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ShrayaBiswas Senior Member
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Posted: 30 June 2014 at 7:59am | IP Logged
it was so tragic...!!!!! why do yu have to write sad os's??? :(
nicely written btw...as always... :)

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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Well that was unexpected!
I truly thought they were playing..the dialogue about never finding her brought in a small doubt but the story ahead had me forgetting about that and bam the ending!  

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Shilpasabui Goldie
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
you really make me cry only by the last line...
i re-read the os bt still my tears are not stopping.

It was superb... I'm unable to find the right words to describe ur work...
but still i'll request you not to make us cry with this kind of stories...

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Swaran13 Goldie
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Posted: 04 August 2014 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
sad os Cry
well written though

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anera Goldie
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Posted: 11 November 2014 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
omg it was his frigment
khushi is dead

so sad
love the os
lara3110 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Enjoyed reading it all over again. Your work is fabulous.Clap
mahrusweety IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 10:13am | IP Logged
love reading it again and again
although it sad with khushi dead
but its really written very emotionally and beautifully
awesome work lazy
kritash IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 2:13am | IP Logged
beautiful OS.
loved it.
but ending was sad.

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