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I am unlucky.. love s not 4 me ss of kr &sw (Page 5)

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Loved it...

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Nice starting pm to me

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged

sorry for late updateTongue

next morng

reys saw kriya she was cookng some thng and now he s gettng bore so hw went to take a shower


he s making toomuch of sounds and dancng in the bathroom enjoyng alot

after smtime no noise s cmng out from bathroom ppurly silent...rey;-omg mey kya karoo kuch dikbe nahey...mujey help chayiye kriyasey ooo no nahey 

rey;-kriyaaa

kriya;-kya vo kadooos mujey callng

rey;-kriyaaa

kriya;-mujey bachavo universe jiii

rey;-plz i vant ur help

kriya;-help vo be aap ko mujsey

rey;-vat?

kriya;-kuch nahey kadoos

rey;-??????

kriya;-ok vat u vant

rey;-dho bucket of water

kriya;-dho mey kaiseyShocked

rey;-plzz 

kriya;0-ok

rey;-jaldhey

kriya;-ok

rey;-but plz vn u enter plz cls ur eyes

kriya;-kya ???? i vil manage dnt worry she enter the bath room ...rey is still tryng thr shower get ok finally he kept the 1st bucket and turn back while these time she closed her eyes so that she dsnt see that near to her leg soap s ther so she get slip ...rey was dndg her job vn he open his eyes he saw kriya s gng to fell dow thn also she didnt open her eyes suddenly he caught her by his arm and due to his falt shower cracd now kya hoga the water starts too jumping out and splashng throught the bathroom now ...each drop of water s touchng the sweet pink lip of kriya.rey bend her...now he s thnkng she s so cute and beutiful ,he slowly touchesh her lips she just closed her eyes ...now he move toward her she just move her face opposit but he took her face and movng toward her ...he s lost in her beauty now no spcae between them suddenly rey loose the girp and both fell in the water tub rey try to get from there but both r just pissed in it now kriya try to breath hard so he just moved toward her caught her lip toward him ...now she can balance the tears r rollng but join vith the water so rey didnt recogngs that its so tough her to breath so he pulled her up now both r breathng so hard ven she feel she s ok she got out she dsnt vant to face him o she vent

aftersm time rey cm out and seen kriya she s dng her work

rey;-kriya...v hav to leav now so go and get ready

kriya;-where

rey;-i said go and get ready no ?ns

kriya;-tipical kadoos 

she changed her dress

dress of rey


dress of kriya

rey;-wowww

kriya;-now vat happn

rey;-kuch nahey so chalo

now both enetr the car..pindrop silence ...finally they reached creek park

swyam;-wowww so cute baaabie

sharon;-ya kriya so cute looking fab

kriya;-thanks and u too

sharon ;-tanku

rey;-so

swayam;-so let go for boating 

kriya;-yaa

now both the couples in boat

swayam so baaabie or aap vait karon plz v vil cm back soon ok

rey;-ok

swaron vents now they both hav a nice plan ...they send a boy towards kriya

the boy;-hai

kriya;-smiles and say hii

boys;-u r looking so cute

kriya thankz

boy;- so i am so happy to see sucha cute gal here...and i am single would u dnt mind can i hav coffe vith u

kriya;-but...

rey;-but no thankz...she s not single she s married and i am her husband  

boy;-ok ur her husband so lucky to hav sucha beautiful wife...kash i met her first now she vil be mine but ek thng ur not a right match for her

and the boy move on..kriya didnt say anythng no rey s out of her countrol the time passed swaron reach there rey s too angry they can feel it now boating s over they reached a  silence place vch s decorated beautifully


swayam;- i thnk its gng too rain

sharon;-ya

for of thm having coffee and its raing 

kriya;-mmm can ve play in rain

rey;-(angrly) no ,i said no

kriya;-ye kadoos kyu mujsey eysey bath karahahey i hate him

swyam;-sharon chalo v can play

now swaron starts playing the splashes vather each other finally swaron pushesh kriya toward but she slip (our hero caught her by waist ) no wayyy  our sweet shivam caught her by waist ..shivam is reys enimy  ths made rey more angry ...rey caught kriya by hist wrist and push toward him and put her inside the car ang got away ...swaron were so schoked but tooo happy finally smthng spl s happng between them

percap;-

rey s full on anger he pull kriya towardrs him and crush and pin towards the wall ...his breth s hitting reys body ...kriya s shivaring...reys hand s bleeding ...now kriya s too shock to see  rey like ths ...he s just scoldng her ...finally she felt dowan he takes her in arm and dnt no vat to do 

next part s updated in page 8


now need likes and commentTongue


Edited by karthikasekhar - 11 August 2012 at 9:32am

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:07am | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it...
why this shivam man?????Angry

hahaha precap seems intresting...

thnx for the pm n update soon...


Edited by sachiarsha - 11 August 2012 at 5:18am

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sachiarsha

res

aab nahey  ...kya u all vant the next partooo

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged
nice updte..
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by karthikasekhar

Originally posted by sachiarsha

res

aab nahey  ...kya u all vant the next partooo
yess...!!...Wink

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