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...TERE ISHQ PE MARJAAVAA... (Page 2)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 6:58am | IP Logged
nice intro and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
woo 
what a start keep it up 
nd update fast 

nd long wala ok ...

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Wow. , . . .
Awsome concept. . .
How cute of rey,voh humesha kriya k apartmnt k niche jaake baitha h. . .
Hw sweet of him. . . .
Realy happy 4 al d couplez. . . .
Jst wish rey n kriya bhi jaldi mil jaye. . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . . .
N,plz pm me wen u update the nxt part . . .
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Awesome intro
Waiting for 1st part
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
awsm start dear

pls pm me when u update :)
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Awesome
Thanks for the pm
..Nancy.. Goldie
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
ok nw mai aagya m back wid my first part of my first ff
chlo nw no bak bak
njoy the update KRIYAANSHIANS...<3


PART - 1

As usual Rey is sitting in front of Kriya's house and then he see a girl peeping thru window of Kriya's room (guys obvious si baat hai  agr Kriya ke room mein hai to  wo ladki Kriya hi hogi na)….. Rey saw that grl and the first wrd came out his mouth is BAATCUTTER………….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But then he thinks dat how she could be my baatcutter.. He says to himself that baatcutter to yahaan hai hi nhi who to ek saal pehle Mumbai aur mujhe chod kr chli gyi thi ("mujhe chod kr chli gyi thi" while saying this line a gr8 pain of not being with her could be seen in his and eyes….. His heart craved at that tym )….                                                                                                        
He then thinks that this must be his imagination and ignores it and walks away frm thr……
The nxt day was going to held a competition in St. Louis though it was a dance comp. so everyone was very excited xcpt one guy,, any guesses,, chodo yaar ,,,,, it was Rey. From the day his baatcutter left he didn't even enjoyed his dance (let me tell you Rey ne dance nhi choda hai bas he was missing kriya…)…… That day was fully boring  for Rey and in evening Rey was sitting in front of her house and that day he again saw her peeping thru window but again thought that its his imagination and walked away. This happnd for many days and then one day Rey was in front of her house and in college Swayam had an important work so he wanted to meet Rey. Then he called Rey but it was unreachable so he thought of going to his home and then he saw the clock and realized and thought
Swayam: Rey to abhi ghar pen hi hoga and I know ki wo kahaa hoga
So Swayam walked out of college and suddenly he bumps into someone the girl was about to fall but our majnu caught her and that was none other than Sharon and there begins a look look hawa hawa  session after some tym they came back to their senses and Swayam realized that he had to go to Rey and then Sharon asked
Sharon: Swayam where are u going???
Swayam: Wo main Rey ke paas jar aha hoo kuch kaam hai
Sharon: okk bbye
Swayam: Bye
And Swayam goes and reaches in front of Kriya's place as he knew that Rey would be here and Rey was sitting there. That day again Rey saw Kriya and was lost in her as he thought that it was his imagination then Swayam kept his hand on Rey and Rey came back to reality.
Swayam: Hey dude! Actually main jaanta hoo ki ye tym tumhe akele spend krna hota hai but I had some work.
Rey: kaisi baatein kr rhe ho Swayam tumhare saath hone se main kabhi bhi disturb nhi hota………(silence for a min)…………………………… ha kya kaam tha
Swayam: ha wo actually tum GS ho so (while talking Swayam looked at Kriya's room's window and saw Kriya standing there and went numb.. he forgot why was he up to Rey for which work)
Rey: ha bolo Swayam kya hua chup kyu ho gye??
Swayam also thought that its just his imagination and ignored it and he discussed about the work with Rey and they both walked away while talking.
The nxt day Swaron were passing in front of Kriya's house and both looked at her house and they saw Kriya who was looking at moon with tears flowing down her cheeks this tym Swayam didn't ignored it and went to the door of her house and found that it wasn't locked and he realized that something's fishy..
He went inside the house Sharon also followed him and went inside.
Swayam went to Kriya's room and he was shocked to see her room after a few seconds Sharon also came and saw her room and was about to scream but she controlled herself and soon both Swayam and Sharon were in tears..
Actually that room's walls covered with kriyaansh and Rey's pictures and the floor was covered with Rey's sketches made by Kriya and her gang's sketches.
And the area near her window where Kriya was standing was covered with blood that was continuously flowing from her left arm.
The drops of blood were flowing like water drops are falling but that blood that wound didn't bother her as she was busy staring at moon. Swaron were standing there numb with tears flowing down. But then Swayam ran to Kriya who was standing there crying silently coz from a year she was crying and crying and now tears were not anymore in her eyes.
Her eyes were red and she had dark circles. She was not even able to stand properly coz of weakness. She was about to fall but then Swayam caught her and rested her on the bed and Sharon took her in her lap and thought that she is sleeping but soon she found that she is faint.
Swayam put some water on her face to woke her up and she woke and was shocked to see Sharon and she hugged Swayam tightly and they both cried hard  seeing this Sharon also hugged them both and cried..
Soon they parted from each other and there was a silence that was killing  Swaron but that silence wasn't bothering Kriya as she was in silence from one year..

Then suddenly door opened and everyone turned back to see who was it and they saw Smriti who was standing there in tears and she ran and hugged Kriya and asked that why she did this to herself??????????
Smriti: (shouting) Kriya ye tumne apna kya haal bna liya hai maine tumhe kahaa tha ki maine apna promise vaapas le liya hai but tum…………… main tumhe yahaa isliye chodke gyi thi kit um waapas se apni life jee sako (while saying this she felled on her knees crying hard)
Swaron were not getting anything but they both went to her mom and tried to calm her.
Swaron which were unnoticed by Smriti then noticed them. By the time Kriya was gone from there and Smriti begged them to help her to give her daughter's life back..
Swayam: aunty aap chinta mat kijiye mai apni best frnd ko uski lyf vaapas la ke doonga.. (smiling)
Sharon: sirf tum nhi mai bhi.. and they all smiled………


Precap: Mission Kriyaansh...

okk nw guyzz bs ab nxt ke liye wait for 3-4 days...
bye peeps...
aur kaisa laga jaroor bataana

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:08am | IP Logged
hmmm... lykd it alot... yaar... good going...

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