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kriyaanshurock Senior Member
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heavenly_angel

Originally posted by kriyaanshurock

Originally posted by heavenly_angel

Originally posted by kriyaanshurock

res...Ouch
you mean i actually, srsly missed THIS?????ShockedShocked
preetu kamini, u r so DEAD!!!!AngryAngry
first update ka res kar rahi hoon, har update ka ab tujhe doongi!!
i am so mad at you!!!!

unres!! Big smile

superb!
fantastic!
fadoo!!
mind blowing!!
jo bolo jo kam hain!!!!!!

preetu, kamini! u r such an awesumest writer and u not even telling me about this!!!!
mission kriyaansh!! <3
sketches and pics of rey and kriyaansh!!! <3
kriya ki haalat!! Cry
rey ki haalat!!Cry
he visiting her house everyday! awww!!!!

kamini, agar achcha nahi likha hota toh main ab bhi tujhse gussa hoti aur tera khoon kar chukki hoti!!! par tere out-of-the-world writing skills ne tujhe bacha liya!!! 

chal, next padti hoon!!!Big smile



chl bhagwaan ka shukar hai
mere is ff ne mujhe bacha to liya

ab chl tujhe ek aur btaa doo

mera ek aur ff hai bt maine abhi uska ek hi chappy post kiya hai
use bhi padh lena warna tu baad mein mujhe daantegi

scrap mein link send krti hoo

alright!!
i guess we are cool now!!
but next time aisa nahi karna!!! kuch bhi likhe sabse pehle mujhe!!! olright??
samjhi????
ab send kar!!
thank god sirf ekk chappy warna phir se daant khaati!!!


ha krti hoo bt mujhe dhoondhna padega

coz mujhe nhi pata last time maine use kab check kiya tha...

hehe...mere arsha ke saath bhi aisa haal hain, aur kriyaansh ka toh tum peechha hi nahi chhodte!!LOL

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kriyaanshurock Senior Member
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
second chappy!!!
just OMG!!!!!
i love it!!!
i love you!!!

ok from the starting...

 Kriya come on get ready aur dekho aaj to mai khud tumhe bula rahi hoo... dekho mai SHARON RAIPRAKASH khud chal k aayi hoo..

hehe...kriya lost in her dreamland aka reyaanshland!! awww...
its sharon raiprakash sweetheart, bahar aa jaa warna!!! 

Then suddenly Sharon shouted: swayam dekho wahaa shaayad Rey haina?? (sharon was jst pretending)

woahh!!! tunne sharon ko kitn clever banaya hain!!
nice-nice!!! 
her attempts were so funny specially kriya's reaction...awww...
just love KriSha!!!

(on hearing Rey's name she made her straight and nodded her head in YES)

ahemmm...ahemm...
gang, frndz, best ffrndz...sab bool gayi!! no to everything!! but rey...ooohlalaaa!!
i am so happy!! the way swaron are helping kriya, its just so WOW!!!!

She became sad.. seeing her face swaron also became sad but soon sharon said: u are luking damn cute.. agar aise hi smile krte huye REY ke saamne jaaogi to woh to gaya kaam se

miss. sharon, rey ko apni baatcutter ke alaavaa koi kaam nahi!!!
i wish i could see kriya!!
yaar yeh sab show mein kyun nahi aata??

(Note: Kriya is now fully back to normal)
PartyParty

it was SHARON RAIPRAKASH's evil smile and they knew very well that this smile of Sharon is really dangerous...

hehehe...

sorry, ab saare dialogue wise likhoon gi toh god only knows how LONG this comment will be and i'm really busy so sorry short now!!

KriYam's Bonding!!:: awww!!!!!
KriSha Sisters: yayy!!!! so cute!!! sharon and kriya are just shoo shweet!!!!

smriti's mom agreed to what her daughter wanted and made her took back her promise, so sweet!!! 
the way smriti has changed, i loved it!!! so good to see her like this!!

the way kriya was being nervous, aww...poor she!!
but swaron had it all under control!! they sat next to her and all that wasso refreshing memories (good and sweet ones) of d3!!

gang met kriya!! weaklings and dazzlings both hugging her!! correction: breaking her bones in the name of hugging!! 

rey met kriya!!! and was totally driven in her magic!!! so cutely written!!! 
taani the naani u r soo so so irritating!!!
thinking rey can fall for you, oh plz f**k off bitch!!

the fake anger...aww...

the smiles...aww...

everything just ..awww...!!!!!!

kriya's hand mystery, the vp mystery, so many mysteries!!!!

chall now me reading the next part so ll i wanna say is::



PREETU, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyaanshurock

second chappy!!!
just OMG!!!!!
i love it!!!
i love you!!!

ok from the starting...

 Kriya come on get ready aur dekho aaj to mai khud tumhe bula rahi hoo... dekho mai SHARON RAIPRAKASH khud chal k aayi hoo..

hehe...kriya lost in her dreamland aka reyaanshland!! awww...
its sharon raiprakash sweetheart, bahar aa jaa warna!!! 

Then suddenly Sharon shouted: swayam dekho wahaa shaayad Rey haina?? (sharon was jst pretending)

woahh!!! tunne sharon ko kitn clever banaya hain!!
nice-nice!!! 
her attempts were so funny specially kriya's reaction...awww...
just love KriSha!!!

(on hearing Rey's name she made her straight and nodded her head in YES)

ahemmm...ahemm...
gang, frndz, best ffrndz...sab bool gayi!! no to everything!! but rey...ooohlalaaa!!
i am so happy!! the way swaron are helping kriya, its just so WOW!!!!

She became sad.. seeing her face swaron also became sad but soon sharon said: u are luking damn cute.. agar aise hi smile krte huye REY ke saamne jaaogi to woh to gaya kaam se

miss. sharon, rey ko apni baatcutter ke alaavaa koi kaam nahi!!!
i wish i could see kriya!!
yaar yeh sab show mein kyun nahi aata??

(Note: Kriya is now fully back to normal)
PartyParty

it was SHARON RAIPRAKASH's evil smile and they knew very well that this smile of Sharon is really dangerous...

hehehe...

sorry, ab saare dialogue wise likhoon gi toh god only knows how LONG this comment will be and i'm really busy so sorry short now!!

KriYam's Bonding!!:: awww!!!!!
KriSha Sisters: yayy!!!! so cute!!! sharon and kriya are just shoo shweet!!!!

smriti's mom agreed to what her daughter wanted and made her took back her promise, so sweet!!! 
the way smriti has changed, i loved it!!! so good to see her like this!!

the way kriya was being nervous, aww...poor she!!
but swaron had it all under control!! they sat next to her and all that wasso refreshing memories (good and sweet ones) of d3!!

gang met kriya!! weaklings and dazzlings both hugging her!! correction: breaking her bones in the name of hugging!! 

rey met kriya!!! and was totally driven in her magic!!! so cutely written!!! 
taani the naani u r soo so so irritating!!!
thinking rey can fall for you, oh plz f**k off bitch!!

the fake anger...aww...

the smiles...aww...

everything just ..awww...!!!!!!

kriya's hand mystery, the vp mystery, so many mysteries!!!!

chall now me reading the next part so ll i wanna say is::



PREETU, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!



awwwiieieieii meri kamini
tune to mujhe bhi hara diya
pehle to mai itne lmbe cmmnts krti thi bt
ab tu first aa gyi

i love u too
schi mein acha laga ya jhooth bol rhi hai

bt i love u too

nw type ur chappy
i wanna read it badly

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heavenly_angel

Originally posted by kriyaanshurock

second chappy!!!
just OMG!!!!!
i love it!!!
i love you!!!

ok from the starting...

 Kriya come on get ready aur dekho aaj to mai khud tumhe bula rahi hoo... dekho mai SHARON RAIPRAKASH khud chal k aayi hoo..

hehe...kriya lost in her dreamland aka reyaanshland!! awww...
its sharon raiprakash sweetheart, bahar aa jaa warna!!! 

Then suddenly Sharon shouted: swayam dekho wahaa shaayad Rey haina?? (sharon was jst pretending)

woahh!!! tunne sharon ko kitn clever banaya hain!!
nice-nice!!! 
her attempts were so funny specially kriya's reaction...awww...
just love KriSha!!!

(on hearing Rey's name she made her straight and nodded her head in YES)

ahemmm...ahemm...
gang, frndz, best ffrndz...sab bool gayi!! no to everything!! but rey...ooohlalaaa!!
i am so happy!! the way swaron are helping kriya, its just so WOW!!!!

She became sad.. seeing her face swaron also became sad but soon sharon said: u are luking damn cute.. agar aise hi smile krte huye REY ke saamne jaaogi to woh to gaya kaam se

miss. sharon, rey ko apni baatcutter ke alaavaa koi kaam nahi!!!
i wish i could see kriya!!
yaar yeh sab show mein kyun nahi aata??

(Note: Kriya is now fully back to normal)
PartyParty

it was SHARON RAIPRAKASH's evil smile and they knew very well that this smile of Sharon is really dangerous...

hehehe...

sorry, ab saare dialogue wise likhoon gi toh god only knows how LONG this comment will be and i'm really busy so sorry short now!!

KriYam's Bonding!!:: awww!!!!!
KriSha Sisters: yayy!!!! so cute!!! sharon and kriya are just shoo shweet!!!!

smriti's mom agreed to what her daughter wanted and made her took back her promise, so sweet!!! 
the way smriti has changed, i loved it!!! so good to see her like this!!

the way kriya was being nervous, aww...poor she!!
but swaron had it all under control!! they sat next to her and all that wasso refreshing memories (good and sweet ones) of d3!!

gang met kriya!! weaklings and dazzlings both hugging her!! correction: breaking her bones in the name of hugging!! 

rey met kriya!!! and was totally driven in her magic!!! so cutely written!!! 
taani the naani u r soo so so irritating!!!
thinking rey can fall for you, oh plz f**k off bitch!!

the fake anger...aww...

the smiles...aww...

everything just ..awww...!!!!!!

kriya's hand mystery, the vp mystery, so many mysteries!!!!

chall now me reading the next part so ll i wanna say is::



PREETU, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!



awwwiieieieii meri kamini
tune to mujhe bhi hara diya
pehle to mai itne lmbe cmmnts krti thi bt
ab tu first aa gyi

i love u too
schi mein acha laga ya jhooth bol rhi hai

bt i love u too

nw type ur chappy
i wanna read it badly
itna thak gayi main!!
kal update plz!!!
abhi me thinking of writing something else!!Wink
yayy!!! main tujhe jeet gayi!!! Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 7:57am | IP Logged
mindblowing update
sharey were jealous of kriyam i loved it
kriyansh cute fight it was amazing i miss those now
update soon and pm me

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heavenly_angel

Originally posted by hetalt29

Originally posted by heavenly_angel

Originally posted by hetalt29

Res !!
Preetu.. M angry ! Angry
Update kiya and bataya bhi nahi !!! Cry
Kal raat ko unres karungi !
*Unres*
Oops i am so late ! Sowwiee.. Sowwieee.. Sowiieee...
And Update karte time tune bataya bhi nahi *Pout*
Mere comment kinna Piche hai !
Mind u !! Next time update ke pehele hi Mujhko khabar mil jaani chaiye !
Warna


Chalo ab update ke baare mein kuch baat karte hai...
Ekdam Mast update meri kamini... Loveddd itt... Ekdam super-duper awesome...
Uff !! Achaa hua chudail taani hamare KR ke life se chali gayi !
And swayam crying for that chudail ! No please.. Swayam aise chudail ke liye apne tears waste nahi karte !Swayam tellin kriya.. U are cute...
Looks like something is burning... LOL
Oops its sharon and Rey burning with jealousy... Hehe.. Rofl... LOL LOL
Rinni: are nil ye kya bol rahe ho Rey kaha jal raha
hai dekho kahi se bhi koi flame hi nhi hai
hahha.. Rinni ka statement pad ke toh i was Rofling... ROFL
KriSha's bonding was supercute... Embarrassed
Kriyaansh wiping each others tears... Aww.. I am imagining that.. So adourable... <img src="http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m022.gif" alt="" />

And dusra wala ff jaaldi update kar !
Warna.. <img src="http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m191.gif]" />

Hehehahaha *evil laugh*


thnk god ki teko pasand aaya
aur doosre waale ff ke liye mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha isliye kuch dino baad update kroongiConfused

But jaldi karna !!
Kamini tu toh bhul bhi gayi thi... Achaa hua maine yaad dilaya. Warna usska update toh kabhi milta hi nahi !


are meri maa mai update krdoongiEmbarrassed

Better !
Waise mein tera maa nahi hu... BETAAA!!! LOL
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchitasaphire

mindblowing update
sharey were jealous of kriyam i loved it
kriyansh cute fight it was amazing i miss those now
update soon and pm me


thnks for reading sweety
will surely pm uEmbarrassed
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it

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