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glmorous_diva IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
when u gonna update???

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only_kriyansh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:56am | IP Logged

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kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 10:00am | IP Logged
berry muje iska update chahiye plz de dena Cry

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..Nancy.. Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged

                Part 8

Now our Rey was full on angry... and Swayam sensed this..
He was about to hold Rey but...


But to everyone's utter surprise he stood up and yelled

Rey: kyu tumhe saath aane mein koi problem hai??
nd mai keh raha hoo ki tum aaogi to aaogi...and that's final..
get that straight...(in a rude tone)

Everyone was shocked.. nd most was Kriya..
She felt bad that he yelled on her..
She sat with a baby face and having a cute pout on her face which made his anger flew away...
Sharon: WTH Rey..Ye kya tareeka hai Kriya se baat krne ka..
Rey: kyu tumhe kya prblm??wo meri Kriya hai mai jaise chahe use baat kru..
Kriya immediately looked up in shock..did he really said this?
She was looking at him with wide eyes..not only she even everyone was seeing him like this xcpt Swayam..

He smiled thinking iska kuch nahi ho skta..
Neha: What meaning u Rey?
Rey: What?
Vicky: are uska mtlb what do u mean?
Rey: ohh
Sharon: oh kya btaoo tumne aisa kyu kaha?
Swayam: wo actually na Sharon (stood up and went near Kriya and hugged her from back)(don't worry frndly hug hi hai) (he was about to speak when Rey cut him in b/w)
Rey: oye ye kya kar raha hai door reh use..
Rinni: Swayam to Sharon ka bf haina to ye Kriya ko kyu hug kar raha hai nd Rey itna over possessive kyu ho raha hai??
Simmi: pehli baar koi sahi ques poocha tumne keep it up rinni
Rinni: thnku thnku..
Sharon: ek second Rey tum itne possessive kyu ho rahe ho?
Rey: (was about to speak when swayam spoke)
Swayam: mai bta raha hoona..
Ye itna over possessive isliye ho raha hai coz...
Everyone: (xcpt Kriyaansh) Coz???
Swayam: coz..
Everyone: (xcpt Kriyaansh) Coz???
Swayam: coz..
Everyone: (xcpt Kriyaansh) Coz???
Swayam: coz...
Vicky: abbey ae kya coz coz laga rakha hai aage to bol..
Swaym: coz..(was about to speak when Vicky spoke)
Vi: firse coz tu bolta hai ya..
Swayam: bolne dega tabhi boloonga na
Vi: ha chal bol
Swayam: ye itna over possessive isliye ho raha hai cozz..(pause)
(Vicky glared at him)
coz humaare Rey aur Kriya ab Kriyaansh ban gaye hain..
everyone xcpt kriyaansh: what??
Bharat: abbey ye kab kaise huya?
VIshakha: ya dude how?
while everyone was asking ki kaise huya kab huya to swayam Rey ran and stood near Kriya...
nd whispered a which she ignored him..
Rey: (in mind) oopss ye kya hogya? Maine baatcutter ko naaraz kardiya..hey universeji..abhi to mili hai abhi se roothna shuru..
but koi baat nahi mai manaoonga aur vaise bhi ye to mera fav. Kaam hai BAATCUTTER KO MANAANA..
he smiled at himself..
Rey: (whispered) sorry Baatcutter...
She ignored him.
Swayam: (yelled) guyz mujhse kya poocha rahe ho jaaake un dono se pooch na..bewajah mujhe tang kr rhe ho..

Sharon made a pout as he said this..he quickly gave  peck on her cheeks as he thought no one will see them no actually when she pouted he got lost in her and forgot that everyone's staring at them...
Sharon blushed hard and looked down..
Gang: ohoo..!!!!!!!
Rey: are yaar thodi to sharam krle hum sab bhi hai yaha..
Swayam came to his senses and realized what he did and blushed a li'l to which gang hooted..
Sharon was blushing all the time..

Swayam: tum log humaare peeche kyu pade ho?
aaj to inki taang kheecho..
Rey glared at him.and he chuckled.
Sharon: yes MR.REYAANSH to use door raho..
Sharon: so when were u planning to tell me, not only me, hum sabko?
pehle bhi tumne humein nahi bataaya
ab plan ye tha ki humein tum dono ki shaadi ke baad btaaoge?
Kriyaansh looked at her shockingly in WHAT????????????
Sharon: what kya ab maine sahi to kaha?
Rey: nahi Sharon mai tum sbko btaane hi waala tha but wo .. woo
Kriya glared at him
Rey: acha ab sorry na guyzz

Gang: chl its okay..

Bharat: abbey yaar chalo na humein ghoomne jaana kaha chalein??

Kriya: How about camping?
Rey:haan haan...camping camping... (gave a broad grin)
Vicky: abbey oye jyaada mat uchal...
Everyone laughed while Rey made a cute pout...
Sharon: aawwwiiiee Vicky kyu daant rhe ho dekho na kitna cute lag raha hai..
Others giggled except Kriya..
She looked at him and their eyes met..with bg ohohoho tune..
But others talking disturbed their LLHH session...
Swayam: nahi yaar camping nahi beach pe chalet hain..
Kriya's face fell down...Seeing her Rey also became sad and just after a sec gave a deathly glare to Swayam who stood their as if nothing happened..
Everyone looked at Rey who was glaring Swayam and then looked at each other and gulped hard...

But to save his love Sharon spoke b/t and everyone sighed..
Sharon: kya swayam beach pe nahi camping krne hi chlte hain
To which Rey again gave a broad smile...
Everyone was like awww.
Swayam: okay..
Rey: So guyz Get ready we r going to the jungle...
Everyone: Jungle?????
Rey: haan jungle...wahi pe to maza aayega
Swayam (whispered) : sahi ja raha hai beta..
Kriya: mai nahi jaaoongi waha..mujhe dar lgta hai..
Sharon: exactly..
Rey: are baatcutter don't worry mai hoon na... (smiles widely)
Everyone except swayam: baat kyaa??
Swayam: are baatcutter..bhool gye tumhe bataya to tha Rey ki baatcutter...
Kriyaansh blushed
Everyone:ohhh...(big waala ohh)

Sharon: chodo Kriya ab to rey hai na he'll take care of you.. lets go guys..
Everyone..Yay...lets have fun..
Rey: guyz half an hour ke baad sbhi mere ghar pe..
All: okay..
Girls and boys went to their respective homes to grab their stuff..
Half an hour later..
Everyone was Kriya was the first to reach his house...
She ranged the doorbell..a servant came and opened the door...
Servant: Aayiye Kriya mam..
Kriya: (surprised) aapko mera naam kaise pata??
servant: mam is ghar mein sb aapko jaante hain.... (smiles)
Kriya: huh...???wo kaise??
Servant: Hum kyu nahi jaanenge aapko..Rey sir har waqt to aapko baatein krte rehte hain..
Servant: aap baithiye mai Rey sir ko bulaata hoon..
Kriya: hmm okay...
Nd he goes..but turns in his way..
Servant: mam aap aisa kijiye ki unke room mein hi chale jaayiye..
she nods
Servant take her to his room..nd leaves..

She knocks the door..but no reply..again reply..
finally enter his room and scanned the whole room but he was nowhere to be found.. she stood their smiling wide looking at something..
Above hi bed there was a huge pic of him and her..raadha kaise na jale last pose..
She remembered those days and a lone tear escaped her eye..
She was about to wipe it when a strong pair of muscular arms gripped her waist covering her she wasn't able to wipe her tears..
He was hugging her from back with a sweet smile playing on his lips...he kissed her nape..and reached to her shoulders..he slid his hands under her tee to get perfect grip on her waist and squeezed it..she was just enjoying his touch..
he soon reached her cheeks and was about to kiss when he found her cheeks wet..He turned her towards him and looked at her..he wiped her tears and was hell worried..he cupped her face and brought her close...
Rey: baatcutter kya  huya? Y r u crying? Kisi ne kuch kaha kya?
if u r not comfortable then..
She placed her finger on his lips...
And hugged him tight crying loud..this time a li'l bit louder not much..
He was hell worried and shocked to see her like that...
Rey: (almost on the verge of crying) baatcutter bolo na kya huya?
kisi ne tumhe kuch bola kya? Kisi ne tang kiya??kya huya?bolo na baatcutter??
kriya: (while hugging) m sorry Rey..maine aapko boht hurt kiya na..m sorry..
he just parted from her in anger..
Rey: WTH Kriya mai yaha mare jar aha hoon ki pata nahi tum ro kyu rahi ho aur tum itni faltu c baat ko leke baithi ho maine kaha than a ki is bare mein hum baat nahi krenge to kyu baar baar khud ko hurt kar rhi ho..
Tears were continuously flowing down her eyes as he shouted at her..
But to her utter surprise +shock he hugged her tight as he could..he hugged her as if he'll never let her go..
She was squeezed in his arms but enjoyed that very moment of being with him..
Rey: paagal baar baar sorry bolti rehti hai.. tumne mujhe hurt nahi kiya..tum mujhe kabhi hurt kar hi nahi skti...chaho bhi to nahi kr skti.
aur us raat haalaat hi aise the aur usmein tumhaari koi glti nahi hai so stop blaming urself..
aur my final decision aaj ke baad us raat ke bare mein koi baat nahi hogi
She just nodded a yes as an obedient child..he just smiled at her..
Everyone: AWWW...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kriyaansh broke the hug in an alarm and looked at the gang and then at each other and...


i know everyone want to kill me but sorry guyzz
busy these days...

gope so u liked it

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Edited by heavenly_angel - 15 December 2012 at 11:02am

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kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged

yupieee me 1st

update was really mindblowing,,,,sprlyk
i m loving it,,,,
rey possesive awww how cuteDay DreamingDay Dreaming
kriyaansh prt was amazingEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
nb kamini ek toh itna late update karti hai or upar se ending esi jaga ki muje jaldi update chahiye nhi toh tu gyiEvil Smile

Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 17 December 2012 at 3:43am

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anjali22 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged


awesome update
loved it

Edited by anjalijayan - 15 December 2012 at 11:12am

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Fate.Intervined IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
rey is a sweetheart...
the gang part was superb n kriyaansh awesomeDay Dreaming...
loved it...
thnx for pm...

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_sweetannu_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
wow superb update.
Possesive rey too cute Embarrassed
Kriyaansh and gang convo vry nice.
Camping. . . . ., . . Not a bed idea Wink
Loved it.

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