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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
wow...i first thought dis ws a cute loey dovey one shot...but d last para just blew me away...i mea i dint expect dis...nt at all...dis ws sooo touching, full of heartfelt poignant emeotions...n jst sooo sad...but d ending line is killer one...its jst wow...plzz pm me wen u write more...n i myt nt b able to  online much frequently as der is gonna b pressure frm college...bt still bear wid me...n plz plz plz pm me...SmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Beautifully penned.. 
Awesome description.
Brilliant emotive descriptions.
Thanks for the PM.. 

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Maddy1270 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
thank you Zehra for that dedication...  when you write such amazing stories it becomes very easy to comment!
 
a very touching story... especially loved the childhood reminiscences; for a change, arnav has some happy memories of his childhood! khushi getting arnav to play hide and seek with her was cute... so looks like she came back as a ghost to keep arnav company! arnav's relationship with his daughter is heart-warming


Edited by Maddy1270 - 07 August 2012 at 9:56am

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Pls...pls don't tell me khushi isn't there!

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Wow superb one zehra...
Loved it
Thanks a lot

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
this was amazingly beautiful n sad. 

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by afnariaz

Clap for your work but it is sad .Cry too. Romantic beautiful OS.But Khushi is no more she is only in his heart and their baby girl ...Please Zehra please don't write like this I can't imagine this.Please don't do this to us.Tragedy tragedy I hate it.
I have a doubt why every writers of IF thinks Arshi's baby must be girl???Remind me anothe OS of your's Khushi as a teacher and Arnav came to pick up his daughter.That day I thought I will WARN you don't do this type of stuffs.Arshi is fine ok they will happily live long together.Please don't make us cry yaar

But it is awesome yaar

yeah dear..pls no tragedyCry

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Beautiful! 

Thank you! 

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