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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 15)

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by khota_sikka_sri

I don't know what to highlight. The whole poem was so good. And the avis are lovely. Clap


Thanks Sri Hug

Well there wasn't much to highlight... LOL

What with me suffering from creative blank and time crunch. Confused

But somehow wanted to post it today for Vandy Di Embarrassed

I guess the Avis (credited to Lennie n Sidra2007)... did lovely job out there.
 
 
Oh no. Your whole poem is so great that each line just brings something new out. Big smile So now how do I highlight my favourite line? Wink

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by siddhi209

Beautiful writing once again, Sneha. Loved it. Perfect for RaghaVi and their relationship. And the avis too went well with it :) It sounds so simple and all, but has such deep meanings. Loved these lines:

 
You then looked into my eyes;
Even though I uttered none...
You could still hear my cries.
 
And loved the last lines too <3 But tbh, the entire poem was amazing.

 



Siddhi ur comments are like the pixie dust... magical Wink

Glad u liked the couplets and also mentioned the lines that you liked.

Thanks dear... Hug


Originally posted by arunima_LUIT

wow , lovely poem again  ...just perfectly sia's view pointSmile


Thanks Arunima  Hug

Glad u found it voice Sia's viewpoint... Big smile

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komal jagdesh

ohhh sneha...beautiful poem as alwaysHug



Thanks Komal for finding it beautiful... Hug


Originally posted by sarah_kelly

chechi how can u pour out words so beautifully!!!!!!!!!
everytime u make me go speechless!!!!!!!!!!
i wish to add a kala teeka so that kisi ki nazar na lag jayeEmbarrassed


Guess i should ask you the same when u come up with the awesome writeups Wink
Awww... Hug... Thanks Omane Big smile


Originally posted by khota_sikka_sri

 
Oh no. Your whole poem is so great that each line just brings something new out. Big smile So now how do I highlight my favourite line? Wink


Thanks for your comment Sri...Hug... but i'm LOL here remembering the way i managed to write the rough draft LOL ... fursat mein bataungi Wink

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Every poem ou yours is an epic, Sneha...i don't know which words to highlight because every line is so beautiful...i wonder how u manage to do it everytime...all i can say is Hug

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tweetie19

Every poem ou yours is an epic, Sneha...i don't know which words to highlight because every line is so beautiful...i wonder how u manage to do it everytime...all i can say is Hug


Awww Tweetie Hug ... thats a swell of a comment Big smile

Guess just as you do it with ur VMs Smile

Will be updating the next poem soon... rather in a few minutes Wink
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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Inner_Voice

Originally posted by tweetie19

Every poem ou yours is an epic, Sneha...i don't know which words to highlight because every line is so beautiful...i wonder how u manage to do it everytime...all i can say is Hug


Awww Tweetie Hug ... thats a swell of a comment Big smile

Guess just as you do it with ur VMs Smile

Will be updating the next poem soon... rather in a few minutes Wink
Yayyy...I'm eagerly waiting Day Dreaming

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
This fifth wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my Sis Divs Hug

Wish Penny put in by Divs  : Raghav-Krish relationship

Divs dear  Hug

I so so badly wanted to draw your penny at the end Evil Smile...
...What with ghostwriting and the Snape clapsLOL

But my own love for Krighav overpowered my resolve and here is your wish...
...Hope you like it Wink
And don't you send Voldemort this timeOuch... what why are you laughing???Confused... I mean it Stern Smile


The below art was created by my li'l sis  Shaili...
Its HER birthday and she gifts me this
and all I can say is
"Love you Sis"
 Hug






 Avis credited to: Tani91, Sidra2007 and Ana



In you I find my childhood...

And memories that I care;

Unfazed by all around us...

Is the bond that we share.

***



You ape my ways and replicate...

All the things I do;

World, my dear one, wouldn't be worth...

Even a dime without you.

***



Sometime you lend your ear...

And then sometimes your hand;

I wish to be your Genie and say...

"Your wish is my command ! "

***



You are my secret keeper...

And my best buddy too;

A hug from you is all I need...

When I'm down and blue.

***




Through eyes we speak volumes...

Not a blink goes misread;

The heart hears the voices...

The ones which go unsaid;

***



 

With you around I'm myself...

I need not pretend;

When in doubt or in pain...

My wounded heart you tend.

***



When all desert me midway...

Serving me a mighty blow;

You lunge forward to cling on...

Never letting me go.

***



We always bump our heads...

Be it any given day;

Our secret way of saying...

"With you I'll forever stay! "


**************


And I have to thanks Ana,  sidra2007 and  Tani91  here... for the wonderful avis they come up with... Clap...And also to my sis Shaili here who makes these wonderful siggies for the title...Clap...This goes out to you guys for adding that extra pixie dust  Hug


Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets Day Dreaming ... It will propel me to write further Wink




Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 20 August 2012 at 1:27pm

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
A.W.E.S.O.M.E...ClapClapClap
A beautiful write up for the most unique relation...just can't praise u enough Sneha...Clap just loved these lines...Embarrassed

When all desert me midway...

Serving me a mighty blow;

You lunge forward to cling on...

Never letting me go.

We always bump our heads...

Be it any given day;

Our secret way of saying...

"With you I'll forever stay! "

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