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...TERE ISHQ PE MARJAAVAA... (Page 9)

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged

Update soon

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Hey that was a luvly update my dear, hope Taani doesnt bcum kabab mein haddi and Kriyaansh moments r cumng soonSmile luvd how u portrayed Sharon in this one

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 4:14am | IP Logged
awsm one

sorry for late comment

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Awesum update...
Into and both the parts are amazing... Luved it...
Finally kriyaansh met... Embarrassed
Plsh pm the next part... Nd update soon...

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
wow yaar
awesome
plz update soon

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged
update plz

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by abhiyakreya

update plz


m working on it dear
i'll update asap..
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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
PART 3]



RECAP...
Rey: Baatcutter ...(parted away from her... calmly asks) ye kaise hua????
Kriya: ...


Story continues..
Kriya: kuch nhi hua Rey bs thodi si chot lg gyi...
(she said with full confidence that no one can say that she was lying..
everyone was convinced by her answer)
Rey: fir se jhooth...Baatcutter tum kabse itna jhooth bolne lagi????(angry look)
Taani: Rey, inhone bol to diya ki zara si chot hai..(actually ab Taani ko jealousy hone lagi thi)
Rey: zara si chot... ????????? can't u see kitni badi chot hai (showing her the wound)
The wound was indeed much but Taani protested and said
Taani: zara si chot to hai aur waise bhi ye konsa koi SPECIAL ONE hai jo aap sab itna worry kar rhe ho... (Sharon was about to shout on her when Rey yelled)
Rey: tum apni bakwaas band krogi... can't u see how much she is hurt... Or rahi baat SPECIAL ONE ki she is special for all of them( looking towards the whole gang) and she is special for ME
Taani was hell shocked on hearing this..
Taani: wat???? itna kya khaas hai isme jo sbhi iske peeche paagal ho rhe hai????

Rey ignored her as at this time he had to concentrate jst on his baatcutter coz she was in pain...
Rey took Kriya's hand nd started removing the dressings (baindage)
Taani moved forward and pulled him
Taanii: how dare u ignore me... or is nobody ke itna close kyu ho rhe ho.. aap kisi aur ke saath kaise ho skte ho...jbki aap mujhse pyaar krte ho..to iske liye itna pyaar itni care kyu??????
Reyam wr  fuming with anger...
Swayam was about to slap her when...Sharon slapped her so hard that she fell down near Kriya's feet...
All were hell shocked and so was with Kriya... she stood up and looked towrds three of them ( Rey and Swaron)
She bent towards Taani and was about to help her to get up when Swayam caught her arm..
Swayam: no Kriya she don't  deserve ur kindness...
Kriya: swyam tum ye kaise keh skte ho she is ur sis...
Taani: ha mai Swayam ki behan aur Rey ki gf...(she said with attitude)
Swayam was now full on fuming...he came and slapped her hard and even he hurt her lip while slapping her that her lip's corner was now bleeding...but no one cared xcpt Kriya...
Kriya: r u mad...(shouting) tum usse hurt kr rhe ho... she is ur sis... how can u do it dammit...!!!!
Swayam: ha unfortunately meri behan hai isiliye to maara hai coz mera haq hai ki jab bhi ye glti kre use sudhaarooo...
Kriya: to aaj jo kuch bhi ho raha hai isme iski kya glti??
Swayam: glti...????Kriya r u serious tum iski glti pooch rhi ho...???
Kriya: yes i am  mujhe bhi to pata chale ki iski glti kya hai
Swayam: to suno...
iski glti ye hai ki isne khud ko meri behan kaha...jbki itni cheap ldki mei behan nhi ho skti... never...
iski doosri glti...bt woh btaane se pehle i wanna ask u Rey
Rey:wt?
Swayam: jo Taani keh rhi hai kya wo sahi hai????
kya ye tumhari gf...??
(he was cut in middle by Rey)
Rey: Swayam tum aisa soch bhi kaise skte ho???
Rey: (turning towards Taani) aur tum tum smjhti kya ho apne aap ko
tum meri gf kabse??? kitni ajeeb baat hai na ki meri koi gf hai aur mujhe pta bhi nhi...
aajtak kya maine tumhe kaha that i love u????? kbhi tumhe hug kiya????? hug to door ki baat mai aaj tak kbhi tumhaare paas bhi nhi aaya...
Tumne us din jo kiya tha mujhe pehle hi smjh jaana chahiye tha dat u r not innocent...us din maine socha ki tum Swayam ki behan ho.. tum kbhi aisa krogi hi nhi to maine tumhe maaf kr diya bt us maafi ka tum galat faayda utha rhi ho and u'll pay for it...
Tum wo sab choro...aaj hum mein se kisi ne tumhaari help nhi ki when Sharon slapped u bt it was only Kriya... itna kuch hone ke baad bhi tum use attitude show kr rhi ho how could u Taani...
REALLY SHAME ON U...
Swayam: MUJHE SHARAM AATI HAI TAANI TUMHE APNI BEHAN KEHTE HUYE...
Taani: bhai aap ye kya keh rhe ho?????aur Rey aap iss Kriya ke liye mujhe chod rhe ho
i love u aap kyu nhi smjhte
isne...isne to aapko sirf hurt kiya hai
ye aapko kbhi khush nhi rakh paayegi
Rey, plzz leave her not me
she don't deserve u...
Rey: (slaps her) shaayad tumhe tumhaara jawaab mil gaya
Swayam: so nw...




Precap: Bhai aap aisa nhi kr skte Rey   plzzz bhabhi plzzz ...


wat will Swayam's reaction on this

jaan ne ke liye keep reading...TERE ISHQ PE MARJAAVAAN...

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