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Your poems/writing is amazing Sneha. Beautiful.
The separation scene one was just superb. Every line matched with the scene. Just loved the last four lines <3
The recent jail scene one is also fantastic. Its beautiful, loved it a lot.
These lines:
"That's when you... scorn at me,
Concluding that... with fear I flee;
Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"
Concluding that... with fear I flee;
Hurt fills my heart... right then,
How can you sound... like the other men;"
Amazing, amazing, amazing. Just perfect for how Sia was feeling.
Fabulous and great work once again Sneha. Looking forward to reading more <3
And dont worry about the PMs, I'll eventually come here and read your poems and leave feedback. :) Its no problem at all :)
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