawned upon me as time went by...

This wasn't the end but just the start.

 


Thanks Sam Hug...for making it a point to mention the lines which you liked ... n theres more coming on Raghavi... thi was just the initial phase..as in the theme being strangers.


Originally posted by sam123_0

Oh the Raghav-Krish peom... Thank you ... thank you so much... I always wanted one... I just love this relation... and your peom describes them beautifully!!!!
 
Lovely avis by the way... and love the way you use them in between ... my favorite are these words along with this avi... I have loved just loved this actual scene as well... Both HC and Yash had done a spendid job here!

When all desert me midway...

Serving me a mighty blow;

You lunge forward to cling on...

Never letting me go.


Love the duo myself... so had to give into Divs wish here even after i was speculating at first...
Glad you found the poem befitting the relationship they share...the Avis are credited to sidra2007, Tani91 and Ana... awesome work they come up with..That was a mind blowing scene there... with krish breaking his silence later n calling out to his chachu... cannot get that out of the mind... and thanks again for mentioning the lines

ye le Sam... Hug

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