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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 (Page 10)

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Snow, how long have you been writing?

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Elysia

You. Leave. Me. Breathless.
 
Snow, I'm running out of praise here becaue I feel like I can't find anymore words to describe just how BEAUTIFUL your poems are. The one R smiling at S? My God... It made me sad... and yet... it made me smile Day Dreaming I love how your poems knock the air out of me. Every line is like a showstopper.


You. Leave. Me. Breathless.ToooHug

Its mutual admiration sweets... You and my couplets... Me and your write ups and comments. Wink

Awww Ana Hug love it when you mention the part which reached out to you... And your word my dear is always a lease of fresh air.


Originally posted by Elysia

Snow, how long have you been writing?


Writing as in Poems / Writeups?... Since my schooldays  Big smile


Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 13 August 2012 at 3:43am
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 5:00pm | IP Logged

Your poems/writing is amazing Sneha. Beautiful.

 
The separation scene one was just superb. Every line matched with the scene. Just loved the last four lines <3
 
The recent jail scene one is also fantastic. Its beautiful, loved it a lot.
 
These lines:
 
"That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;

Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

Amazing, amazing, amazing. Just perfect for how Sia was feeling.
 
Fabulous and great work once again Sneha. Looking forward to reading more <3
 
And dont worry about the PMs, I'll eventually come here and read your poems and leave feedback. :) Its no problem at all :)

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"

 
 
i just loved this line

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Sneha OHMIGOD!!! Its beautiful! The best part I liked was
 
As I walk away... from you tonight
I promise to put up... a valiant fight

 
You sure are talentedClap

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Very  beautiful.  I feel it but can't even express the way you did 

Keep it up Sneha

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
chechi!
i m so sowie for coming late to such a wonderful thread!!!Unhappy
anything u write is a treat to me!!!Hug

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged

Even while leaving,

You filled me with hopeā€¦

Till you are back with me,

I promise to fight back and cope.

 these lines were just so awesome!!!!!!!Embarrassed
love ya loads chechi!!

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