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Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

OS: roka revelation to maanvi, UPDATED PG 3

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
hey everybody, I cant wait for the roka. JeeMan moments, Viren Maanvi moments, VirMan moments, brotherly bonding and happiness at last. Here's my take. Hope you enjoy it.This is my first shot at writing about ehmmbh. So, please do tell me if you like it.

The Vadheras reach rishikesh. The Chaudhrys are shocked upon their arrival. Manvi was in her room whilst everyone else was sitting in the veranda.

Beeji: Aaap log yahan kaisay.

Everyone looked happy so Beeji did get a hint.

Dada ji: Behen ji, hum yahaan ek boht hi shub afsar ke liye aaye hain. Subah ka bhoola agar sham go ghar aa jaye to usse bhoola nahin kehte. Umeed hai ke aap hamare pichle bartaav ko peeche chor , humaare parivaar ko aap ke parivaar se ek naya rishta jor ne ki ijaazat denge.

Beeji started smiling. So did the rest of the Chaudrys. Everyone was ecstatic.

Virat: Woh manvi nazar nahin aa rahee biji? Apne kamre mein ho gi! Mein usse bula kar lata hoon.

Viren: Virat ye tu kya kar raha hai. Jab relation official ho jata hai toh us ke kuch disadvantages bhi hote hain bhai. Aise ek doosre ke room mein jaana band.

Everyone laughed.

Jeevika: Mein maanvi ko bula kar laati hoon. Ussay ye kush khabri mein dena chahti hoon.

With that Jeevika went to Manvi's room and all everyone else was seated in the Veranda. Dada ji and Beeji talked about the proceedings and details of the matter.

Jeevika entered Maanvi's room, Manvi was lying down on her bed, her head facing the other side:
Manvi suddenly heard Jeevika's voice:

HAPPY RAKSHA BANDHAN!

Maanvi jumped with joy on hearing her DI's voice: Diii! Aap yahaan kaise.

Jeevika: mannu, raksha bandhan par humein kabhi koi dur kar saka hai kya!!

Maanvi hugged Jeevika: Di, mein kab se hope kar rahi thik ke aap kisi tara aa jao, aap ne jo raakhi bheji hai who bhi mein ne nahin bandhwaayee.  waisay aap ke saath jeeju aayein hai na? Mein unn ko bhi raakhi baandhoon gi.

Jeevika: Haan mannu, Viren ji neeche hain. Tu ek kaam kar, ache se kapre pehn kar neeche aa ja. Thoray formal kapde pehn na theek hai.

Maanvi: DI, formal kyun?

Jeevika: Who ek khush khabri batani hai tumhe!

Maanvi: DI, ye kya khush khabri par khush khabri? Ohh, aap ke twins tho nahin hone waale? Grand announcement karne waali ho?

Jeevika: Mannuuu! Tu bhi na.. Twins ka abhi thodi pata chalta.. Aur who sub chor..Khush khabri tere bare mein hai! Koi aur bhi bohat special aaya hai, celebrations ke liye, lekin who tujh se rakhi tho definitely nahin bandhwaaye ga.

Maanvi: DI, kya, Woh!!! woh kaise aa sakta hai? Hum ghar waalon ke approval ka wait.. DIII!
EK MINUTEE!
Daada ji aur Swamini bua maan gaye.. Issliye tho aap yahaan khari ho.. Aap sab mere aur Virat...

Maanvi got shy.
With that both the sisters hugged each other tightly. They almost had tears in her eyes.

Jeevika: haan mannu, tum dono ke ek doosre ki zindagi mein ehmiyat sub ko samajh aa gayi hai.. Sub neeche aayein hai.. Apne hone wane susraal ke saamne night suit mein jaaye gi? Jaldi tayyar ho ja.
 
In the veranda:

Virat whispered to Viren: Bhaii.. zara dekh kar ao na itni der kyun lag rahi hai.. Who bhaabi aur maanvi ne apna melodrama..

Viren stared at Virat for using the word melodrama.. Virat continued..

I mean apne emotional  heart to hearts shuru kar diye hogein.. Aap pls jao na.. Agar aap nahin jaa kar un ko jaldi jaa rahe tho mein bhaag kar kamre mein jaa raha hoon.. return of the rebel virat.

Viren laughed: jaa raha hoon mere bhai.. Waisay bhi mujhe maanvi se baat karni hai. Aur agar rebel virat waapis aaya na tho tu maar khaye ga.
 
Viren entered Maanvi's room, Maanvi was all dressed up now.

Maanvi ran to Viren in excitement, she hugged him.

Viren: Jeevika! Maanvi har rakhi par itni excited hoti hai.

Jeevika: Viren ji, aaj sirf raakhi ki khushi thodi hai.

Viren: kyun Maanvi, aur kya hai.. (Viren trying to bug Maanvi)

Maanvi: Jeejuu, aap bhi na.( Maanvi getting all shy)

Viren: But Maanvi,seriously, Congratulations! Mein tumhe bata nahin sakta ke mein tum dono ke liye kitna khush hoon. Tum ne Virat ki zindagi track par laa di aur uss ke support ke bina shaayad tumhari beemari tumhare liye aur mushkil ho jaatee. Tum dono ek doosre ke liye banay ho. Aur yaad rakhna, uss ghar mein tumhe koi bhi pareshaani ho, tho mein tumhare saath hoon. Udhar ke tor tareeqay alag hain. Aur tumhare saath sirf Jeevika hi nahin, mein bhi hoon.

Maanvi: Thankyou Jeeju, aap ke support ke bina shaayad Di aaj hamare rishte ke khilaf hotee. Aur phir mein is rishte ke saath aage nahin barh paati. Aap ne jis tarah mujhe or virat ko har qadam par help kiya hai, mujhe samajh nahin aati mein aap ko thankyou kaise kahoon.

Viren: Thankyou ki koi zarrorat nahin hain stupid! Aur ek aur baat, woh virat agar phir se tumhein zyaada chiraye, toh mein tumharee side par hoon. Us ka kaan khechne ke liye mujhe bula lena. Aur please abhi neeche chalo, us se aur intezaar nahin ho raha.


Edited by rrk401 - 08 August 2012 at 4:13am

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
nice update dear
Really very well writen
Cont Soon Smile

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good one

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Superb...wants to see in this way...thanks a lot

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Good attempt:)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:50am | IP Logged
i like it..Smile

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Just watched the e24 segment. Manvi is in her nightsuit and Jeevika is surprising her :P Hahaha, lets hope they show everyone else bonding too.
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Lovely OS! Do continue and PM me once you do! :)

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