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ArHi OS: Hide*Re-posted* (Page 4)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
wow beautifully written..
loved it..

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
No... You can't do this...CryCryCry



Khushi is dead...!! And Arnav is just talking to no one... NOOO...!!!!!!
Please...!!!! I burst into tears after reading it...  


Happy endings please dear... We all love Arshi... No sad endings please...!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved your OS... It moved us a lot...SmileTongue *Sniffles sniffles*Cry




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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Awww...thanks a ton for the dedication Dear...
And again you managed to surprise me and leave me in awe with the beauty in your writing...
This OS was so sad yet so beautiful...I absolutely love the title...
It sort of contained a hidden meaning...it was just 'Hide' but not 'Hide and Seek'...the last line deciphered the hidden meaning behind the title...'Yes, it is impossible to seek you Khushi.'
Left me in tears Zehra...
The entire concept...the way you flawlessly captured all the emotions...it was simply Brilliant!
Loved it...
Thanks for the PM and for the dedication...

And Happy Friendship's Day...


Manal <3

Edited by -Manal.A- - 06 August 2012 at 3:45am

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Cruel... cruel... absolutely cruel... I knew as soon as Khushi hid that Arnav is never going to find her...this piece of writing literally brought tears in my eyes... wonderfully written but I wish I hadn't read itCry

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
wow... never expected that ending... made tears come to my eyes... love how you used a simple game to say so much and display so much emotion :D TFS

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Thought it would be light and humourous but it ended up being a tear jerkerCry.
 
You write beautifully.

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Thank U , Thank U, Thank U & Infinity times Thank UHug
I am honoured, thnk USmile

Rola dia,YarCry
Sooo beautifully writtenDay Dreaming
I cant never imagine the state Of Arnav without Khushi- that would b devastating for himUnhappy
Aww,I loved the Pool scene yaar, tears r rolling downCry
It was fantastic as well as sad
Aww, Arshi's daughter!!Day Dreaming
I liked her style of questioning
The last line yaar made me cry
Then I when saw my name, I was sooo happy Smile

This will encourage me giving more & more long commentsWink
thnx Zehra- for making me cry & happy in a same OSBig smile
& The update of SS'Late'- I want it tonight not tommorowBig smile
Thnx 4 the PMBig smile

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Awesome OS but very sad. Please Lazyleaves turn it into a happy OS. I cannot bear Arhi separated.

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