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FF: The Thing called Love- Part 23-PG 114 (Page 113)

sushfiza IF-Sizzlerz

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missing ur update

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still waiting
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Extremely sorry guys for not updating this FF, will try and do it today..please give me some time.

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sushfiza IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by noddiye

Extremely sorry guys for not updating this FF, will try and do it today..please give me some time.

hey dear...i m vry happy today...its a surprise...
u update soon
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As the dance ended Ram slid to the corner rejoicing over the fact that he had managed to achieve what he set out too...

Waiter: Sir..there is a message for you to meet a lady at the lawns immediately...

Ram nodded at the waiter...He glanced at the hall confirming that Priya was not present in the room...Thats what his cue, his signal that his plan had worked. He rushed outside...a wave of triumph running through him...

He reached the open lawns...Priya was no where to be seen...She must be on her way..thought Ram...
Ram closed his eyes...he was sure Priya would tell him to get married right away, he knew she loved him and wanted to get married...

Ram, I love you lets get married...

Ram was delighted to hear the words...He opened his eyes ...finally...finally he had got what he wanted...admission from Priya herself...

Ram turned around: I knew you would say this...Ram's words froze completely in his throat at the picture before him...Too stunned to react he just stood motionless looking at the figure before him...

To be Continued

Part 23

Ram saw a Anvita looking at him with a shy smile on his face..He gulped some air as he felt a drop of sweat trickle through his sidelocks..

Ram: Anvita..I am sorry..i was expecting someone else..This was not for you..

Anvita: Ram but you just proposed to me when in there..What was that all about..You said i am the most beautiful woman you have seen in the entire world..

Ram scratched his jaw slightly , had he really said that..Shit this was a major mess..The icing on the cake was that Anvita was Major Sengupta's daughter..he would be so livid with him..

Ram: Anvita, i am so sorry but i don't remember saying that to you...I mean you are beautiful but i am in love with someone else...I cannot marry you...

Anvita looked heart broken..Then why did you lead me to believe that you were interested in me, why did you give me so much attention? If you love someone else you should be with that person, marry that person and not go flirting around..

Ram: Anvita i can explain on that..i can explain everything..but please don't be upset..It was not my intention to hurt you...its just i am trying to get someone else to ..never mind...I am so so sorry...Please tell me how can i make it up to you?

Anvita: I want you to call my dad..he is over there..

Ram: Anvita...please don't involve Major Sengupta in this..he would kill me..
Anvita stared at Ram..he could do nothing but do as told..He went in the direction where Anvita had pointed..I ll die even before i have my engagement thought Ram..He kicked himself mentally..what was the need of doing this, how smart he thought himself to be and what had he done..Major Sengupta would strangulate him he thought...

He stood where he thought Major Sengupta was standing..Just a few more breaths and you will be dead Ram...He wished he could see Priya once..just tell her how lovely she tell her ...
Major Sengupta had his back to Ram...

Major Sengupta: Ram, what is this that i am hearing?
Ram: Sir, i am extremely sorry ..i swear i did not say all those things to Anvita..i was just playing around with Priya..i had no intention to hurt Anvita..

Major Sengupta: I need you to leave right now Kapoor..leave the camp right now..
Ram: But Sir...Ram stopped mid sentence..he could not oppose his superior..
Ram: Can i see Priya once Sir?

Major Sengupta: hurt her more?

Ram closed his eyes: No tell her that from the moment she came into my life my world has turned upside tell her that she is the reason for my happiness, she is the first ray of sunlight that falls on earth, the rainbow of my life, the song that my heart sings, that i want to marry her, be with her every moment of my life, she is everything to me sir...if i die

Ram felt a finger on his lips

Priya: Raaam...don't say that ..Ram looked in surprise at Priya standing before him..

The dimmed light only enhanced her beauty...Ram watched amazed as she bent down on one knee and held his hand...

Priya: In my entire life i never thought i would fall in love this way...that loving you would become as important as the breaths i take..that looking at you would be the only things my eyes do, that every time i see you my heart flutters, that you are the most important person in my life...I thought it matters who says it and where we say it but right now i just realized..the only thing that matters is you..
Priya entwined her fingers into Ram's...this space between my fingers was just meant to be filled by you...You made me happier than i ever thought i could be and if you will let me, i would like to spend my entire life making you feel the same way...
I love you Ram will you marry me...

Ram lifted Priya up...he had heard the most beautiful proposal ever and from the most beautiful woman he had ever met...

Ram: It will be an honour be your life partner...Ram wanted to say a lot more but the words just stuck in his mouth...He just spread his arms and pulled Priya in an embrace..It felt so good to have her..

The sound of claps made them look around...The entire camp had descended to witness their love..Ram let Priya go but held on to her hand and walked her towards Anvita...

Ram: I am again sorry Anvita..this is the woman i love and i just can't think of any one else..Please forgive me...

Anvita's smile spread out in a smile...She looked at Aditya at her side..Don't worry Ram..i have got own soldier...Ram looked in amazement at Aditya and then at Anvita...he was happy for them...Major Sengupta was standing there too..

Ram: Sir i am so...Ram stopped as he was suddenly struck with something..How did Major Sengupta know what had happened inside the ballroom...he looked at him, Anvita and Aditya and lastly to Priya..who rolled her tongue inside her cheek...The others burst out laughing...

Major Sengupta: You have to be habituatuted to this check mate now would be wife is a RAW agent..there will be no lack of drama in your life...

Ram: That is true sir but you see Miss Raw agent proposed so technically i won the game and winked at Priya who winked back...

Ram and Priya were married soon and the entire camp celebrated the joyous occasion..Aditya got engaged to Anvita and was planning to marry soon...
After 8 months of matrimonial bliss and Ram and Priya were ready to welcome their own little soldier completing their circle of love...


Thank you guys for liking this FF and urging me to complete it...Extremely sorry to have left it in between.. I hope you like the last part as well


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leena04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Part 23
OMG what an update i just loved it completly but why u ended in 1 update Neha di i was expecting more i was so in love with this FF but enjoyed the whole update RaYa married & got their love's sign too awesome... di i want another FF from u plz plz do write next just like this FF plzzz di pllzzz don't avoid it plz write na ...
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it was nice one end was good

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