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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: heavenly_angel



ha krti hoo bt mujhe dhoondhna padega

coz mujhe nhi pata last time maine use kab check kiya tha...

hehe...mere arsha ke saath bhi aisa haal hain, aur kriyaansh ka toh tum peechha hi nahi chhodte!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
second chappy!!!
just OMG!!!!!
i love it!!!
i love you!!!

ok from the starting...

 Kriya come on get ready aur dekho aaj to mai khud tumhe bula rahi hoo... dekho mai SHARON RAIPRAKASH khud chal k aayi hoo..

hehe...kriya lost in her dreamland aka reyaanshland!! awww...
its sharon raiprakash sweetheart, bahar aa jaa warna!!! 

Then suddenly Sharon shouted: swayam dekho wahaa shaayad Rey haina?? (sharon was jst pretending)

woahh!!! tunne sharon ko kitn clever banaya hain!!
nice-nice!!! 
her attempts were so funny specially kriya's reaction...awww...
just love KriSha!!!

(on hearing Rey's name she made her straight and nodded her head in YES)

ahemmm...ahemm...
gang, frndz, best ffrndz...sab bool gayi!! no to everything!! but rey...ooohlalaaa!!
i am so happy!! the way swaron are helping kriya, its just so WOW!!!!

She became sad.. seeing her face swaron also became sad but soon sharon said: u are luking damn cute.. agar aise hi smile krte huye REY ke saamne jaaogi to woh to gaya kaam se

miss. sharon, rey ko apni baatcutter ke alaavaa koi kaam nahi!!!
i wish i could see kriya!!
yaar yeh sab show mein kyun nahi aata??

(Note: Kriya is now fully back to normal)
🥳🥳

it was SHARON RAIPRAKASH's evil smile and they knew very well that this smile of Sharon is really dangerous...

hehehe...

sorry, ab saare dialogue wise likhoon gi toh god only knows how LONG this comment will be and i'm really busy so sorry short now!!

KriYam's Bonding!!:: awww!!!!!
KriSha Sisters: yayy!!!! so cute!!! sharon and kriya are just shoo shweet!!!!

smriti's mom agreed to what her daughter wanted and made her took back her promise, so sweet!!! 
the way smriti has changed, i loved it!!! so good to see her like this!!

the way kriya was being nervous, aww...poor she!!
but swaron had it all under control!! they sat next to her and all that wasso refreshing memories (good and sweet ones) of d3!!

gang met kriya!! weaklings and dazzlings both hugging her!! correction: breaking her bones in the name of hugging!! 

rey met kriya!!! and was totally driven in her magic!!! so cutely written!!! 
taani the naani u r soo so so irritating!!!
thinking rey can fall for you, oh plz f**k off bitch!!

the fake anger...aww...

the smiles...aww...

everything just ..awww...!!!!!!

kriya's hand mystery, the vp mystery, so many mysteries!!!!

chall now me reading the next part so ll i wanna say is::



PREETU, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: kriyaanshurock

second chappy!!!

just OMG!!!!!
i love it!!!
i love you!!!

ok from the starting...

 Kriya come on get ready aur dekho aaj to mai khud tumhe bula rahi hoo... dekho mai SHARON RAIPRAKASH khud chal k aayi hoo..

hehe...kriya lost in her dreamland aka reyaanshland!! awww...
its sharon raiprakash sweetheart, bahar aa jaa warna!!! 

Then suddenly Sharon shouted: swayam dekho wahaa shaayad Rey haina?? (sharon was jst pretending)

woahh!!! tunne sharon ko kitn clever banaya hain!!
nice-nice!!! 
her attempts were so funny specially kriya's reaction...awww...
just love KriSha!!!

(on hearing Rey's name she made her straight and nodded her head in YES)

ahemmm...ahemm...
gang, frndz, best ffrndz...sab bool gayi!! no to everything!! but rey...ooohlalaaa!!
i am so happy!! the way swaron are helping kriya, its just so WOW!!!!

She became sad.. seeing her face swaron also became sad but soon sharon said: u are luking damn cute.. agar aise hi smile krte huye REY ke saamne jaaogi to woh to gaya kaam se

miss. sharon, rey ko apni baatcutter ke alaavaa koi kaam nahi!!!
i wish i could see kriya!!
yaar yeh sab show mein kyun nahi aata??

(Note: Kriya is now fully back to normal)
🥳🥳

it was SHARON RAIPRAKASH's evil smile and they knew very well that this smile of Sharon is really dangerous...

hehehe...

sorry, ab saare dialogue wise likhoon gi toh god only knows how LONG this comment will be and i'm really busy so sorry short now!!

KriYam's Bonding!!:: awww!!!!!
KriSha Sisters: yayy!!!! so cute!!! sharon and kriya are just shoo shweet!!!!

smriti's mom agreed to what her daughter wanted and made her took back her promise, so sweet!!! 
the way smriti has changed, i loved it!!! so good to see her like this!!

the way kriya was being nervous, aww...poor she!!
but swaron had it all under control!! they sat next to her and all that wasso refreshing memories (good and sweet ones) of d3!!

gang met kriya!! weaklings and dazzlings both hugging her!! correction: breaking her bones in the name of hugging!! 

rey met kriya!!! and was totally driven in her magic!!! so cutely written!!! 
taani the naani u r soo so so irritating!!!
thinking rey can fall for you, oh plz f**k off bitch!!

the fake anger...aww...

the smiles...aww...

everything just ..awww...!!!!!!

kriya's hand mystery, the vp mystery, so many mysteries!!!!

chall now me reading the next part so ll i wanna say is::



PREETU, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!



awwwiieieieii meri kamini
tune to mujhe bhi hara diya
pehle to mai itne lmbe cmmnts krti thi bt
ab tu first aa gyi

i love u too
schi mein acha laga ya jhooth bol rhi hai

bt i love u too

nw type ur chappy
i wanna read it badly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: heavenly_angel



awwwiieieieii meri kamini
tune to mujhe bhi hara diya
pehle to mai itne lmbe cmmnts krti thi bt
ab tu first aa gyi

i love u too
schi mein acha laga ya jhooth bol rhi hai

bt i love u too

nw type ur chappy
i wanna read it badly

itna thak gayi main!!
kal update plz!!!
abhi me thinking of writing something else!!😉
yayy!!! main tujhe jeet gayi!!! ðŸ˜ƒðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing update
sharey were jealous of kriyam i loved it
kriyansh cute fight it was amazing i miss those now
update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: heavenly_angel



are meri maa mai update krdoongi😳


Better !
Waise mein tera maa nahi hu... BETAAA!!! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire

mindblowing update

sharey were jealous of kriyam i loved it
kriyansh cute fight it was amazing i miss those now
update soon and pm me



thnks for reading sweety
will surely pm u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: tinatartari

awesome update

loved it



thnkkss for reading😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
yayyy!!!! they're back!!! 

itnaaa sweet update tha!! 

Sharon aur Rey ki jealousy...!! heheheheee

Nd d fite between Swaron nd Kriya!! 

that cutipie wala scene kitne cute lag rhe honge Kriya aur Sharon!!! 

d update was sooo cute!! :) luved it 

update soon!! :)