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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Cry Cry Such a beautiful and tragic story.

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
this is so sadCryCry

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
Omg that was so sad..
Plz don't write those kind again..
Mujhe sad hi kar diya.
Why did u kill khushi aswas

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 3:55am | IP Logged
That really made me cry Zehra :'( .. 
Khushi no more ??? Gosh just couldnt bear that ... 
You are such an Amazing Writer with lots of unique thoughts !!! 
The questions the baby asked was lol .. but it hurted alot !!! 

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Clap Great OS! but sad Cry

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Awww,a touching start. . .
"You sitting quietly? That is
something new" Arnav
teased. . .Embarrassed


i could imagine the scene of Khushi instructing Arnav. . .i was imagining that Khushi was pointing her index finger to Arnav and instructing him.. .LOL

and when you mentioned the Payal for more than two times,i thought some trick was used by Khushi. . .
Smile

and then came the little girl!Awww Arnav is father,unbelievable . . .
my eyes popped out and my mouth went in a perfect 'o' too!
very touching. . .

His daughter's holding his coat and 'o' expression which you described,surely led me to the old ARSHI world. . .
amazing o.s.
thanks for sharing this beautiful and amazing o.s. with us. . .sincerely enjoyed. . .Smile

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
although i was coming to this one,
i read it before going to your other o.s.,as,when i was starting to read your o.s.,Sleep,this one was recommend/mentioned in the beginning. . .Smile
well,sooner or later,i was going to read this one anyways!
Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
amazing piece...very very very emotional ...
i am crying literally...Cry Cry
plz yaar never seperate them...
i cant bear it...
its so painful...

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