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ArHi OS: Only On One Condition*Re-posted* (Page 11)

..Raizada.. Senior Member
..Raizada..
..Raizada..

Joined: 14 April 2012
Posts: 475

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
I love Khushi here!

Telling him flat out all the things he done and how everything can't be forgiven in life.

She told him how she felt, she felt like she was something to be bought!

Loved it! But Arnav for eking some more would have been nice

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winiwonka Senior Member
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Joined: 02 June 2012
Posts: 550

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
A much needed OS!!!!! Clap

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riafna IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Amazing one. I really wish Khushi said all these but not in the tone of hate , with love in eyes and heart not in words. But I don't eant seperation too. She will easily forgive thats her character. But I think the best punidhment he will get when he came to know his Di for whom he did all these things betrayed him. Same Khushi was with him whole time.
Thanks for PM

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
simply awesome..loving it8

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Malvika18 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Wow! That was really amazing Zehra..
Superb OS! Very well written.. Big smile

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mayabegum IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Oh my gosh
what  fiery khushi, but i must say i quite liked her "alive" side
 had goosebumps while reading this and i was scared to read on further,
but in a way i was happy khushi was standing up for herself, 
i loved the way you wrote "one step back for his mistake and one step forward for forgiveness" that really got me in to it
As usual this was a brilliant os, and i loved reading it right from the start to the very end
thank you for the PM and continue writing more amazing stories ;D
-Maya

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sonia_92 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
"So Mr. Raizada, I am available yet
again for purchase. What is my
price this time?"

you killed it with this dialogue! brilliant

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AnnieARS Goldie
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Amazing.. I like this Khushi. Arnav , for at least once need to be told what wrong he has done. I see love in his eyes but no regret for his wrong doings...someone really needs to tell him that. I like this Khushi.

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