Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

OS: roka revelation to maanvi, UPDATED PG 3 (Page 3)

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Thankyou for the feedback everybody. I wasnt planning on updating further, but maybe another shot soon. XX
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Continuation of the last part.

Maanvi was escorted to the veranda by Viren and Jeevika. She was in formalish attire- ( NOT THE ROKA ATTIRE)

Virat couldn't resist it. He rushed up to her and hugged her and whispered:
 Partner, our love did it! We did it!
Maanvi couldn't stop smiling. With that Viren had to signal Virat to end the hug, who was completely lost in the beauty of the moment.
Virat: Maanvi, waisay tum bohat pyaari lag rahi ho.
Jeevika: Haina Virat, maanvi kitni pyaari lag rahi hai. Magar aaj who tumhare liye nahin, meray liye tayyar hui hai. But don't worry, I'm sure rokay par who is se bhi zyaada achi lage gi.
Dada ji: Maanvi beta, welcome to our family. Humaari khush naseebi hogi ke tum jaisi larki humaare khaandan mein aye. Jub tumhari dosti nai virat ko itna badal diya, shaadi ke baad to virat ek dum perfect ho jaye ga.
Maanvi took Dada ji's ahirwaad.
Jeevika: Mannu! Chalo ab hum ek doosre ko rakhi baandhe.
Maanvi and Jeevika tied each other their Rakhis.
Jeevika pointing to Virat: Mannu,  iss se behtar gift tho mein ne aaj tak tujhe nahin diya.
Maanvi smiled.
Mannu: Di, ab aap ko tho aap ka life partner mil gaya hai. Iss liye mein aap ke liye who toh laa nahin sakti. Toh aap ka gift ye raha.
Jeevika opened the gift. It was a book about pregnancy and motherhood.
Maanvi: Dii! Ab mein ne aap ko raksha karne ki zimmedari li hai toh baby ki raksha bhi toh iss mein aati hai. Iss liye, aap ye book parho, aur apna aur baby ka khayaal rakhna seekho.
With that everyone headed for dinner.
Viren was sitting next to Jeevika, whilst Virat and Maanvi didn't get an opportunity to do so. Infact, Virat and Maanvi couldn't even see each other properly because Viren and Jeevika were sitting in between them.
During dinner everyone was busy in their sub conversations.
Viren whispered to Jeevika: Tumhe aise khush dekh kar bohat acha lagta hai. Ab tum aur koi tension nahin lo gi. Tumhe rona bund karna ho ga. I want a promise.
Jeevika: Aap ne jo in donon ke liye kiya hai, mein aap se koi bhi promise kar sakti hoon. Thankyou Viren ji.
Viren: Yaar, you need to stop thanking me. You're going to give birth to my child. Uss hisab se toh mein zindagi bhar tumhe thankyou bolta rahoon ga. Aur ab baatein bund karo, aur khana khao. The baby needs it.
The Vadheras were going to stay for another day. The roka was supposed to be the next night and they were to leave the morning after.
After dinner, everyone was headed to their rooms.
Jeevika was to sleep in Maanvi's room. Viren with Virat. Swamini bua with Vanshika. Inder with kaadambri and Dada ji with Shlok.
Virat was literally staring and smiling at Maanvi the entire time. On one hand, he couldn't get over the fact his dream was finally coming true. On the other, the inability to have a private moment with Maanvi was killing him.
Viren hugged Jeevika: Jeevika, I know tum bohat excited ho magar take some rest. Kal tum rokay ki tayyariyon mein busy ho gi and I don't want you feeling exhausted. Hum chandigarh jaate hi gynecologist se appointment le lenge.
He kissed her on the forehead, and wished her a good night.
Virat was looking at them from a distance, and was jealous he and maanvi had to be so proper in front of their families.
So he headed to his room and called Maanvi, who was in her room. (They were both on separate floors)
Virat: Hello Partner! Yaar tumhe kitna sharmana par raha hai. Sub tumhe aake pyaar kar rahe hain, aur ek mein hi hoon jis ko tum se itna distance rakhna par raha hai. Yaar is sub ke pheeche logic kya hai. Ek dafa rokay se pehle milna tho banta hai yaar.
Maanvi: Virat! Tum kitne excited ho rahe ho. Such mein chep hi ho.
Virat: Oye! Tum excited nahin ho kya! Aur apne hone wale pati ko koi chep bulata hai kya.
Maanvi: Toh kya Didi ki tarah tumhein Virat ji bulaaon.
Jeevika now entered her room and Viren had gone upstairs.
Jeevika quietly eavesdropped on their conversation and so did Viren.
Virat: Zyaada sharmeeli type mut bano! Tumhe suit nahin karta.
Maanvi: Acha Virat ji. Aap jaisa kahein.  (laughed) Aur tum please koi scene mut create karo. Phone to hai hee hai, aur phir rokay mein hum ek doosre ke saath hi toh bhetein gay.
Virat: But mein ne tumhein sahi se congratulate nahin kya hai.
With that Viren coughed in order to hint his presence to Virat.
Virat: Maanvi, tum khans kyun rahi ho! Tum side effects ki medicines nahin le rahi!
Maanvi: Mein kahan khaansi?
Virat: Toh phir ye kaun hai?
He turned to see Viren standing there. And Maanvi turned to see Jeevika standing there.
They both immediately shut the phone.
Virat: Bhai! Aap yahaan kaise..
Viren: Humein room share karna hai.. Is liye apne romantic phone calls ko'
With that both the brothers laughed and decided to go to sleep.
At the same time:
Maanvi: (not making eye contact) DII! Bohat raat ho gayi hai, so jaate hain.
Jeevika: (laughing) Mannu! Mujh se sharmaane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Apni dawaai le aur chal so ne.

Waiting for your feedback.. next part will be high on Virika and Virman.

Edited by rrk401 - 08 August 2012 at 4:25am

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
aww so cute...i'm sp happy u updated quickly :) thnx for the pm!!
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged
aww dat wass so cutee..do continue n pm me..
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:23am | IP Logged

A very 'sharmili' type update!
PM me once you continue! :)
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The Sharmili Mannu is always a treat :D
Pm me when u update :D

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