Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

PYAR KE EHASAS -thread 1 note on pag-50 (Page 120)

rsusmita IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
okay guys i have given so many teasers.. written almost half of the story , now bahut raat hogaya hai.. feeling sleepy..  good night sweet dreams..

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nice teaser
waiting update soon
rsusmita IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by psoundirarajan

nice teaser
waiting update soon

writing the story will update soon
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Maan.. a slight moan escaped from her mouth...maan who was holding her hands.

.  which was paining a geet.. but maan was not seeing this.. he was so lost in his anger...


Maan immediately left the cabin leaving geet there.

Everyone are discussing about project

Geet was staring maan... with a hope that he will look at her,

But maan was not showing any interest in these matters...

Adi I think we can arrange the according to themes.. looking at maan .

may be he will appreciate her thoughts


That great idea geet...

Sir how about this.

.Adi you look about party matters, I am going to site, there are some  urgent issues.. saying that maan left the conference room..leaving them with their ideas

When maan entered directly to launch party

He saw everyone are dressed up like  for  function

He saw adi in sherwani..

what is this .. adi.. is any function going on...

Heee...he laughed..

Adi .. I just asked you what is going on.. not to laugh.. now tell me what is going on..

Sir  did you forget today there is launch party of the poject..

I know that is why aim asking why all here in traditional outfit..

Vo geet ka idea.. the theme is everyone are wearing these traditional outfits

What ..

Maan was shocked hearing those words from adi...

Adi where is geet..

Sir vo.. she is in the cabin getting ready for the party

Lagtahai..maan sir bahut gusse me hai..

When maan entered the cabin he saw geet was getting   trying to knot her blouse..


Geet was startled hearing maan voice

He immediately turned back seeing geet trying to knot the threads,,,

Geet  started searching  for her duppata...keeping her hands on the chest

She saw duppata wan on the counch and maan was stading in between them

Maan passed the duppata.. for her.

She immediate wore that..

Maan .. vo..

Geet what all these.. .

Maan you liked it.. you know this idea.. was by me..marriage theme...when two strangers, and bided  by the scared thread, and the trust and love they share

Just shut up..just shut up..

He came near..her...seeing his blood red eyes.. geet started moving backwards. And  now she was stopped behind the wall

Maan got hold of her arms,,

Geet are you telling about marriage and its sacredness and its value's...and its trust .. aise baat tumhari muhe ache nahi lagte hai


Geet was feeling the pain in her hands.. because of the maan hold.. but she did not  dare to raise her voice.. she knows if she raised her voice he will be  irritated  more...

Maan sir.. maan sir..

Hearing adi voice he immediately left her

Maan guest have arrived , and they are asking about you..

Geet tried to behave normal , irrespective of the pain she is getting because of marks which maan gave

She could  sense maan gaze following her .. where ever she went... at the same time lights became off...

Maan saw adi was with mike inviting everyone for the dance floor ,

What maan you are sanding here.. come on hit the dance floor..

No sir...i cannot

Vo.. vo.. and now do not tell me that you do have a partner..

Geet .. he called geet...

See she is perfect pair for you.. Saying that he pushed them for the dance...

No she do not want .. she tried to  come from the dance floor but was stopped  by the maan .. he caught of  her hand immediately pulled her back trying to hold her waist  ...

So  you want to leave the place...

Vo.. she saw his black almond shapes eyes.. which are fuming in anger,

As if cursing her, that she is reason for everything now

How can she tell that she is not the reason.. but will maan will able to listen her, or believer her words ,

The way he is taking  her arms, and placing on his shoulder, and his one hand on the back of her.. crushing in his hug...

It is not that geet do not want to dance, or they did not dance before, even they had a   physical bond also, but  now everything has changed, now maan is just angry on  her , can she change that .


Maan did not see surrounding he was so lost in his anger, he stopped  hearing  claps , he saw  the music was stopped, and everyone are clapping,

Oh maan there is a wonderful chemistry between you..

He tried to control his anger,

Hmm.. saying that he immediately left the place...

Geet once again lost .. she do what o do now.. in what way to convince him that   she did not do any mistake...

She searched for him in the party.. she saw him talking seriously with other, she tried to go him, but whenever she tried to go near him he tried to avoid her ...

He would have left the place but he cannot leave the place.. as he was organizing the party

He saw her talking on the phone...

He could see her a little worried about..

She talked something to adi and  leaving the place...


Sir geet got  some urgent work, so she left place... she told to  inform you...


He  could  guess  what the urgent work.


When he entered the house he saw geet was  in her room sleeping next to vicky, the way she was hugging him so protectively, as if her life depends on him...

At one second he lost in her innocent beauty but he again remind her betrayer..

No geet I will not come into your innocent face, nehind these innocent mask.. I have seen that geet.. I hate you geet.. for what you have done

precape:  dadima entry ... a twist ...

guys please give your lovely  comments and likes..

ha dearies i am going on a short vacation so i cannot give any updates till 17 th

so  wishing   now  itself

happy dusherra to all of you Friends

Edited by rsusmita - 01 October 2013 at 6:54am

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Posted: 01 October 2013 at 5:56am | IP Logged

maan kab tak gussa rahoge
geet ki aankhon me kuchh nazar hanin aata tumhen.
maan chalo achcha hai hum tumhen geet se maafi maangte hue bhi dekh paayenge is bahaane. chalo thoda sa aur gussa kar lo. pyar bhi to utna hi zabardast hoga na phir.
Right susmitaLOLLOL
lovely update.
I m first here 

Edited by rashmivaish - 01 October 2013 at 6:02am

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