**Eternal Love ** new SS - Page 5

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First one to comment...yupiee!!

Poppy I told u this SS will be amazing n u wil get a good response n this was expected.

Loved d way u started the story.

Kria staring at the sky and thinking deeply which got interrupted by a call.

Then asking for her schedule and her two diaries - personal n schedule planning.

I liked d way u explained her busy schedule.

N the way she loved d kids n consoled d crying 3 years kid.

Silently watched by whom??!!

Her diary writing expressing her universeji n mom was amazing.

Loved it totally n completely.

Waiting for d next part.

Do update soon.

Luv u Poppy!!

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago

res 😛 Edited by abhiyakreya - 11 years ago

Like  the concept...

n thanks 4 the pm...

Awesome part shravni...lovd it

aww kriya really is amazing at this job...

I guess priyal wil play a gr8 role in this story...

Some evn 4 felt sad while reading that she stands near that window n keep thinking abt sumthng(sum1)

waiting 4 d nxt part
thanx 4 d pmEdited by --Kinjal-- - 11 years ago

Ayee hayee...👏Kya likha hai mere poppy ne..Very nice..!!2nd part wen u updating?

loved it...

it was sweet...

kriya talks were so cute and moving...

waiting for next part...

let me guess rey will find the diary...

u know diary mix up like the baby mix up... 😆

bad joke...

pr tu bhanvanayein samajh gayi na????

wow...!!!

it was awesome...
beautifuly written...
the update was fantastic dear...
tumne sacchi mein emotional kar diya...
love kriya in the update...
2nd update jaldi post karo...😊

poppy it ws just amazing