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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 12)

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by betty123


No no...all RaghaVi scene are so adorable ki if u ask me...i will want u to write a poem on all scene ROFL..

Will put my penny later Embarrassed


The first half of your comment I agree... they are so adorable... Day Dreaming ... No wonder Lalala land hamesha bhara rehta hai... LOL

With the second part of the comment ... u leave me Shocked ... LOL


Originally posted by betty123

Sneha cum bak soon..waiting for the pending poems.


I'm back Betty dear Hug... but guess the poems will have to wait a few days though... Still on with the disappearing act LOL

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by siddhi209

Your poems/writing is amazing Sneha. Beautiful.

 
The separation scene one was just superb. Every line matched with the scene. Just loved the last four lines <3
 
The recent jail scene one is also fantastic. Its beautiful, loved it a lot.
 
These lines:
 
"That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;

Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

Amazing, amazing, amazing. Just perfect for how Sia was feeling.
 
Fabulous and great work once again Sneha. Looking forward to reading more <3
 
And dont worry about the PMs, I'll eventually come here and read your poems and leave feedback. :) Its no problem at all :)


Thanks Siddhi Hug

For finding it a worthwhile read and  taking the time to comment.

Glad that you felt it depicted Siya's thoughts and also that you made it a point to mention the lines that did so for you.


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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam123_0

Sneha OHMIGOD!!! Its beautiful! The best part I liked was
 
As I walk away... from you tonight
I promise to put up... a valiant fight

 
You sure are talentedClap


Thanks Sam Hug

For finding it beautiful and mentioning the lines that you found worthwhile...it really feels good when someone mentions what actually touched them. Big smile

Originally posted by april10

Very  beautiful.  I feel it but can't even express the way you did 

Keep it up Sneha


Thanks Shivu Hug

For finding it worth the time you spend reading it... And if i may add... I love your comments... not only the ones to my threads but also to other threads... You do express your point with style... Proof: Ur comments on Episode feedbacks... they are bang on.Clap

Originally posted by Soaps1

Really nice ... you write beautifully 


Thanks Soaps Hug

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder... Wink .. Your comment does matter Big smile


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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarah_kelly

chechi!
i m so sowie for coming late to such a wonderful thread!!!Unhappy
anything u write is a treat to me!!!Hug


It ok Omane... i know ur busy with studies... Hug

Glad u liked the thread Big smile

Originally posted by sarah_kelly

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hope'

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

 these lines were just so awesome!!!!!!!Embarrassed
love ya loads chechi!!


Thanks for letting me know the lines u liked... and Love you loads too dear Hug
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by silky_harshad

Oye add my request in ur lambi wali list Wink
I wanna dedicate a poem to my toweliya Blushing so tu ek poem likh abt my "feelings" for him in not so shareef way ROFL


Silk Shocked... Oye toweliya Shocked

Toweliya in to Shareef writing out D'oh ROFL... Well all i can say is I'll try Wink

Originally posted by -vandy-

silkyROFL i second ur request...ROFL sneha i want a poem on our feelings for toweliya...
 
kaise we  get "koochie koochie hota hai feelings" for himROFL


Di app bhi Shocked ... Opps bhool gayi thi aap to lead kar rahi ho toweliya gang ko.D'ohROFL

 "koochie koochie hota hai feelings" Confused... hmmm... I'm putting the penny in but not sure of the outcome LOL

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
 Again , another wonderfully subtle poem by you SmileClap

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arunima_LUIT

 Again , another wonderfully subtle poem by you SmileClap


Thanks Arunima Hug
Your comments truly matter a lot dear Big smile

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged


This fourth wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of Vandy Di Hug

This comes as a Birthday Gift too... Jaldi mein likha hai so may not be that good... Sorry...

*Kaan Pakding*

Wish Penny put in by Vandy Di : Raghavi Relationship

Vandy Di  Hug

This is the first phase of the Raghavi relationship... The theme being "Strangers"

The Avis:
 First one credited to: Lennie
Second and Third one credited to: sidra2007





The first time I saw you...

I was engulfed by fear;

But then you lunge to save me...

Like a shining knight you appear.

 

You steer away the danger...

That held me in its grip;

And then the duel followed...

That made my heart beats skip.

 

Even when they took you...

You looked right back at me;

My fear filled eyes and welling tears...

Is all that you could see.

 

I was so wrong when I voiced...

A voice that went against you;

'Cause then I was unaware...

You had done what a very few would do.




 


A few days down the lane...

I saw you in a different light;

When I faltered on the path...

It was you who saw my plight.

 

Coming beside you offered help...

The one which I couldn't deny;

Steering me with you...

My death you did defy.

 

Grabbing me by my hand...

You then looked into my eyes;

Even though I uttered none...

You could still hear my cries.

 

Then it happened the other day...

When I was hounded by those men;

I lost hope and was seeking help...

And then I found you again.

 

You refused to help me out...

If my anger I repress;

Gathering all my might I then...

Let out my distress.

 




You did something that dear ones do...

Saw my soul and touched my heart;

And then it dawned upon me as time went by...

This wasn't the end but just the start.

 

You have been a stranger...

For all the times we met;

But then you are one of a kind...

A stranger I will never forget.


And I have to thanks Lennie and sidra2007  here, for the wonderful avis they come up with Clap


This couplet was a bit hurried one ...

Currently suffering from "creative blank" and "time crunch"...

But had to deliver it on Vandy Di's B'day...

Please do let me know your impressions on these couplets Day Dreaming





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