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...TERE ISHQ PE MARJAAVAA... (Page 43)

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
awesome part

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Read all d parts...
Dey r really awesome...
Plz continue n do pm me d next part...:) :)

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                    PART 7 (b)


She changed into a cute frock and came downstairs where everyone was already present.. xcpt Rey.

Everyone was present on dining table and were having their breakfast.

Swayam: hey Kriya.. gd mrng..

Kriya: gd mrng swayam.. gd mrng guyz…
Everyone wished her gd mrng and she sat for breakfast..

Here Rey was going to come downstairs but he stood at the upper stair as he was started staring at his baatcutter.. when he stood their her heart skipped a beat.. She quickly looked upward and found him smiling at her wide.. She too smiled but no one noticed it.. Then he mouthed a kiss to her.. She was dumbstruck by his action and looked down blushing…He smiled at her and came down..

Rey: hey guyz…gd mrng..
All xcpt Kriya: gd mrng Rey.."
He also sat for breakfast and started eating… All the time he was staring at his cute baatcutter and she was avoiding his eyes contact.. Swayam noticed Rey staring at her and nudged him..he soon came back to his senses..
(guyz now reyam talk but their convo is in whispering. So no one can hear it xcpt both)

Swayam: kya huya bada khush lag raha hai abhi to Kriya se tera patch up bhi nhi huya??
Rey: (looking at her) ho gya dude..
Swayam almost spit his food and everyone looked at him

Sharon: swayam are u ok?
Swayam: ya m fyn..
reyam again whisper talk
Swayam: kab? Kaise?
Rey: wok al raat jab tum log walk peg ye the to mai baatcutter ke room mein gya aur sab kuch sort out kr liya….
Swayam: congrats dude.. finally mujhe mera bestie firse waapas milega..
Rey: but mai to humesha se hi tere saath hoo
Swayam: humesha se……………!!!!!!!! jab se Kriya chali gyi thi tab se tune mere se theek se baat bhi nhi ki aur maine tujhe last time smile krte huye tab dekha tha jab tu kriya ke saath tha.
Swayam: mai tujhe aaj poor eek saal ke baad smile krte huye dekh raha hoo
Rey: all the credit goes to my baatcutter..
Swayam: my baatcutter hun…!!!!!!!(teasingly)
Rey just blushed…
now their whisper talk over..
Swayam: btw guyz humein college se ek week ki break hai to kahin ghoomne chale????
Rey: awesome idea dude… (rey ke man mein to chal raha tha ki use apni baatcutter ke saath aur time spend krne ko milega..
Sharon: ya guyz kahin chalte hai..
Neha: neha also agreeing to this..
Amar: haa yaal aul waise bhi hum boht time se ghoome nhi hain to talo talte hain…..
Swayam: kriya kya huya tum chalogi na?

Kriya: nahin Swayam mera man nhi kr raha tum log jaao..
hearing this answer from her Rey was about to shout what???????? But controlled as no one knows about their patch up xcpt Swayam..
He was angry+confused+worried in short mixed expressions and feelings..
Sharon: kyu kriya y u not coming?
Kriya: bas aise hi mera mood nahin hai
Swayam: but kriya tumhaare bina waha maza hi nhi aayega..tumhe to chalna hi hoga..
Everyone was continuously convincing her but she kept on saying no no no.. Now our Rey was full on angry… and Swayam sensed this.. He was about to hold Rey but…………………..



guyz next part bhi krti hoo

abhi maarna mat ki maine itna chota sa kyu diya but guys plz bear me..

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
awsummm update berrySmileSmile
luv it,,,,,waiting 4 nxt prtBig smile


Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 30 October 2012 at 12:32pm

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Amazing part preetu
but why kria is refusing..

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
good one... short yet cute

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it
update the rest part soon

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Itna chotu part...!
N kria ne trip pe aane se mana kr dis...haawww...
Ab Rey kya krne wala h...
Update nxt prt ASAP!

Edited by d3fan4eva - 30 October 2012 at 9:44am

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