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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
just amazing Kriya the diva...
but yeh Taani ka kya raaz hai?
malhotra?
VP is Taani's father... real taani
aur shvam n Kriya??????

gosh update soon

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Yay that taani is not swayam sis
Why u stop it here
Pls update it soon

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:15am | IP Logged
nyc update bt i dint get 1 thng
hw z it possible tat a bro doesnt knw tat she z his sis??

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinatartari

nyc update bt i dint get 1 thng
hw z it possible tat a bro doesnt knw tat she z his sis??


you'll get to knw this in next update..dear
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Awesome updates

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Amazing part
nt fare u cnt stop like this plz update soon..

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Edited by heavenlyangel - 08 September 2012 at 4:06am
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PART 6

Recap:

Kriya: I knw Swayam ki tumhaare liye aur aap sbhi ke liye Shivam ko trust krna mushkil hai aur shaayad mujhe bhi (a tear escaped from her eye bt she lowered her lashes and wiped it)

Kriya: (facing all of them) but yahi sach hai..
Swaym:theek hai''''''.. to maine yeh decision liya hai ki'''

 

Srry guyzzz Precap won hi hai jo maine last chapter mein diya tha ..


Story continues

Swayam: theek hai bt apna decision sunnane se pehle (towards Kriya) tum mujhe btaao ki ye sab tumhe kaise pata
Taani: bhai aap is se kyu pooch rhe ho mai sach btaati hoo
sach ye hai ki mai hi aapki behan hoo TAANI SHEKHAWAT na ki TAANI MALHOTRA'' aur ye ldki jhooth bol rahi hai'mai (she was cut by Kriya)

Kriya: jst stop it both ho gaya (towards Swayam) Swayam tumhe jan na hai na ki mujhe ye sab kaise pata so lemme tell u'

Kriya: us Pre-valentines night (hearing this Rey became sad bt Kriya noticed it)

She wanted to go and hug him and tell him that all she said that night was a lie but she knew that its not the time..
Kriya: us Pre-valentines night ke baad maine college aana chod diya coz mai aur meri mom vaapas dehradun chale gaye the. Ek din hamaare ghar ke saamne maine Swayam ko Taani ke saath dekha aur kisi passerby ne mujhe bataaya ki taani aur Swayam bhai behan hai'

 

Now guyz flashback starts

Kriya(selftalk) Swayam thnku universe ji aapne itne dino baad km se km mujhe apne bestie ko dekhne ka mauka to diya aur m happy ki who khush hai..
 par uske saath ye ldki kon hai
(lemme tell u Kriya apne garden mein khadi thi near the entrance )

She asked a passerby about them

Passerby: Kriya ye dono bhai behan hai.. Is ladki ka naam Taani hai. Ye yahi kuch dino ke liye Dehradun mein rukegi bt iska bhai Mumbai mein rehta hai'
Kriya: ok thnku
PB: anytime..
she went in her room and kept thinking about Taani and Swayam..
after some time her chain of thoughts was broken by Kriya's mom
Smriti: Kriya beta come down ghar pe koi aaya hai..

Kriya: yeah mom
She went downstairs and saw a men and a woman with a girl
they all could not see each other as their back was facing kriya she wasn't able to see them.
She went in front of them.
Kriya: ji namastey
bt jst then she was shocked to see Taani standin there
bt she didn't said anything and sat .
Smriti: Kriya ye hai Mr. and Mrs. Malhotra aur ye unki beti Taani malhotra
u knw wat hum teeno ek hi college mein padhte the aur hum 10 years ke baad mil rhe hai..
She smiled at them'
Kriya too smiled..
Smriti: Kriya y don't u show Taani our house
Kriya: ya sure. Come taani

Taani: okk
they both went..
they went to garden
In garden
Taani got a call she saw the caller id and smiled
It was of Rey..
Kriya: I think ur bf really wanna knw ki aap kaha ho..
okk u talk to him I'll go inside..
Taani: are nhi nothing personal or waise bhi Rey mere bf nhi hai
Hearing Rey's name Kriya was hell shocked
Kriya: Rey???
Taani: ha Rey mai Mumbai mein St. Louis mein padhti hoo na aur mai wahaa ki ags hoo nd rey is the gs..
Kriya: okk"

Taani lifts the call
Rey: hey Taani tum kaha ho
Taani got strtld at his qstion which Kriya could see on her face..
Kriya mouthed: are u okay
Taani nodded in agreement
bt Taani thodi si paagal haina isliye jab wo ghabraayi to glti se usne speaker o kr diya
Now Kriya could hear everything
Rey: Taani .. helllooo'. Taani are u dere.
Taani: ya m here
Rey: kya hua
taani: wo 'woo  again she strtld
Rey: (irritated) forget it
ye btao kit um ho kaha
Taani: wo mai Pune mein hoo
Rey: tum pune mein kya kr rhi ho college mein itna kaam hai aur tum pune chali gyi.. How could u be so careless'.(he was really frustrated coz college schedule was so hectic)

Rey: ab chup kyu ho bolo??
Kriya who was hearing all this was very shocked as she had never heard Rey talking like this to anyone..and she was shocked coz Taani was in Dehradun bt y she said that she is in pune y she lied)

Bt she ignored it
Rey:ok fyn tell me ki tum waapas ka baa rhi ho???
Taani: after one week..
Rey: WTH on earth do u think of urself tum is college ki ags ho aur mai gs .
bt I don't think kit um ags ban ne ke laayak bhi ho..
college mein itna sab kuch ho raha hai bt u tumhe ghoomne ki paqdi hai
sach mein u r EARTHLOVER and he cuts the call
Taani knew that this is gonna come so she ignored it..

Kriya: ye aapke college ke ags itne gusse mein kyu?
Taani: wo actually hmaare college mein aajkal both kaam rehta hai so only gs nhi sa,mbhaal skte bt hmaare gs boht hi efficient hai isliye wok r lete hai bt fir frustrate ho jaate hai' ab to mujhe aadat ho gyi hai..

Kriya: ok..
andar chale..
taani: ya
they went in'
Smriti: acha hua tum dono aa gye mai bulaane hi vaali thi..
Khushboo: Taani beta chle we gotta go..
Taani: ya mom..
they left.. then Smriti also went to her room.. Kriya sta their thinking about Rey, swayam and taani

Kriya: selftalk: ye taani to pehle Swyam ke saath thi or wo PB to bol raha tha ki ye Swaym ki sis hai' aura b ye Malhotras

I knw ki swayam ke parents ye nhi hai
uske mom dad to ny mein rehte hai aur unka naam to Sheshank Shekhawat hai..
She went outside and saw Taani standing with some boys and talking to them..

She could hear their talk.
guy1: hey Taani ab yahaa kya krne aayi ho?? I mean Swayam to wahaa hai aur tera prince charming Reyaansh singhania bhi'
Taani: are yahaa to mai apne parents ke saath thode dino ke liye aayi hoo
warna wahaa to saara din bhai bhai bhai keh keh kr dimaag kharaab ho gya tha'
ab ja ke thoda sa break mila hai
bt seriously ye obedient behan ki acting krna boht mushkil kaam hai'
everyone laughs at this'

Kriya was dumbstruck.. Now she got to know that Taani is not swayam's sis. She was standing there thinking about swayam when someone tapped her shoulder from back
She turned around and was hell shocked to see Shivam standing there..
Kriya: SHIVAM U?????
Shivam: hi kria''
Kriya: tum yaha kyu aaye ho??
Shivam: I knw Kriya ki ye jo kuch bhi hua ye sab meri wajah se hua hai
b tab mujhe realize hogya hai that I was wrong
Sorry kriya m really sorry
He fell on his knees crying
Kriya bent down to help him

Kriya: m happy ki tumhe apni galati ka ehsaas ho gya
Shivam: to tumne mujhe maaf kr diya??
KriyaJ ha kr diya

Shivam hugged Kriya to which she also responded..

Soon they broke the hug and Shivam saw Taani

Shivam: Taani ye yaha kya kr rhi hai??
Kriya: tum use jaante ho?
Shivam: yeah she is a big looser.
she ditched me

Kriya felt bad on hearing this..
Shivam: bt now mai iski asliyat sbke saamne laakar rahoonga
Kriya: ki ye Swayam ki behan nhi hai;

Shivam: how do u knw?
Kriya then narrates him the whole story..
Shivam: u knw wat maine boht koshish ki sabko btaane ki par sabko abhi bhi yahi lgat hai ki mai pehle jaisa hi hoo
bt Kriya nw m changed mai pehle waala Shivam nhi raha hoo

Kriya: koi baat nhi ab hum dono milke ise sabak sikhaayenge aur iski asliyat sabke saamne laayenge

Shivam: thnku Kriya..
Kriya: friends kbhi thnku nhi bolte ek doosre ko
He smiled wide at this

Kriya took him to her home and introduced him to Smriti
Smriti: nice to meet u beta. I'll get smthng for u guyzz
Smriti turned to leave bt Shivam called her
Shivam: aunty

Smriti: yeah
Shivam: mujhe aapse kuch baat krni hai

(yahaa kriya nhi hai wo upar apne room mein chali gyi thi Shivam bhi jaane wala tha bt fir usne socha ki wo Smriti ko sab sach bataayega)

Smriti: ha bolo beta
Shivam: aunty us din jab aapko Kriya ke dance ke bare mein pata chala who call maine hi kiya tha..
Mai nhi chahta tha ki Kriya ki team jeete coz wo best dancer hai aur use haraana impossible hai isliye maine aapko call krke uske dance ke aur Rey ke bare mein bta diya..
Aunty aap nhi jaanti ki Rey Kriya ko kitna pyaar krta hai jbse Kriya chali gyi hai wo aaj tak theek se muskuraaya bhi nhi
Aunty plzz Kriya ko waapas bhej dijiye
and he also tells about Taani
On hearing this Smriti agrees and calls kriya downstairs
Kriya: ya mom
Smriti: Kriya go n pack ur bags hum kal Mumbai jar he hai
Kriya was very very very very shocked.
Bt she understud that Shivam has convinced her she ran and hugged her mom and then Shivam

Next morning

Smriti: Kriya cmon we are getting late Shivam bhi aa gya hai hme pick krne ke liye..

Kriya: coming mom

 

m cutting the part that how they reached Mumbai n all

The day came when Kriya had to join St. Louis. She went and hugged Shivam as he was waiting for her and then theie plan begin..

Flashback endsss

 

Swaym: Taani mujhe laga tha kit um meri behan ho maine tumhe itna pyaar kiya bt tumne sirf dhoka

Taani was crying
Swayam: (in a low tone) Kyu kiya tumne aisa??
He shouted kyu kiya tumne aisa Taani????????
Taani: (she shouted) Kyuki mai Rey ko paana chahti thi
everyone was hell shocked on hearing this'

Rey came forward and held her by her wrist and took her to the door followed by others..
Rey: get out
(bs guyz uske baad Rey ne Taani ko bhaga diya aur fir sabne swayam ko console kiya aur sab kuch settle ho gaya especially Shivam aur gang ke beech
par kuch settle hona baaki tha aur wo tha humaare KRIYAANSH ke beech)

Finally guyz khatam ab aur nhi type kr skti plzz
agr man kiya to next part bhi aaj hi update kroongi


Precap: I m Srry'''''''''''.

All: yay''.

 

Ab jaane se pehle ek baat clear kr doo
actually Swayam ke parents California mein rehte hai wo dono bissuness mein itne involved hai ki apne bte se baat krne ka bhi tme nhi milta..

One day they called him and said that ki tumhaari ek behan hai hum use India bhej rahe hai..
Swayam was very xcited after hearing this..

Sheshank: tumhe use receive krne kal airport aana hai subah
Swayam: ya dad
next morning
Swaym ne aaj tak apni behan ko nhi dekha hai to wo gaya or waha usne ek ldki ko aate huye dekha he asked her that if she is Arohi shekhawat..
that girl wanted lift to usne socha ki kyu na wo Swayam ko bewkoof bnaakar use lift lele
girl: yes
Swayam: (xcitedly) yay m very happy ki mai aaj apni behan se mil raha hoo..
Then she got to know that he was waiting for his sis.

Girl: mai bhi boht khush hoo umm ab chale??
Swayam:ya
the Girls name is Taani

Taani Mumbai aayi thi apne prince charming Rey ko pane..
Swayam was driving. He got a call.
Swaym: ha rey bol
Hearing Rey's name got xcited and got to know that Swaym is Rey's best friend and from that day she acted as his sis..
on the airport jab arohi aayi to usne dekha ki Swaym nhi hai to she thought that Swayam bhool  gaya hoga to she called Sheshank
Sheshank thought that ki Swayam unse naaraz hai ye sach chupaane ke liye..

Sheshank asked Arohi to come back to California..
Taani 3 months pehle hi Mumbai aayi thi or in 3 months mein Swayam ki apne dad se baat nhi huyi..

 

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Edited by heavenlyangel - 08 September 2012 at 4:05am

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