Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

PYAR KE EHASAS -thread 1 note on pag-50 (Page 6)

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Originally posted by dreamymishti88

Congrats dear
loved both the parts
continue soon

thanks dear for loving my story

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lvd the updates...

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both updates are nice

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both parts r cool

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will start reading this one soon :)
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Mr. who are you

Suddenly maan cam back into the sense

Dev' where is dev

He is not in the house , he went out side

He do not what to do.. he was in dilemma whether to go inside or not.

That girl was staring at him

Do you  want to tell something ?

She was asking him

Oh actually dev has asked to me arrange a marriage and one pandit

App maan haina'..

Please come inside

But maan hesitated,  to  go inside

No I will come after wards

If you do not come dev will surely will kill me '.dev was already   was tensed up with the marriage , bechara '.she suddenly laughed

Maan  lost in her smile, while she smiles a dimple form near  her chin, making her more beautiful


Please come inside

No  I will out side in the garden

Saying that he  went away sitting in the lawn and lost in her thoughts

How she is looking very beautiful with  simple

Who is this girl, I have to ask dev

Ji suniye

He came into this world hearing her sweet voice

Take this

He took the coffee mug from her hand

His hands slightly touched her  fingers , giving him shivers in the spine

He do not but he want to hug, her crush her under his hug,   wants take her lips  into his' what happened to him why  iam getting like this wild thoughts'

 No I have to control myself, what is happening to me it is  not that I have never seen any girl before '..

He was holding the cup and thinking of dev and sipped it , it was same  as his taste

How this girl knows that I love black coffee

As if reading his thoughts

Dev told everything about , every time he talks about you

This is standard dialogue that everyone who ever meet him , tell this, that dev  tell about  him a lot

He was staring at her, her long hair, , he just loved her long hair

At the same they saw the main gate open and dev was coming

See dev has come

Hearing the foot steps

Manu when you came

Just now

At the same he took girl hands

Sorry misthy did you became bore

Ha I got very bore'..  pouting her lips  I thought you will not come in this life time , with this bore ness I would have died , but this person has came and ringed the bell ,I told him to come inside but no he wants  to sit outside

I have seen him sitting like budh bhaghavan , so I came here and disturbed him,

Dev was laughing the way she told

A slight smile came on the maan lips

 Wait   I will bring coffee for you

Saying that she went away

Thanks maanu you came ,

You met geet


Ha geet my wife'''..honewali hai' abhi tak nahi hui


Maan was  shocked with dev words

That means , till now  '''.

He got angry on himself he tightened his fists as if trying to control his anger

Maan did you  tell to dadima about us

No geet, I was about to tell tonight

No maan please do not tell

Why dev , it is big thing , this is your marriage issue, how can I cannot tell that

Tell me first one thing

You were  so much against marriage, but suddenly what is this, where  you met geet why this sudden marriage

Maan I wan to tell you everything , but wait until this marriage, please I will tell you

See dev you never hide anything from  me

But now because of  this geet you are doing this

Maan please do think bad about geet , she is a good girl, you will know her,

Promise  me that you will be always be there for her in support

What is this dev why you are talking like this

Do not tell about us to dadima

Why dev why are you angry on dadima


You know that maan she was reason for my father death

I do not want geet to suffer from her

Promise  me that you will there for her

Why dev why are you talking like this,  what are you thinking

now maan tell me about marriage preparations

ya tomorrow night  your marriage will be there in temple as per your wish, I have talked to pandit

what about shopping, did you buy any thing  for her saree, mangalsutra

NO  maan I did not buy anything , you are there , so I thought we can go and buy

Okay it is already night we can go tomorrow and buy  the bridal dress and mangalsutr,  come we will go out side and eat something

At the same time geet came, 'no I will make  dinner we can eat here

Yes maan geet  is correct ,

But  maan got angry with this

See you never was against my decisions, , abhi shaadi nahi hue aur  tum uska side  le raheo. He was just cribbing just like a small kid

Dev it is okay

Aisa nahi ki, ye bache ki tarah rona shuru hojayaga ,

Maan  saw her with angry eyes,

Dev  we will go fast, for dinner aisa nahi ki ye gusse se

muje kha jayega

dev tried to stop this tom and jerry fight 

maan chalo  we will go Punjabi  dhaba , geet ko bahut pasad hai Punjabi khana

geet was surprised when maan  has taken to  some Italian restaurant

maan was seing her antics

she was talking to herself and 

looking up

he did not understand , what she talking and why she is  looking up

maan do not be shocked usko apni babaji se baat karne ki bahut shouk hai ,tab usko gussa ati hai  to vo bahut jyada baat karti hai

maan could not understand the dev dialogues

he was thinking how can anyone talk like this

seeing  maan  immediately the hotel manger came and took  their roof garden their fav place

geet  became very calm,

maan   gave menu card to geet and told her to order

she just ordered  some salads and fruits


geet you can order, some thing to eat it is salads

no it it is okay  muje ye kahssphoos khana muje nahi khana , okay i can adjust for I oneday ,

just then their order came

maan and  dev have same fav 'pasta , spring rolls

geet please taste this,, I promise tomorrow I will   take to place where you fav food is available

maan did not like dev, the way he is pampering geet but he controlled himself

, why dev is behaving like this, he was against marriage , he did not like this marriage concept, I do not know what this geet has done, dev has changed a lot

Rest of dinner they ate in silence

They come outside and started  going ,

Slight drizzling has started ,maan stop the car please

Why geet , no you do not go out side  you will catch cold

Please dev please, I want to please'.

seeing her like this

okay geet I gave up , I know you will convince me  like this  only, always  you do like this only

maan just stop the car once

maan did not like this '. But he cannot the deny the words of dev, he immediately stopped the car, geet like a small kid ,  went out  immediately and started drenching in the water

maan please take care of geet, she just like kid, she do not know  have anyone on this world , other than us,  even if iam there or not

why dev why are you talking like this, you are talking  as if you are going somewhere and leaving her with me

do not know what the destiny maan but please take care of geet

suddenly there was thunderstorm, dev came out side of the car and staring  at geet , until now geet was happy but what happened suddenly , she was lost some where

dev went near her

she immediately hugged dev and started crying

maan was seeing all this from the car,

he was feeling some uneasiness

he saw dev was consoling geet

he did not understand why geet was behaving like this , until now she was happy, but what happened to her suddenly

precape:  marriage preparation  wait for a twist for until next Tuesday

until  then bye ... friends







Edited by rsusmita - 27 August 2012 at 10:21pm

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