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ArHi FF: Can You Forget The Past...#4 Th5 Link Pg1 (Page 42)

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Very well written. I like how you are still making Khushi think it all out rather than just flowing in the emotions and her subconscious decision to go ahead with Akash's advice is commendable but not foolish because she is reflecting on all of it by the side too. Great job.

And Arnav's character is being developed very well too...the insecurities, the self disgust, the will to tell her the truth, the realization of what it could mean was brought out quite nicely.

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
awesome update
khushi being the witness to arnav's pain
glad they talked about that incident
they can't be forever running away
and khushi trying to calm arnav is so sweet
and arnav's confession is so emotional


Edited by velangini - 15 August 2012 at 4:42am

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
loved it. 

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:39am | IP Logged
awww... the update was lovellyyy... <3<3 it was just perfect <3<3

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Phew they spoke abt past
Hop nw all thgs will get better

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Wow!!!...dat was tooo gud...

Dont hav more words to say...i had d entire story replaying in my mind while I was reading dis one...

Keep up d excellent work shradds...

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
lovely update...glad tat he said everything...and the way khushi behaved in the morning...

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