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...TERE ISHQ PE MARJAAVAA... (Page 17)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged

Part 5

Recap:

Kriya: to tum ho who Taani.....

Story continues

Kriya: to tum ho who Taani jisne ye sab kiya?????
Taani: (feared)  (stammering) ky....aa tu... tum kyaa...a keh....keh...rhi....ho??
Kriya: are itna stammer kyu kar rhi ho??(with full confidence as a diva)
Taani: stammer.. .or ..or mai ...mai..mmaii kyu stammer krne lgi??
Kriya: ab to ye tumhe hi pta hoga that y r u stammering agr nhi pta to kya mai btaaooo???
Taani: (made herself straight and says with full attitude)  kya keh rhi ho tum paagal to nhi hogyi ho??


Kriya: mai paagal hoo ye to pta nhi bt I knw ki tum jarur paagal ho..
aur ab tum ye dar dar ke mujhe bore kr rhi ho to mai sbko bta hi deti hoo coz ye sbhi confuse ho rhe hai
Kriya: (towards the gang) Guyzz tum logon ko Taani ke bare mein kuch pta hai ya (luking towards taani)Taani ne kuch btaaya hi nhi??
Rey: Kriya tum ye sab kya keh rhi ho?? Hmaari kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai
Kriya: mai sab kuch btaaoongi bt mai kisi ka wait kr rhi hoo jb wo aajaaye to hm dono mil ke btaayenge'
Sharon: lekin aa kon raha hai??
While Sharon asked this a voice came from behind
Voice:  Hey Kriya m here'
All turned around to see who it was
All were hell shocked to see that smiling face'..
All:SHIVAM...
Kriya: hey Shivam
Shivam hi and Hii guyzz

Or kaisi ho Taani Malhotra'...
Taani was hell shocked on seeing Shivam and on hearing the word MALHOTRA'...
Taani: ye ' tumm,'...tumm.. kkk'...yyaaa bol ''...rhe ho??
Mai ''...Taani Shekhawat hoo
Shivam: Ohh Really Ms. Malhotra'.????
Kriya: kyu Taani laga na shock???
Guyzz aap sbhi bhi abhi wait kro  

Kriya: (turning towards Swayam): Swayam ye tumhaari behan nhi hai''..
Then suddenly Kriya got a call she checked the caller id and unknowingly a smile crept on her face..
She said: Guyzz mai sbhi ko ye baad mein btaaoongi bt now I hv to go'
Taani: tum aise nhi ja skti aur ye tum kya bakwaas kr rhi ho mein hi Swayam Shekhawat ki behan Taani Shekhawat hoo'
Now Kriya was fuming with anger that she yelled on Taani

Kriya: Tum '''.agr tum Swayam ki behan ho to ye kya hai???
She shows a picture of Taani with her Parents'
Everyone saw that pic and were shocked as they knew that the persons in that pic are not Swayam's parents'
Rey: par Kriya ye to VP sir aur unki wife hai.
Kriya: xactly Rey yre Vp sir aur unkii wife hi hai aur yehi taani ke parents hai' aur ye Taani Swayam ki behan nhi hai'''.
Taani: WTH agar mai kuch bol nhi rhi hoo to iska mtlb ye nhi kit um kuch bhi kehti raho'
Taani: (feared)  (towards Swayam) Bhai aap iski baato ka yakeen mat kijiye'bhai'.bhai (crying as now her truth is gonna revealed) bhai' ye.. ye bakwaas kr rhi hai' mai ..mmaai aapki behan hoo'.

(Taani ko laga ki ab uska sach sabke saamne aa jaayega aur sab usse nfrat krenge to rona shuru

kyuki jab tension hoti hai na kisi baat ki to mostly logo ko rona hi aata hai LOL)

Swayam didn't knew how to react. He was confused that either he should trust his sis or his best friend.
Swayam: Kriya jot um keh rhi ho kya wo sach hai?

Kriya: ha swayam yehi sach hai''.
Swayam: bt ye sab tu,mhe kaise pata...?????
Swaym: main hi jaanta Kriya ki mai kiski baat ka yakeen kru apni behan ka ya tumhaara.. mai(he was cut by Taani)

Taani: bhai aap meri baat ka yakeen kriye' mai hi aapki behan hoo..
aur aap iski baat ka yakeen kaise kar skte ho ye to ek looser hai jo sab ko beech mein chod kr chali gyi thi' (hearing this Kriya's eyes got watery bt she didn't let the tears out)

Swayam: Kriya I knw ki tumhaare jaane ke peeche koi reasom jarur hoga bt how can I trust him (towards Shivam)

Kriya: I knw Swayam ki tumhaare liye aur aap sbhi ke liye Shivam ko trust krna mushkil hai aur shaayad mujhe bhi (a tear escaped from her eye bt she lowered her lashes and wiped it)

Kriya: (facing all of them) but yahi sach hai..
Swaym:theek hai..... to maine yeh decision liya hai ki...

Wat would be Swayam's decision

kya wo dega Kriya ka saath ya maanega apni behan ki baat


jaan ne ke liye keep reading TIPM...

 

Precap: I m sorry mai both bura hoo jo maine tumhe trust nhi kiya m srry

 

Ab jldi se cmmnts kro and hit like button'.

 

 


 



Edited by heavenlyangel - 08 September 2012 at 12:26am

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
resBig smile
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awsum awsum awsumm update Angi,,,,,,,,,,,ClapClapClap
luv it,,,,,,,,,,,,or yeh tanni nanni kitni kamini hai yr,,,,,,,,,,,,hate herAngryCensored



Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 09 September 2012 at 1:01am

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
res
Unres...
Awesumm update preetu...
Luved it...
Taani shekhawat nahi Taani Malhotra... Haww...
VP ki beti... Ye stalker kitni kamini hai...
N shivam.. Ussko kaise pata n kriya ko kaise pata...? Confused
N swayam.. Bechaara... He is in such a Dilemma...

Kya Yaar preetu cliff hanger pe atka diya..
Hope woh kriya ke favour mein hi decison le.. Uss stalker ke nahi...

Edited by hetalt29 - 08 September 2012 at 12:35am

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
nice updatee...
thnx 4 pmBig smile

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Not at all fair. . . .
Not at all fair. . . .
Ek toh intne dino baad update kiya. . .
Uper se itna chotu update. . .
Nd,
itne bade cliff hanger mai rok diya. . ,. . .
Ohh godd. . . . .
M realy thnkng ki swayum kise choose krega,
bt,i knw 1 thng tat kriya iz right. . .
Thankz 4 the pm. . .
Egarly waitng 4 the nxt update. . . .
Update soon. . . . . . . . .

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhukumari

Not at all fair. . . .
Not at all fair. . . .
Ek toh intne dino baad update kiya. . .
Uper se itna chotu update. . .
Nd,
itne bade cliff hanger mai rok diya. . ,. . .
Ohh godd. . . . .
M realy thnkng ki swayum kise choose krega,
bt,i knw 1 thng tat kriya iz right. . .
Thankz 4 the pm. . .
Egarly waitng 4 the nxt update. . . .
Update soon. . . . . . . . .


sorry dear
xamz aa rhe hai to study krni hoti hai warna daant padti hai

next update pakka bda wala hoga...Smile

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Awesome update.

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:48am | IP Logged
awsome update
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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