so here it is guys, part 2. . request: whenever there is a Sajni dialog, try to visualise it as Sajni really saying it .
Part 2: The Transformation Begins
Ever since Ambi came into Imarti Nivas as ANuj's wife, she ahs uncovered many issues whose roots were Imarti's deeds/evilness. . .
Ambi had sorted out kusum's terrified life, by cleverly getting Prakash back from Dubai and indirecly making Prakash have to stay.. Imarti really had no chance to outsmart AMbi. . AMbi was too gud for her. . haa Hambeee. .
next wud be Sajni. . AMbi had noticed Ved trying to get away from Sajni or staying rather alert from Sajni whenever she was close. . and Sajni herself had cried out her woes of her married life. .
then one evening. .. . . .break
: so this is it. . AMbi Sajnii talk about to begin . . I am not very sure how to bridge this seciton, but will try the best I can while still in writing mode. . so hopefulyl it ticks.
after dinner, .. AMbi gestured to Sajni to stay back . . and tahts what sajni did but in a weary stance. . tak jum. . (i honestly dont know why i put "Tak Jum" here lol )
Sajni approached Ambi in the kitchen and even before Ambi cud say anything. . Sajni yelled: "AMbiii, , tum to mera nature jaanti ho, agar mein raat ko jaldi nehi soungi, to meri ankeen lal lal ho jayengi
, meri beauty sleep ka kya hoga AMbiii. . jaldi bolo. !!!! (Ambi, you know my nature dont you? if i dont sleep early enough m y eyes wil become red, what about my beauty sleep, please keep it quick)
Ambi:: Jiji me aapse Ved ji ke bare mein baat karna chahti hun. . .
Sajni. . nehiii. . .agar tum firse mujhe wo circus ticket jaise idea dena chahti ho to nehiii. . Maaji mujhe zinda khaa jayengi (nooo. . if you want to give me a idea just like the circus tickets, then nooo, Imarti will swallow me alive!!! Hambeee)
AMbi:: nehi nehi Jiji, mein to appko ek aur tarkieb bataungi .. . (no no , i will tell you another formula)
Sajni (now getting more interested, and alert):: kyaaa. . aur idea. . .batao. .
(what , another idea, go on tell tell. . . )
Ambi:: aaapko apni lali lipistick ko ch'odna hoga, aur make up bhi kum karna hoga. . . (before Ambi cud finish. . )
Sajni. . kya . .kya.a.a. kya.a.a.a.a.a. bilkul nehi. . AMbi tum to meta nature jaanti ho, sajne sawarne se mujhe kitna maza aata he, aur agar maine make up kum kardiya, to ved ji bhaag jayenge. . .
(no, not at all,, I wont stop my make up + lali lipistick. . I love doing make up and love my lali lipistick , if i stop , then ved ji might run away. ..
AMbi:; nehi jiji ,, aisa kuch nehi hoga. . lekin uske upar appko Ved ji se boht kum baat karni hogi. . aur zara zyada duuriyan karni hogi. . (no ,, nothing like that will happen, but on top of that you will have to also keep distance from Ved and talk less to him. . ) (readers note: I am trying to keep story line grounded and as simple as possible. . )break:
this was the hardes to write. . havent i said that I really love lali lipistick just the way she
is??. . so dont worry, I will definitely make a u-turn on this as predicted in Part 1 of this SS. .
Sajni:: AMbiii. . to Ved ji paka bhaag jayenge. . (AMbi, then Ved will definitely make a run for it. . )
Jiji aap mujhe ye bataiye, ke Ved ji kya ab nehi bhaagte?? (tell me one thing, doesnt ved alraedy run from you now?? ) (I feel hurt writing this line now. .
umm. . haa. . oh hhh hh . . ab samjhi. . Ambiii. . tum meri sangat me shamil ho kar boht smart ho geyi ho
(with the cute Sajni laugh) . . Ved ji se dhuuriyan karke, wo mujhe yaad karenge. .
aur phir. . . . "dil garden garden ho gaya" (day dreaming starts ). . still in day dream . . (ohhh, now I understand Ambi. . staying with me for a long time ahs made you too also very smart. . if i stay away from ved he will miss me.. .
YAY. . then we can both do "dil garden garden " (dreaming while awake as usual lol
Ambi:: Haa jiji. . . to ab aapko yeh baat par dhyan karna hoga. . baki sab aap par. . (Okay now Jiji, you seem to be all set and redy to go. . its all up to you now. . )
Sajni:: Lekin. . agar mein nehi zyada waqt tak lali lipistick ke bina reh saki to mein phir se lagaungi, HAaa Ambiii. . . (BUT. . if i cant live without lali lipistick for long. . I will have it back on me again. . yeeesss, AMbiii. . . )
ko baat nehi. . (no probs/ )break
: damn damn damn i gotta go offline now. . too busy for a few days. . and I hate it. . I have to go offline while my writing mode just fired up . . DAMN it. . . aww..w.w.w.w. I will definitely update this ASAP. . the earliest can be anytime i get the chance ,, but practically thinking . .if in writing mood, definitely by Sunday. .
PART 3 Hints:: , Ved gradualy starts to get some discomfort, Why? what and read
(u probably know why) . . Sajni transformation takes a toll . . not on Sajni but more on Ved. . . . . (temporary,
coz by end of this SS, I will bring her back to her usual self
) (a revamp of Part 1 hints. . they usually dont really happen entirely, but you never know, the more the writing mood lasting and the time available anything is possible lol. . )
sorry for all typos guys. .
its also first time i am writing a more dialog oriented writing as a SS. . so pelase forgive me for any inconsistencies/ errors. . I am not very good at typing hindi. . so I also included eng, translations. . .
Will update ASAP. . some issues have prevented a update at this time. . . but based on the hints for part 2 that i included in part 1,, they all did not happen , , coz i never plan things out lol. . but write as the flow goes along. . . so expect some drag,, but I will try my best to make it all worth it. . .
I personally had a unconfortable ,, just a bit, moment while initiating the AMbi Sajni talk. . but hope you guys like this part. . expecting feedback . . plaase give suggestions if any. . and make sure to hit the like button+ leave a comment