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**The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well** NOTE: on pg 33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear Friends๐Ÿค—

This thread is a try to fulfill the requests on RaSiKri related poems and couplets.

I shall, as and when the time permits, try to write on these requests... Hope the read is worthwhile.

***Love you Betty, for the suggestion to post this as a new thread ๐Ÿค—

***Love you Shaili, for the suggestion to title the couplets
๐Ÿค—



The RaSiKri Poems Wishing Well


 
(1) Vandy Di : Raghavi Relationship ( completed the 1st phase)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330?pn=12


(2) Sun : Raghavi separation scene ( completed)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330?pn=5


(3) Betty  : Raghavi Hug n Kiss (completed)
  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330



(4) Sun and Athira : Raghavi scene where Raghav smiles and gazes at her in jail while she is blabbering (completed)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330?pn=7



(5) Apz :Ram Sia Raavan Lanka comparative poem on RaghaVi's journey!   (completed )
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330?pn=25


(6) Sri : Raghav's journey from his entry to today
(Now that's a swell for a poem but will try Sri dear๐Ÿ˜‰)



(7) Divs  : Raghav-Krish relationship (completed)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330?pn=15

(8) Divs  : Siya-Krish relationship (completed)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3135330?pn=33

(9) Divs  : Raghav-Siya-Krish relationship

(I know Sis, U doubt whether it's me or some ghostwriters writing these couplets... And just because you doubt...
 I guess i'll draw your other two pennies at the end
  ๐Ÿ˜›)



(10) Silk and Vandy Di  : " Wanna dedicate a poem to my toweliya โ˜บ๏ธ abt my "feelings" for him in not so shareef way"... now thats what my dear friend Silk says

 and she's seconded by none other than Vandy Di here :
a poem on our feelings for toweliya...kaise we  get "koochie koochie hota hai feelings" for h
im.

(All I can say here is ๐Ÿ˜ฒ, doston ke liye paapad to belne padte hain yeh suna tha
... par un paapadon ke types ka andaaza nahi tha ๐Ÿ˜† 

...however will surely try ๐Ÿ˜‰
)



11) Gayu  : Raghavi journey like a fairy tale! Jahnvi - the princess, Raghav - the hero and Viraj - the devilish  demon

(Will surely try Gayu ๐Ÿ˜‰)


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Please do leave your impressions... It works wonders... And propels me to write further๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 11 years ago


This first wish to be drawn out of the wishing well is that of my friend Betty ๐Ÿค—

Wish Penny put in by Betty  : Raghavi Hug n Kiss

Betty dear ๐Ÿค—
This is more like a conversation between Siya and Raghav... well there's a long time before we see this happen on screen though...๐Ÿ˜†

Tab tak isi se kaam chala lo... ๐Ÿ˜

"A warm hug is all I need;
Raghav, my love, are you paying heed?"

"I just want to hold you close,
Just like a dew on a blossomed rose..."


To this he said "Yes my love;
My prayers are heard by the One above..."

"I'll hold you close and kiss some more,
All my love into your soul I pour..."
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum idea...dis thread shud rock..
Sneha, main hoo tere sang..๐Ÿฅณ
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This content was originally posted by: harshu.sundas

awesum idea...dis thread shud rock..

Sneha, main hoo tere sang..๐Ÿฅณ



Thanks for Ur wishes Sun dear ๐Ÿค—

Wah kya behenchara hai ๐Ÿ˜†... Nazar na lage... Touchwood๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sneha๐Ÿค—

This was very much needed. This wasnt my idea it was urs๐Ÿ˜ณ...

Thanx a lott for writting on my wish first...

The poem is beautiful dear. I m back to my LALaLa land๐Ÿ˜.

Edited by betty123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
๐Ÿฅณ i want a poem on the Ram Sia Raavan Lanka comparative poem on RaghaVi's kourney!๐Ÿ˜
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This content was originally posted by: betty123

Sneha๐Ÿค—

This was very much needed. This wasnt my idea it was urs๐Ÿ˜ณ...

Thanx a lott for writting on my wish first...

The poem is beautiful dear. I m back to my LALaLa land๐Ÿ˜.



Thanks Betty dear ๐Ÿค—

OK the idea was the result of the continues PMs that went to and fro from me to you n vice versa...

There goes mutual admiration again ๐Ÿ˜†

Well i just drew the wish penny and Lo ... It was yours... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Glad u liked it and now stop wandering in the LaLaLa land... U have been doing it since i last Pmed u the lines... ๐Ÿ˜†

"Bettyy... Betty" *call out loud n clear*... "uimaaa yeh ladki kahan kho gayi" ... *searches for her for a while then leaves leaving a message on one of the tree out there*...

 Jab LaLaLa land ki sair poori ho jaye to PM kar dena... ๐Ÿ˜†



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Posted: 11 years ago
Sneha u need to work harder...u gt one more request from Apz.๐Ÿ˜†Edited by betty123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i dont hav any jaldi...first commitments poori karo...then mine!all the best for the thread chechi๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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This content was originally posted by: betty123

Sneha u need to work harder...u gt one more rewuest from Apz.๐Ÿ˜†



Well thats another wish penny in the well there... just hope n pray that i'm on track... warna ๐Ÿ˜†

This content was originally posted by: ..Apz..

i dont hav any jaldi...first commitments poori karo...then mine!all the best for the thread chechi๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ



Thats like my Dear Apz ๐Ÿค—... Thanks for understanding ur Chechi ๐Ÿ˜‰

No Wonder I call u Omana Penne version 2.0 ๐Ÿ˜†