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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged

  hello everyone...this is susmita again

iam  here again with a new ff'. actually   I promised my friend that I will write for  GEET-2

this ff is specially for  


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2921945


"Geet - Beginning of a New Era" page. so i will be updating this   story  every Tuesday

 

 So guys this is the story


   PYAR KA EHASAS 

 















..   CHARACTERS

 

SAVITRI DEVI: 

            65 YEARS OLD LADY ,    VERY RICH KIND       HEAR TED ,                GENEROUS LADY , LIVES             IN       HOSIYARPUR ,SHE IS LIKE HEAD OF THE VILLAGE, DEVELOPED THE VILLAGE A LOT ..OPENED SCHOOL AND COLLEGES FOR THE WELFARE OF THE SOCITEY, HER ONE WORD IS ENOUGH  FOR THE VILLAGERS TO OBEY HER ORDER.CAN DO ANY THING FOR HER

 

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

MD OF THE KHURANAN CONSTRUCTIONS,   WHICH WAS ESTABLISHED BY HIS GRAND FATHER (HUSBAND OF SAVITRI DEVI ) CONSIDERED AS ONE TOP  MOST FIRMS OF INDIA, HE EXTENDED HIS BUSINESS IN OTHER  FIELDS ALSO,  26YEARS, HOT SEXY,    HANDSOME ANGRY YOUNG MAN

AT THE YOUNG AGE  HE  TOOK KHURANA CONSTRUCTION TO IT S PEAK

 

DEVMALHOTRA :

26 YEARS ,GRANSON OF SAVITRI DEV(DAUGHTERS SON)  WHEREAS MAAN IS SAVITRI DEV SON'S SON, AND DEV IS DAUGHTER SON BOTH  ARE COUSIN , LOVES MAAN A LOT, HE IS KIND OF REBEL, WILL BE THE FIRST PERSON  IN HELPING OTHERS , ALWAYS   WILL BE OUT OF THE HOUSE

 

MEERA :

SISTER OF GEET ,  VERY HELPFUL MORE WILL BE DISCLOSED IN THE FUTURE

GEET:

SISTER OF MEERA  CHEERFUL, LOVELY,BUT AT THE SAME TIME STUBORN GIRL, WILL GO TO ANY EXTENT TO FULFILL THE PROMISE , SHE HAS DONE

 

NAKUL:

  SERVENT ,BUT HE IS MORE LIKE A FAMILY MEMBER , IT IS LIKE THEY ARE GENERATION SERVING IN THEIR HOUSE, LIVES WITH DADIMA IN HOSIHARPUR

 

KALI DI:

WIFE OF NAKUL STAYS  ALONG WITH HIM WITH DADIMA

 

THESE ARE MAIN CHARACTER AS THE STORY UNFOLDS MORE CHARACTER WILL COME

 

 



Edited by rsusmita - 03 March 2014 at 2:56am

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THIS IS THE PROLOGUE, ACTUALLY THIS COMES  AFTER 15 TO 20 EPISODES

 

MAAN  was seeing geet, with piercing gaze,as if touching her soul,

There was silent everywhere, occasionally , only the temple bells are ringing, the temple was calm and silent  one type of sacredness was there in the atmosphere ,even  though there is calmness in the atmosphere, but their hearts   are full of storms

Maan was seeing geet, she was sitting quietly on the steps of the temple,

If  you are telling truth then why you did not came near to me, immediately after the death of dev, why you waited for 2 years ?

 though his  tone is very low,one can tell how much angry he is

geet did not answered immediately,

these 2 years I tried to live myself , but I could not ,   now, I was forced to come near to you

she stopped as if some thing has stucked  in her throat

so guys this is the prologue,

was geet was  in danger, will maan will able to save her from that danger

  I WILL POST THE PART 1 ON NEXT TUESDAY

   INDEX


PART:1:                 h ttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=4

PART:2                        http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=4

PART: 3                    http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=6

PART-4               http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=9

PART-5-            http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=11

PART-6                http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=14 

PART-7                     -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=16

PART-8                      http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=19

PART-9-             http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=22

part-10               http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=26

PART-11-            http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=30

PART-12     -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=36

PART-13       -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=41

part-14          -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=45

part-15-            http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=48

part-16-                  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=51

part-17--http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=54

part-18-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=58

part-19-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=62

part-20http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=67

part-21-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=72

part-22-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=77


part-23-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=80


part-24-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=86


part-25-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=88


PART-26-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=92


part-27-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=96


part-28-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=102

part-29-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=106


part 30--http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=110

part-31-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=114

part-32-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=121

part-33--http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=126

 

 part-35-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=135



THREAD -2

 



Edited by rsusmita - 16 November 2014 at 11:12pm

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MAAN  was seeing geet, with piercing gaze,as if touching her soul,

There was silent everywhere, occasionally , only the temple bells are ringing, the temple was calm and silent  one type of sacredness was there in the atmosphere ,even  though there is calmness in the atmosphere, but their hearts   are full of storms

Maan was seeing geet, she was sitting quietly on the steps of the temple,

If  you are telling truth then why you did not came near to me, immediately after the death of dev, why you waited for 2 years ?

 though his  tone is very low,one can tell how much angry he is

geet did not answered immediately,

these 2 years I tried to live myself , but I could not ,   now, I was forced to come near to you

she stopped as if some thing has stucked  in her throat

so guys this is the prologue,

was geet was  in danger, will maan will able to save her from that danger

 

 

 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
congrats...

CS
nice...

prologue
interesting...
cont soon...

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
interesting concept n nice cs...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
continue soon

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
nice start dear...
prologue is very interesting... 
waiting 4 part 1...

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged

interesting... but dont make GEET as wife of dev like that yaar... pls...

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