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...TERE ISHQ PE MARJAAVAA... (Page 13)

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Amazing update 
rey is soo concerned bout kriya , he noes her too well , issliye toh he knew that she was lying wen evrybdy else agreed Approve 
and wat on earth is taani's problem jab dekho beech mein apni taang adati hai huh Angry 
hw dare she call her a nobody huh Censored
how dare she cal herself rey's GF Dead
omg chiii Thumbs Down
gosh i guess tume apni saari frustations isme nikaal di 
ek update uske cheeks red kardiye ...thappad se LOL nd dat too 3 frm sharon, swayum and rey !!!!! Shocked
bt humei kya v r happy 
luvd it to the core 
update soon

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it very very much
this cheapster taani deserves this kind of reaction and actions from every one...i soo wish to slap her myself
btw it was awesome and superb and mindblowing part
loved it to core

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged

Part 4

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recap:

Taani: bhai aap ye kya keh rhe ho?????aur Rey aap iss Kriya ke liye mujhe chod rhe ho
i love u aap kyu nhi smjhte
isne...isne to aapko sirf hurt kiya hai
ye aapko kbhi khush nhi rakh paayegi
Rey, plzz leave her not me

she don't deserve u...
Rey: (slaps her) shaayad tumhe tumhaara jawaab mil gaya


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Swayam: Rey tu us din ki kya baat kr raha hai??
Rey: do u remember that day jis din Taani Kriya ke jaise dressup ho ke aayi thi unknowingly ki ye Kriya ki style hai???
Swayam: ha toh??
Rey: one day Taani asked me ki mujhe konsa color acha lgta hai aur kis type ki girls, unki look etc..
to maine kahaa that i like white and explained her everything..
toh kuch dino baad ye bilkul waise hi dressup ho kar aayi jaise maine kahaa
i got confused as i xplained her everything that Kriya used to wear but maine isse Kriya ke baare mein kuch nhi bataaya... but then i thought its ok maine socha ki kya pta Taani ne apna style change kr liya...
After some time I was in fire exit aur Taani wahaa aayi she sat beside me i wasn't lookung at her coz that day her dressup her everything was reminding me of Kriya..

(Now Taani and Rey's convo of past to plzz don't get confused)

************************Flashback begins***********************
she said "Rey mai kaisi lag rahi hoo"

Rey: tum kaafi alag lag rahi ho
Taani: alag mtlb??
Rey: i don't knw
Taani: okk leave it..
(Rey stood up and Taani followed him now both were standing Taani's back facing to wall and Rey towards her)

Rey: taani tum subah se mere saath aise kyu behave kr rhi ho, u knw baat baat pe jaan boojh kr lad rhi ho n all..???????????
Taani: (in xcitment intentionally says) Kyuki aap ko aisi ldkiya pasand hai and moreover…….
Rey: wt moreover?????
Taani: and moreover Kriya bhi aapke saath aisa hi behave krti thi……..
Rey was hell shcked on hearing this he didn't knew how to react but then he settles himself
Rey was fuming with anger and shouted on taani in a very very very angry tone..

Rey: wt the hell do u think of urself????
Taani: apne bare mein sochne ka kbhi time hi nhi mila har waqt to aapke bare mein sochti hoo I love u Rey….

Now Rey's blood was boiling he shouted
Rey: tum ye sab mere paas aane ke liya kr rhi ho…… aur to aur tum Kriya ke jaise banne ki koshish kr rhi ho…..i cn't believe it maine aaj tak socha kit um both innocent or shareef ldki ho bt u r so CHEAP u r CHEAP mujhe laga tum Swayam ki behan ho to isiliye tumhaare liye mai itna protective tha bt mujhe kya pta tha kit um to itni cunning ldki ho jo sharaafat ka mask chadhaaye ghoom rhi ho….
He was about to slap her when he controlled himself
(ek baat bata doon ye sab jo flashback mein ho raha hai uss tym college khaali tha)
He took her hand and pushed her out of the fire exit. She hit with the nearby pillar and hurt her arm. Due to the hit her arm started bleeding but none of them cared about it.. Rey was about to go when she caught his wrist
Taani: aap aise nhi jaa skte mujhe mera jawaab chahiye aap chahe kitna bhi mujhpe chillaaye but mai jaanti hoo that u hate that bi*** Kriya
Now this was enough for Rey he turned in an alarm and slapped her as much hard he can
She now fell on the ground because of that slap…
I think tumhe tumhaara jawaab mil gaya
He went from there… Taani was lying on the floor crying with blood oozing out from her arm and cursing Kriya
Taani: Kriya u bi*** mai tumhe nhi chodungi tumne mere pyaar mere Rey ko mujhse cheena hai u'll hve to pay for it
tumhaari zindagi ko mai hell ki tarah bnaake rakh doongi bas ek baar tu mere saamne aaja fir dekhna mai kya krti hoo


**********************Flashback ends*****************************

Back to present
here the whole gang was listening this
 they were jst fuming with anger as if they will kill that Taani at the very moment
Swayam: (after hearing this) Icn't believe ki tum meri behan ho I jst can't believe……..
Sharon: mera man kar raha hai ki mai tumhaara murder kr doo… she was about to go towards Taani when smone pulled her…
and that was our Kriya
Kriya slapped her and she fell down
everyone was hell shocked by Kriya's reaction….

Precap:
Kriya: to tum ho who Taani…………………………..

Guyz ab Kriya kuch reveal kregi……..vry interesting
so stay tuned

 

 

 

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Wow fab update.par kriya miss nobody ko kaise janti hai?

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 4:55am | IP Logged
awsumm update,,,,,,,,,,,thnkx 4 pm,,,
plz update nxt prt soon

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Awesome
its becoming interesting
loved it
update soon

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
awesome
upd8 soon

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
hey i went to ll your update from 1 to 4 i was just awesome i loved it the way u showed their feeling was great loved it
thanks for pm
waiting badly for nxt update

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