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Broken hearts...KR SS (Page 12)

GayatriJethani Goldie
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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged
awesome update...
bit confusing to...
swayam belongs to ny... that was shock for me to Shocked
who is angel..???
and kittu is kriya or not..
but how come her surname changed...??
and did swayam knew abt kriya ...
really confusing..
hope it get clear in nex part
update soon
thnx for pm

rock_ruvi Goldie
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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
awesome update
sreya19roy Goldie
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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Angel, kittu??? kya ho raha hai yahan??? Confused

Nice update...bt bohot chotu sa tha, next time bada wala chahiye Smile

Thanx for the pm BTW Smile
Eyesfriendly Senior Member
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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
loved it..
ArShaAngels IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
awesome updte..
sorry late comment karne ke liye...
mujhe pm hi nahi mila tha...
but it was really gud...
updte soon
kriyansh19 Senior Member
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Nice concept ..!
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
A bit confuse bt update soon ..!
N pm me wen u update next ..!
tanu_arsha Senior Member
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Chapter 2

Swayam - but what..???

Angel - aap khud hi  jaake dekh lo..

She said n left with her friend. Swayam went up and knock the door

*no response*

Swayam - kits dekh chup chaap se darvaaza khol..!!!

Swayam - dekh ab agar main kholunga na toh bahut peetunga tujhe main

Swaym - kits Angry

A girl dressed up in a cute pair of pajama's open d door.

Kits - kya hai..???

she said aggresively..!!!

Swayam pulled her inside and locked the door.

Kits - abe oye kya kar raha hai tu..???

she said in a shock..!! Shocked

Swayam - kahan chali gayi thi Angry

anger clearly visible in his voice

Yahan aana tha toh bata ke nahi aa sakti thi..!!! dumbo idiot fool...!!!!

He again said getting hell mad..!!!

Kits - s..sorry..!

Swayam - what sorry han..??? mujhe bhi nahi bataaya. apne sam ko bhi bataane ki zarurat nahi samjhi na tune. wahan toh mana kar diya aur kaha ki aise behave karun dat i dont even noe u. why??? apni maasi se itna pyaar karti hai han? itna ki unki wajah se mujhe bhi chodke chali gayi..!!!!

he shouted on her and she just hugged him and cried a lot..

Kits - im soo sorry sam but wo promise. i have to leave all. im sorry please maaf kardo na. pakka i wont do it again. i promise. sorry..!!

Swayam patted her head.

Swayam - its kk. and ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai haan? kuch khaati bhi hai ya nahi tu Shocked

Kits - khaati hun na

Swayam - kya..?

Kits - mom ki daant LOL

Swayam - Angry

Kits - woops

Swayam - chal chup cchaap..

Kits - kahan??? Confused

Swayam - lunch karne

Kits - aye u reserved haan

Swayam - chup baith. meri taraf se treat samajh le

Kits - kis baat ki treat

Swayam - tu chal chup chaap
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Finish..!!!!

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rubykriyansh Senior Member
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Its really cute ..!

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