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PART 4
 
recap:  the friends were in 12th standard armaan and mayank basket ball match and there fight with a person misbehaving with riddhima

Then they all studying for there board exams

armaan and riddhima had a bet on who is going to get more marks and

riddhima have to arrange a date for armaan if she get less marks then armaan 

 

The exams finally over , and all six just managed there exams ,

Today is there SCHOOL FAREWELL PARTY

 

Everyone was dressed formally,

Girls wearing a sari and Boys wearing a suit

 

ARMAAN WAS WEARING

 
MAYANK
SAMRAT

 

NUPUR

 
GUNJAN imagine wearing this

 

RIDDHIMA imagine wearing this

 

 
THE PARTY WAS ALL SET ON FIRE

EVERYBODY WAS BUSY CHATTING AND REMEMBERING THERE SCHOOL MEMORIES

 

when an announcer came  went on stage to make an announcement 

 

announcer:  friends as per your mass request wee have stored a special performance for you all ok now girls apne dil thaam lo

 

"aankhon se dil mein utarna inka kaam hai

dosto ke saath masti karna inka maan hai

ye vo hai jo har ladki ke

dil ka ARMAAN hai."

 

[all the girls start screaming    ARMAAN   ARMAAN...]

 

yes its  MR ARMAAN SHERGILL

 

and with that armaan started with dancing on the song koi kahe from movie dil chahata hai

 

armaan : red 

samrat :  blue 

and  mayank : pink

 

armaan:  koi kahe kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewaana -2.

hum logo ki thokkar mein hai ye zammaana

 

soon samrat joined him

samrat: jab saaz hai awaz hai

phir kis liye hitkichaana-2

and then came mayank

 

mayank: hoo gaayenge hum

apne dillo ka taraana

 
armaan: bigde duniya

mayank: bigadne bhi doo

armaan: jhagde duniya

samrat: jhagadne bhi doo

armaan: ladde ye duniya

ladne bhi doo

tum apne dhun mein gaao

duniya ruthe

ruthne doo

patther toote

tootne do

koi choote

chootene do

naa ghabraao

all : hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -2

 

soon riddhima nupur and gunjan joined them with the dance , everyone dancing together

haatho mein hai bijleeya

saanoo mein toofaan hai

darr kya hai aur haar kya

hum isse anjaan hai

hammaare liye hi to hai aasmaan aur jamme

sitaare bhi hum tod lenge humme hai yakeen

ambar see hai aage hammaara thikaana

all:  hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -2

soon the 3 girls left them and armaan and samrat busy flirting with other girls

sapno ka jo desh hai

haa hum wahhe hai palle

thode se dilphek hai

thode see hai manchalle [flirting with the girls n the crowd]

jahaa bhi gaye apna jaadoo dikhaate rahe [going towards girls]

mohaabat haseeno ko hum sab sikhaate rahe [holding a girl dancing with her]

aaye humme dil aur neende churaana [waiving towards other girls who just wanted to dance with him]

all: hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -2

 
koi kahe kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewaana -2.

koi...kehta ...kitana bhi humko deewaana

hum logo ki thokkar mein hai ye zammaana

jab saaz hai awaz hai phir kis liye hitkichaana-2

hoo gaayenge hum apne dillo ka taraana

armaan: bigde duniya

mayank: bigadne bhi doo

armaan: jhagde duniya

samrat: jhagadne bhi doo

armaan: ladde ye duniya

ladne bhi doo

tum apne dhun mein gaao

duniya ruthe

ruthne doo

patther toote

tootne do

koi choote

chootene do

naa ghabraao

all : hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -4

 
they were having there full on masti time

 

AND THEN ON EVERYONES REQUEST ARMAAN TO SING A SONG ON STAGE AS THERE BAND WAS REALLY POPULAR IN SCHOOL , THEY SIX JUST LOVE TO SING CASUALLY

RIDDHIMA AND ARMAAN HAD A GREAT VOICE AND SO THEY WERE THE MAIN SINGERS

AND MAYANK AND SAMRAT LOVED TO PLAY MUSIC INSTRUMENTS

WELL THEY SANG THE SONG    "HUM RAHE YAA NA RAHE KAL ...KAL YAAD AAYENGE YE PAL"

[i know a farewell party is never completed without this song ]

 

AND SO AT THE END EVERYONE JUST ENJOYED THE PARTY AND HAD FUN SINGING AND THEN DANCING ON THE FLOOR

AND LIKE THIS THE PARTY ENDED UP

 

SAME DAY...AFTER PARTY

 

[THEY ALL LEFT THE PARTY HALL AND REACHED GUNJAN RESIDENCE IN THERE CAR...THEY DROPPED GUNJAN AND THEN NUPUR...AND THEN APPROACHED TOWARDS THERE HOUSE.]

 

AT THE GATE.

 

samrat: ok now I m tired good night guys

 

[he hugged mayank .armaan and riddhima and get inside the house towards his room]

 

mayank:  bahut late ho gaya aaj

 

riddhima: yaa but it was too fun naa specially when we all danced

 

armaan: [laughing] dance !! were you really dancing there dumbo tum to sirf ye saare

[holding riddhima's saree pallu to point at it]...hi sambhaalne mein lage hue the.

 

riddhima: [commanding tone] armaan first you stop calling me dumbo I m not  a dumbo ok and secondly ye saaree sambhaalna pata hai kitna mushkil hai tumne pehne hote to pata chalta.

 

mayank: bachaa,,[REALLY SWEETLY] ab hum to lucky hai na ki hame ye nahi pehnna padta I feel pity for you girls who have to wear all these stuffs

 

riddhima: thanks bro , you r just the best [hugging mayank] atleast tum is jumbo ki tarah nahi ho. [pointing towards armaan]

 

armaan: [surprised]  Jumbo...riddhima ...main aur jumbo.

 

Riddhimah: haan...aggar main ... dumbo to tum ...jumbo...got it

 

armaan: ok ok got it now I  will not call you that ...happy

 

mayank: ok lets get in ..its to late and then wee have to do soo many arrangements tomorrow as wee have to go to  GOA day after tomorrow

 

armaan: yaa man I have also not done any packing yet

 

riddhima: no mayank ..just stay for sometime naa come on lets sit in the garden

 

mayank: [just casually as he was actually very tired] ...no not now

 

armaan: [ supporting riddhima]  come na for sometime

 

mayank: nahi yaar I m really very tired u both go ahead

 

armaan: ok as you say [casually]

 

[mayank hugged armaan and riddhima wished them good night and went to his room armaan and riddhima were walking in the garden this was there ussual activity they many times chatted in garden late night]

 

armaan: finally school over and  now new life a new beggining.

 

riddhima: [cutting him ] but same old friends.

 

armaan: oh really.[smiling]  how strange is this riddhi  the more wee stay together the more wee feel like being with each other ...wee never get bored of each other 

 

riddhima: koi dosto se bhi bore hota hai kya ...aur phir we all are just like a cute little family

 

armaan: absolutely right and hamaare family ki mom tum ho mummy

 

riddhima: [very innocently]  why ?

 

armaan: its just because you allways keep on giving instructions like a mummy and even scolds us soo much

 

riddhima: armaan doo i look like a mummy to you [upset like a small kid ]

 

armaan: yaa and you know what's the biggest think

 

riddhima: [with anger] what that I m like a mummy , aunty types ,  bhenji types yahhe naa

 

armaan: [very sweetly] nope its that you take care of all of us like a mother... you r really adorable.

 

riddhima: [with those cute looks very sweetly ]   really ?

 

armaan: .yes...[getting emotional]

 

riddhima: what happenned why have you became soo sad like this

 

armaan: [holding her hand]. you will never forget me naa ? [Getting really emotional]

 

riddhima:  why r you saying like this armaan ?

 

armaan: bas mujhe tumhaare aadat ho gaye hai I got really scared if wee get separated then what

 

riddhima: [smilingly].stupid why will we ever get separated armaan we all will always remain together our friendship will never break promise.

 

[armaan satisfyingly hugged riddhima]

 

riddhima:[to change his emotional mood] let me see let me see .armaaan ..THE ARMAAN SHERGILL turning emotional

 

armaan: [lovingly] .shup up.

 

riddhima: [casually ]  ok as you say

 

[as they were walking in the ground .riddhima just lost her balance due to saaree and was about to fall when armaan hold her.]

 

armaan: careful riddhi

 

riddhima: why should I you will always be there naa , to take care of mee

 

armaan: [just laughed]  paagal ho tum

 

[as they were chatting samrat ..shouted from his room's window]

 

samrat: guys. don't u think its too late

 

[listening this mayank came in his room window]

 

mayank: leave it samrat,in dono ki baate to bas .

 

armaan: [from the ground] oye itni hi problem hai to tu bhi aa ja na chit chat ke liye.

 

[and so samrat and mayank came there and they went to there tree house in the garden]

 

[the four just chatted almost 2 hours there and then all just fall sleep over there only. there was just few beddings placed on the floor there]

 

THE NEXT MORNING

 

[RIDDHIMA HAD TO DO A BIG WORK THAT IS GETTING PERMISSION FROM NUPUR AND GUNJAN PARENTS TO ALLOW THEM TO GO WITH HER TO GOA]

 

AT NUPUR HOUSE.

 

riddhima: uncle [to nupur dad] please nupur ko hamaare saath jaane do na.

 

nupur's dad : beta I don't have any problem but going soo far and that too alone

 

riddhima: akele kaha uncle hum sab hai na and i promise hum saath saath rahenge please uncle jaane dijeye na

 

[before nupur's dad can say anythink his wife said]

 

mrs bhushan : jaane do na waise bhi kaun sa vo humaare saath rehna chahati hai [taunting her]

 

[actually mrs bhushan was nupur step mom and she really don't love nupur she always scold her without reasons and so now nupur also don't feel bad on her taunts as she was completely used to it she always avoid to be at her home even in nights nupur usually have overnight stay at riddhima or gunjan place]

 

[riddhima ignoring her as she is familiar of nupur's mom nature]

 

riddhima: uncle pleaseee

 

nupur: please dad.

 

Nupur's dad : ok ok jaao  enjoy yourself and haan take care of yourself to

 

nupur: [happily] thanks papa u r the best

 

[and then they left nupur place and reached gunjan house]

 

It was not much difficult to convince gunjan parents as they both were really cool parents

Finally they all were set to leave for there holiday.

 

And so they did they got a straight flight to Goa and landed up there they booked 2 rooms facing each other in a beautiful resort there

 

One room occupied by the girls and other by boys

 

it was almost night it took really long in there settlement and now everyone were really tired after that long journey and so they all just prefer resting in there rooms

 

NEXT DAY MORNING

 

Everyone wake up early as they all were really excited to watch the place

 

They all went to the beach first for there morning walk and just walked on sand for an hour

 

then they played volley ball there on the sand with

 

armaan ,riddhima ,and mayank, in one team..

 

and, samrat , gunjan and nupur in the second

 

[This was there usual team distribution as riddhima always wanted to be on mayank and armaan side]

 

They played there for a long time it was just a friendly match and so no one won or lost

And now everyone was really tired

 

They got back to there rooms freshen up and then went to market and spend the whole day shopping

 

At night they had there dinner in the resort and then all of them sat in one room and chatted for long hours

 

They stayed for almost 2 days there and then they returned back to there home.

 

[The trip was not soo important that's why I have not given a proper description or brief explanation]

 

FEW DAYS PASSED

 

NERVOUSNESS GOT HIRED AS IT WAS THERE RESULT TIME NOW

ALL OF THEM PASSED

 

Mayank Topped the town and got highest percentage

 

Nupur also got a reputated rank

 

And rest Samrat and Gunjan also passed with nice percentage

 

And so Armaan and Riddhima

 

But as it was

Armaan scored higher marks then Riddhima

 

And so armaan won the bet and finally Riddhima had to arrange armaan date with priya

 

This was now armaan's 25'th DATE

 

[riddhima talked to priya and riddhima repeated her magic and priya was ready to go out with armaan on a date]

 

[armaan was really surprised how she all the time do that]

 

[both were chatting in riddhima's room]

 

RIDDHIMA ROOM

 

armaan: r u sure.

 

riddhima: what!!!

 

armaan: I mean does she really agreed on going on a date with me

 

riddhima: yes armaan she will be waiting for you at 6 in the evening today at cafe

 

armaan: how did you did this I mean in school she used to remain as if she don't have anyinterest in mee at all

 

riddhima: really then you consider that I created my magic on her

 

armaan: come on riddhimahi tell me naa

 

riddhima: ok ok I will tell you actually  armaan you r not soo smart as much you act to be

 

armaan: [a bit confused and angry]  excuseme what do you mean by that.

 

riddhima: well who told you that priya was not interested in you she was so much interested in you infact she did friendship with mee just because I was your friend it was just you who never noticed her

 

armaan: [really happy on listening that how much girls fall for her] ohh really

 

riddhima: yes armaan. [ lokking least interested]

 

armaan: [putting his arm on riddhima shoulder and holding her ]  now what can I doo there r soo many girls falling for mee  ab ek-do to ignore ho hi jaate hai na

 

riddhima: ohhh really [hitting on armaan chest through her elbow as armaan was standing there with her]

 

armaan: ouch [with pain]

 

riddhima: now .how many girls fall for you armaan

 

armaan: [ trying to show anger as he was not at all angry] shut up and just go ok I need to get ready

 

riddhima: excuseme  this is my room and by the way I don't have any interest in your soo called date ok soo you just leave from here now

 

armaan: okkk I m going bye

 

[armaan left the room and riddhima talking to herself]

 

riddhima: waise mr armaan interest to mujhe bahut hai aapke date mein...no rather in spoiling it  now you just wait and watch what I m going to do you will always  gonna remember this date I promise

 

[this showed some type of  shararat was cooking up in riddhima's mind

But her bad luck ARMAAN was still Standing outside and he listened that]

 

armaan : [to himself] ok not bad riddhimahi now lets see who is gonna remember this date more you make plan to spoil my date and I will plan to make it a special one the bet begans now.

 

AT THE CAFE

 

ARMAAN DATE WITH PRIYA

 

[THE COUPLE WAS SITTING IN A CORNER HAVING COFEE AND PRIYA WAS REALLY HAPPY SHE JUST CAN'T BELIEVE TILL NOW THAT SHE WAS THERE SITTING WITH HER DREAM BOY, ARMAAN. SHE WAS FEELING AS IF SHE WAS THE MOST LUCKIEST GIRL OF THE WORLD]

 

ARMAAN WAS SITTING REALLY COOL EVEN AFTER KNOWING THAT RIDDHIMA WANT TO SPOIL HIS DATE

 

HE WAS BUSY ROMANCING WITH PRIYA RATHER FLIRTING

 

RIDDHIMA AND SAMRAT ENTERRED THE CAFE

 

[they both went on a table away from armaan so that armaan can't see them]

 

samrat: riddzs why have we came over here...please tell me atleast

 

riddhima: aareee yaar see over there armaan [pointing towards armaan table]

 

samrat: [looking at armaan] riddzs I know he is  armaan  and he is over here on his date soo what's the problem  ?

 

riddhima:[happily] problem!!!!  That's gonna began soon

 

samrat:  means ? [confused]

 

riddhima: actually I have called  armaan's  five ex-dates by the name of armaan over here

 

samrat: [shocked] .what !!!  but why?

 

riddhima: he think he is very smart naa he had made me organise date for him now he will come to know when he will have to  handle five dates together

 

samrat: riddzs [smilingly] tu paagal hai poor armaan bechaaraaa

 

riddzs: chod na vo koi bechaara nahi hai

 

[samrat and riddhima were waiting for the blast but nothing happened NOT A SINGLE GIRL CAME THERE ]

 

ARMAAN AND PRIYA ENDED UP WITH THE COFFE AND WENT OUT OF THE CAFE

 

RIDDHIMA WAS SURPRISED AND UPSET AS HER PLANNING FAILED

 

samrat: armaan is allready gone where r rest of the girls

 

riddhima: I don't knew I have old all the girls to be over here at 6 in evening but noone came I don't know why [confused]

 

[and then only a voice from behind replied riddhima and she immediately turned around]

 

voice: because riddhima  you r not soo smart as much you act to be

 

[it was armaan ]

 

riddhima: [shocked and surprised]  armaan ... tum ... yahaaa

 

armaan: haan riddhima main yahaaa

 

samrat: hey dude soo tell me buddy how was your 25th date

 

armaan: very nice samrat haan kisse ne [towards riddhima] problems create karne ki bahut koshish ki but u know na problems and armaan never goo together [with attitude ]

 

samrat: ohh so you allready knew that why we came over here

 

armaan: yaa actually you know what I saw this dumbo calling that girls and later on i called them  again and said no to come here

 

samrat: not bad ammy. riddzs you plan got failed [ making fun of her]

 

armaan: well your planning was nice but you know naa that your these planning can never get successful on armaan

 

riddhimas: shup up [ she was really annoyed and upset]

 

armaan: [again making fun of her] riddhima when will you understand this that you can never defeat mee

 

riddhima: [controlling her anger]. dont worry armaan one day I will make you loose from mee

 

armaan: ya ya and that day will never come

 

samrat: ok guys no more fights lets go back home

 

[on there way home in the car samrat was driving and armaan was sitting with him in front and riddhima was sitting on back seat]

 

samrat: hey riddzs r you through with all your preparations

 

riddhima: preparations [confused]...for what ?

 

samrat: for the college yaar our college will start from next week we all will go to the college together it will be soo fun naa I m just so excited

 

riddhima: ya I know I m also very excited about that

 

[they reached home] [ and now everythink was normal again]

 

IT WAS A NORMAL DAY AND EVERYBODY WERE JUST BUSY IN PREPARATIONS FOR THERE NEW LIFE there COLLEGE LIFE

 

THEY ALL WERE OUT FOR SHOPPING

IN THE SHOPPING MALL

 

[THE GIRLS WERE selecting  SOME CLOTHES THEY 3 WERE TO BUSY IN THAT AS GIRLS USUALLY ARE AND BOYS GETTING BORED AS BOYS USUALLY ARE]

 

Riddhima : [to nupur] this one is looking  very nice [holding a dress in her hand]

 

nupur: yaa but I think that red one is better what do you think  gunjan

 

gunjan: [after a thought] humm no I like this one I  think this is nice [holding another dress]

 

riddhima: yaa gunjan I also liked this one   [pointing towards gunjan dress]

 

gunjan : [a bit confused] yaa but on second thought I think that red dress which nupur has selected is more better than this

 

riddhima: no actually the one I selected is the best

 

nupur: I think the one  gunjan selected was also nice

 

[the boys who were till now very patiently listening all this conversation rather argument finally broke there silence]

 

samrat: oh god girls what r you three doing [really irritated]

 

armaan: mera to sarr [head]  dard ho raha you girls r only arguing from soo long

 

mayank: ya really tum girls kabhi quick decision nahi le sakte na.

 

samrat: haan saare decetions itna serious hokar lete hai jaise ki [very dramatically] ye zindage aur maut ka sawaal hai.

 

[boys keep on laughing]

 

riddhima: haha very funny guys you goo and doo your shopping why r you guys disturbing us

 

mayank: wee  would have never disturbed you bachaa [to riddhima] but what can wee do ...we all r allready through with our shopping long time back

 

armaan: ya and since last half hour wee r just listening to your so called discussion

 

riddhima: ok ok leave it [to nupur and gunjan] lets doo one think we shall buy all these 3 dresses

 

nupur: yaa that will be fine

 

gunjan: ya offcourse ok then lets go and have something I m feeling hungry

 

samrat: [showing a sign of relief ] ohhh finally your shopping is over

 

riddhima: yaa samrat now lets go.

 

[they all finally moved out of the mall and then they all went to a restaurant to have lunch]

 

they entered the club where they usually go

 

mayank asked a waiter for a table for 6

 

they all occupied a table on pool side

 

they all comfortably settled there...and ordered there desired lunch

 

samrat: so hope now all your shopping is complete [towards girls]

 

riddhima: complete ? no samrat abhi kaha  we have only bought dresses till now still soo many thinks r left

 

gunjan: [ in continuation with riddhima]  ya ...  new shoes , new bags, matching jewelry

 

armaan: hey  hey  hey  hold on girls dont u think its getting too much i mean we all r going to  college not in any marriage

 

samrat: armaan they r doing it like this now ...i wonder if they have to do shopping for any marriage then what they gonna doo

 

riddhima: guys just relax ok and well one think is for sure that if we have to do shopping from next time we will never come with you atleast

 

armaan: oh thank you  for saving us from your this  shopping  touchier

 

riddhima: just stop it ok

 

[ they all and there lunch and proceeds towards there house it was about 6 in evening]

 

IN THE EVENING

 

AT RIDDHIMA HOUSE

 

EVERYONE WERE COMFORTABLY SEATED UP IN MAYANK'S ROOM .THEY ALL WERE BIT TIRED DUE TO SHOPPING AND SO THEY ALL RESTED THERE

 

riddhima: ok guys enough of resting ...now what's the plan

 

nupur: plan !! for what ?

 

riddhima: just like that  for dinner

 

samrat: I got an idea

 

gunjan: and whats that?

 

samrat: lets have party tonight

 

mayank: party !!! but why whats the occation

 

riddhima: oh god mayank you don't need to have any particular occasion for enjoying

 

armaan: ya [excitedly] ya lets just have a blast what say guys

 

all together : okkk

 

samrat: but where to go?

 

armaan: ok lets go to the royal club

 

mayank: that's cool lets go to the club

 

riddhima: but we will go in the disco

 

mayank: ya ..lets goo to the club's disco

 

samrat: yaa that's nice lets go

 

[everybody got ready and went to the disk and everybody was on the dance floor]

 

they all were busy dancing and enjoying there night to the fullest.

 

after an hour everybody ended up and occupied a corner table and ordered some drinks]

 

gunjan: it was fun

 

nupur:  ya

 

mayank: waise riddhima when r you going to learn ho to dance

 

riddhima: what do you mean  that i don't know how to dance ?

 

samrat: ya mayank riddzs is such a good dancer then why r you saying this

 

mayank: really she is more than just a good dancer you know what she hit mee so hard with her foot while dancing my foot is paining soo much till now

 

riddhima: ok relax may be i did it by mistake

 

armaan: mistake riddhima don't you think you doo many mistakes like this

 

riddhima: shup up ok i said naa i did it by mistake.

 

samrat: riddzs ye achaa hai pehle maar lo then keh do ki galti ho gaye.

 

riddhima: aree tum log to mere peeche hi pad gaye ho kaha na galti se lag gaya [she got angry]

 

mayank: ok ok just relax [trying to calm her] tum bhi na bas chote chote baat per gussa ho jaate ho

 

riddhima: achaa u mean main hi gussa hote hu. aur tum log jo mujhe har baat per irritate karte rehte ho vo kya

 

mayank: main maine tumhe kab irritate kiya ?

 

riddhima: [in anger] leave it i just don't wanna talk to you jab dekho mujhe pareshaan karte rehte ho

 

armaan: look mayank ye phir gussa ho gaye riddhima...tum har baat pe gussa ho jaate ho

[all the boys  specially armaan just love to irritate her and so they are just fighting without any reason.]

 

riddhima: armaan just shut up ok.

 

mayank: riddhima ko gussa aa gaya [ making fun of her]

 

riddhima: [stood up] leave it mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karne. main jaa rahe hu.

 

[riddhima moved out in anger]

 

samrat: dekho phir naraz ho gaye

 

nupur: tum teeno bhi na [towards the boys]  kyon usse pareshaan karte rehte ho gussa ho gaye na

 

mayank: haan vo to gussa hokar chale gaye  now what to do ?

 

armaan: arree kahe nahi gaye hoge yahi kahe hoge main dekhkar aata hu...

 

[and so armaan also left the disco]

 

[riddhima outside the disco]

 

riddhima: [to herself]  pata nahi kya samahjate hai apne aap ko  abhi aayega mannane main bilkul baat nahi karunge ab

 

[armaan came out he was a bit distant away from her...but he called her from there only]

 

armaan: riddhima

 

riddhima: please armaan i just don't wanna talk to you

 

[and saying this she went towards the road ...and did not noticed that a car was coming towards her]

 

[armaan saw the car and tried to stop her and ran to her]

 

THE CAR WAS REALLY CLOSE TO RIDDHIMA AND AS IT WAS ABOUT TO CRASH WITH RIDDHIMA ARMAAN JUST JUMPED HOLDED HER AND ... TOOK HER TO THE OTHER SIDE  BUT A BIT LATE

THE CAR HAD ALREADY HIT RIDDHIMA ON HER LEG

RIDDHIMA'S LEG WAS PAINING AND SHE CRIED WITH PAIN

 

MEAN WHILE INSIDE THE DISCO

 

samrat: yaar i think riddzs sach mein naraj ho gaye hai

 

mayank: yaa i think so we shall go out to see for her

 

nupur : ya lets go

 

[they all went out  THEY ALL SEE THAT RIDDHIMA WAS LYING ON THE FLOOR and CRYING OUT OF PAIN AND ARMAAN WAS TRYING TO PICK HER IN HIS ARMS]

 

EVERYBODY WAS SHOCKED AND THEY ALL JUST RAN TOWARDS THEM

 

mayank: [he came near riddhima and hold her hand]  riddhi  riddhi   [very

tensed] kya hua tujhe  ARMAAN WHAT HAPPENNED TO HER [MORE TENSED]

 

riddhima: [holding mayank hand tightly ] aaahhh mayuu  [she just cried ]

armaan: actually her leg is been injured ...samrat [who was just there near him.]...get the car wee need to go to hospital

 

samrat: yaa  [he just ran towards the parking and bought the car.]

 

[armaan carefully picked riddhima up in his arms and just put her inside the car  and they all just rushed towards the hospital]

THAT'S ALL FOR NOW WILL COUNTINUE AHEAD SOON

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