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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
That was just beautiful.

Somehow I when he started searching for her I knew something was off. I figured her must have slipped her payals into his pocket or something and that's why he kept hearing them.

And then after a while I was hoping that no Khushi is no more but I still wanted her to magically show up.

But of course she didn't but her daughter did, she's too cute<3

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
out standing postClapStar

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
WOW!
that was awesome.. 
i love the surprises/twists you add in at the last minute,
it makes it so much more interesting
anyway this was a beautiful os written ever so well, i really enjoyed reading it, it was very heart touching ;D
Thanks for the PM and continue writing lots more stories :)
-Maya

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:54am | IP Logged
You have made me cry, but yes, it was written beautifully :)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Nice..but I didnt understand if she left him now forever or was he just imagining things and she was gone long time back.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
that was beautiful!!

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Nice one.
Ideally love sad FFs as happy ending are long gone.
Thanks a lot.
I really enjoyed it.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Beautiful, but ending...

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