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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is the word help for the above poem is prepared keeping in mind a few of my friends who may find a want to know the meanings of a few words there...  if any other word in the poem is left out which needs to explained please do let me know.πŸ˜ƒ



Word Help

sutr dhaar= narrator;  

khyati = fame; 

aparampaar= seamless

Rushi Vyaas= a hermit who is supposed to have narrated the story of Ramayana to lord Ganesha who wrote it down.

vani= words; 

Sri Ganesh= a hindu deity; 

lekh= writing ;  

Tretayug= second era in the ages of mankind in Hindu religion; 

paatr= characters;  

daanav= demon; 

kukarm= misdeeds; 

vibhinn=varied;

atirek= surplus;

Kalyug= the fourt era  in the ages of mankind in Hindu religion..the current one which we are living in right now ;  

chall= cheating;

padh=feet;

raktpaath= filled with blood; 

kshanbhar= moments;

gyat= know; 

vichalit= shaken; 

shanka=doubt; 

abhaas= appearance; 

bhali bhanti= rightly and clearly; 

kuroop=horrible face;

antarmann=soul; 

banddhi=prisoner;

pirote= to string;

Saptapadi= the seven sacred steps taken around the holy fire in a Hindu marriage;

nr arth= devoid of meaning;

baandh=dam;

moh=endearment; 

asthitva= identity;

prarambh=start;

duvidha=problems;

prakat= reveal ; 

niyati=fate; 

palatne kaya= metamorphosis ;

  aashray= shelter; 

bhu= ground;

vyatha=pain; 

vruddhi=growth; 

aagman= arrival;

shadyantra= conspiracy;

nidarta= fearlessness;

vastr= clothes;

sheh=check;

maath= checkmate;

kapti= deceitful;

daanv= trick;

saar=gist;

uddhar= free

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That's all for now... πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 11 years ago
wah wah wah... mast likha sis πŸ€—
I think, school k baad 1st time itni sudh aur klisht hindi k darshan prapt hue hain mujhe πŸ˜ƒ

gr8 job by your 'team', now they deserve the weekend off.. plsss 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved these ones:

Yeh prashn yahan nahi rukta...

Yeh jata hai peedhiyon paar;

Har baar na Raghav aayenge...

Kintu honge Ravan hazaar.

 

Yaad rahe yeh sabko...

Samay ki chaun dhoop;

Har aurat mein base Siya...

Har aurat mein Kali ka roop.



n there should be a competition in your next hindi poem, 'boojho to jane' - no dictionary help will be given n the one who explains it first gets a date with . . . HC ofcourse 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


This sixth wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of Apz 

 

Wish Penny put in by Apz :Ram Sia Raavan Lanka comparative poem on RaghaVi's journey!


Omana penne 2.0   πŸ€—
I hope these lines were able to describe the gist of the comparative story...  and this time the poem is a bit too long... No avis here as yet but then I do have a

detailed word help in the immediate next post πŸ˜†

 

Kalyug ka Ramayan

 

Parichay mera  "Samay"...

Aapka sutr dhaar;

Le chaloon aapko...

Beete yugon ke paar.

 

Maana hai sadiyon se ise...

Jeevan ka aadhar;

Ramayan is katha ki...

Khyati aparampaar.

 

Rushi Vyaas ki vaani...

Sri Ganesh ka lekh;

Tretayug ki is katha ke...

Paatr the anek.

 

Siya Ram ke is Ramayan mein...

Daanav bhi tha ek;

Raavan ke kukarm the...

Vibhinn aur atirek.

 

Kuch yugon baad fir...

Wohi katha dohrayi;

Tretayug to beet chuka tha...

Kalyug ki baari aayi.

 

Bhagya ke chall ne jeevan ko...

Ek aisa tha mod diya;

Viraj ke roop mein mila pati...

Manmohit hui Siya.

 

Ghruha pravesh kar jab rakhe...

Komal padh piya ghar mein;

Kya pata tha hoga raktpaath...

Jeevan yunhi kshanbhar mein.

 

 Usi din gyat hua use...

Mann mein vichalit thi jo shanka;

Kal jis Ayodhya ka abhaas hua...

Bhali bhanti thi who Lanka.

 

Fir us daanav ne...

Apna tha kuroop dikhaya;

Viraj ke antarmann mein...

Chipa tha Raavan ka saya.

 

Din pratidin Siya wahan...

Banddhi bani roti rahi;

Atyachar sahti rahi who magar...

Umeed ke moti pirote rahi.

 

 Us daanav ne kuchle har sapne...

Fir har disha se loota;

Saptapadi ka har vachan...

Nir arth nikla jhoota.

 

Kabtak sahti chupchap woh...

Sabr ka baandh fir toota;

Tyag diya is bandhan ko...

Jab jeevan ka moh choota.

 

Mukt kar swayam ko...

Ja pohonchi Ayodhya Siya;

Lekar ek naya asthitva...

Punah jeevan ka prarambh kiya.

 

Is Ayodhya nagari mein...

Praja leti jinka naam;

Nirbal ka bal bane ladte...

Is katha ke Raghav Ram.

 

Jab Siya ne har pal swayam ko...

Atyanth duvidha mein paya;

Raghupati Raghav prakat hue...

Niyati ki palatne kaya.

 

Raghav ke aashray mein Siya ka...

Dukhit mann shant soya;

Fir bhagya ne samay ke bhu mein...

Vyatha ka ek beej boya.

 

Is beej ki aisi vruddhi...

Viraj ke aagman se hui;

Fir us daanav ne rache...

Siya ko pane shadyantra kayi.

 

Raghav ke sang Siya ne...

Nidarta ka vastr ab odh liya;

Viraj ke har sheh ko usne...

Maath ke rukh mein mod diya.

 

Par yeh daanav bhi kapti hai...

Har baar badalta mukh anek;

Paane apne Siya ko sadaiva...

Daanv fekha usne ek.

 

Ab yeh to kaal hi batayega...

Hoga kya is katha ka saar;

Vinaash kar Viraj ka...

Kya hoga Siya ka uddhar???

 

Yeh prashn yahan nahi rukta...

Yeh jata hai peedhiyon paar;

Har baar na Raghav aayenge...

Kintu honge Ravan hazaar.

 

Yaad rahe yeh sabko...

Samay ki chaun dhoop;

Har aurat mein base Siya...

Har aurat mein Kali ka roop.

*******

I know this poem is a way too long and out and out in Hindi... But i couldnt bring myself to write this poem in English... but then I have the word help for those of you who may find a few words confusing.

Please leave your impressions after you read it... It would surely make my day

this is a beauty sneha⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
and thanx for the glossary
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

wah wah wah... mast likha sis πŸ€—
I think, school k baad 1st time itni sudh aur klisht hindi k darshan prapt hue hain mujhe πŸ˜ƒ

gr8 job by your 'team', now they deserve the weekend off.. plsss 🀣



Aaja Jhappi Pa le...πŸ€—

🀣🀣...Mahavidhyalay (college) ke baad shayad maine bhi ab jaakar pauranik hindi mein kavita likhi hai 🀣🀣🀣

Sis tu kabhi sudhregi nahi ...sudharna bhi matt!!!!...

Main soch rahi thi agli poem teri wish ho...Siya Krish wali...but since "the team" is on leave as per ur wish... u'll have to wait!!!πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜†

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

loved these ones:

Yeh prashn yahan nahi rukta...

Yeh jata hai peedhiyon paar;

Har baar na Raghav aayenge...

Kintu honge Ravan hazaar.

 

Yaad rahe yeh sabko...

Samay ki chaun dhoop;

Har aurat mein base Siya...

Har aurat mein Kali ka roop.



n there should be a competition in your next hindi poem, 'boojho to jane' - no dictionary help will be given n the one who explains it first gets a date with . . . HC ofcourse 🀣



Glad you loved those lines... My personal favorites too πŸ˜†...yeh lo...fir se same same πŸ˜†

Idea bura nahi hai πŸ˜†... that "boojho to  jane" made me go 🀣

Oye date with HC 😲... to fir to main hi glossary na likhun??? 🀣🀣
Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
awesum work, nd as usual sara hua dimag se itna acha poem bahar aya hain...πŸ‘πŸ€£
praise HC/RAGHAV 4 dat...πŸ˜›πŸ€£
hainn, koi shayar, to koi shikari, RAGHAV ne sabko kya kya nahi banaya hain..🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW Sneha di πŸ€— I'm just at loss of words in praise of ur poetic excellence...πŸ‘πŸ‘

Every word, every sentence has so much indepth meaning in it...i couldn't quote the words which touched me the most coz the whole poem is so beautifully written...i really wish i had ur talents πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: -vandy-

this is a beauty sneha⭐️



Thanks Di πŸ€—... A four star!!!! ... ok now i'm like πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: -vandy-

and thanx for the glossary



You are welcome Di... πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 11 years ago