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Posted: 03 January 2014 at 9:25pm | IP Logged

 ~ Rim jhim rim jhim baras rahi hai, ~
         ~ Yaad tumhaari qatraa qatraa... ~

 
u made me so emotional..
beautiful os..

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 3:41am | IP Logged
I read it again!! Why do you have to make me cry like this? Give me a happy ending. Bas!!!

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 11:03am | IP Logged
I didnt except Khushi would be hide out forever.CryCry wonderfull

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Gosh this was beautiful 

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Nice OS..
Is Khushi no more..was he imagining or thinking about a past incidence..?!
Ohh..it began lighthearted and was so sad in the end!!
PS: do u have a index? Have not seen them linked in your OS's! Should I have PM'ed you about this?!  I'm sorry if so! I cannot understand the processes people follow here sometimes! 

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
nice one lazy !
shuru mai mujhy  lga it will be fun or humorous filled . but when i read the line where khushi said k its  impossible to find her , dnt know why but i felt k later maybe her words are going to turn reality ! matlab i thought she ll go forever.
i smwhere felt k she wd be there sitting on the poolside and arnav had searched whole the house but not poolside !
he had her payal with him , he had her memories and her NISHANI with him..he does nt need to seek her . The faster he ran the louder the sound of payal became telling him that she was there wth him .
i really liked this one .. conveyed so much !Clap

paas nahi per sath hamesha

dj thnx

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
that was nice but quite sad

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
how painful. . he was actually imagining khushi. . so khushi was not there with him...and the or daughter was..

I love the way you portrayed the whole os... gives a divine feel... a painful smile is now shining in my face...

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