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Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

OS: She Remembered

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
Something quick I wrote. Its a little sad.
Feed back would be appreciated :)

It had been three years. Three years since he told her that she was a wh**e. Three  years since he told her that he was glad her parents were dead. Three years since he told her he hated her. Three years since she had looked into his eyes and, for the first time, only saw hate.

Three years is a long time. But not long enough. Because some days remembered when his chocolate brown eyes softened, slight wrinkles creasing the corners. She still remembered the days where he held her hand under the table. She still remembered the days when he would tuck her hair behind her ears. The days where he came up from behind and pulled her into a hug. The days where he would softly trace his tongue on her lips. The days where he would spend hours stroking her body with those hands. The days when he would laugh with her. She remembered when he told her that he loved her. Told her that he needed her. Told her that she made him feel happy. Told her that she made him alive.

And those were the days where the tears threatened. She had never cried, not when he belittled her, not when she left. Not when she didn't have a place to live or anyone to call her own. She never cried. Not for her family, which had rejected her, blamed her, humiliated her, not for her sister and her nieces that she would never see. Not for the family that she would never have and not for her parents. She never cried anymore. Not for them.

But sometimes the tears would threaten for him. Only for him. They would threaten because she missed those eyes, his hands, his tongue, his love, his need,  his happiness, his life. But when those tears threatened she reminded herself that the man she loved could no longer be alive. He was surely dead. Just as she was.




Edited by Rhea- - 06 August 2012 at 7:03pm

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Looove it
Interestinggg

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
amazing OS * clapping *
continue soon.,...

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Really Liked it.
Its a bit introspective and quite sad. but a new writing style.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
It was sad but well written!
loved it...

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Loved it <3 beautifully written :D

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
awsome..well written

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
well written!! plz can u continue??? n dis tym can u present arnavs point of view too?? lykd ur style!!

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