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ArHi OS: Hide*Re-posted* (Page 7)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Awesome...You always amaze me with your work. You write so well.

Coming back to the OS...I loved the pool scene. It was so cute and very romantic in its own way. The last part actually brought tears to my eyes. I don't know why I feel that Khushi is no more and that this was just a Arnav's illusion..

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Okay! I have had it enough! *melodramatic way*Angry
Tell me in how much are you willing to sell! I'm ready to buy your brilliance at OS writing! 
'Hide' is an amazing piece of work.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
omg... this was sooo sad... heart wrenching.. and an unexpected ending as ever...
u made me cry... usually, when i read some of ur os where khushi will be no more, it makes me feel that i have lost someone very close ... it gives a lot of pain..
it was worded beautifully. great work zehra.
thanx for the pm.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged

Sad yet beautiful !

Surprising to see that he was thinking about Khushi.
Amazing OS!
Awesome work dear
Loved it :')

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
It was beauriful but tragic! Looks like he has a daughter who looks and acts like Khushi! :)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
awww... beautifully written...
like it!!!
awesome!!!!!!!!
nice!!!!!!!!
it means is khushi dead???

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Awesome OS !! Loved reading it !Big smile

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Why, Zehra? Why? 
Why do you make me cry?? Cry

hehe.. and it rhymes too.. perfect.. 
it was beautiful.. as always.. 

I knew she might have died.. the moment you talked about hide and seek... sigh! I know I hate these OSs in which Khushi is dead.. but at the same time love them because of the way you write.. how you wont reveal the suspense until the ending!

Thanks for the pm!

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