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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Pj-

Lovely Munni. The pace is great and the length is irrelevant. 

This is what we are missing in the show. The pull and connection between the characters - especially between Jeevika and Maanvi. Loved the use of the flashback to tell the story. You have written it so well, great job, the emotions are so fitting from everyone trying to hide the fact from Jeevika to her anger and frustration after being kept in the dark  


Thank you so much Pooja...  appreciate your kind words..Embarrassed hope you feel the connection in the rest of the OSEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ani_gr

Munni Fabulous... Fantastic.. thoroughly enjoyed..I had tears reading this..
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Thank you so much Gayathri.. glad you like it.. and sorry for the tears Hug ok one more hug for the tears .. Hug

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunitha_Swayam

HugAwesome...fabulous work dear...loved it...thnk u so much for the PM


Thank you so much SunithaHug  I am glad u liked it ..Embarrassed
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ita_04

i could actually write a whole paragraph praising it...but i'll keep it short n simple...

the emotions...the medical part..the balance in portraying relations...everything was just perfect...u were awesome munni...
do not bother about the length at all...it wasn't dragged a bit...

n thanx for the PM...Smile


Awww thank you so much dear.. appreciate ur kind words..Embarrassed

I am always worried about the length.. as i have a habit of going into details Confused
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by adenah

Omg...I loved it, ur a brilliant writer, continue soon!!!Big smileu described everything beautifully, thanks for the pm!!!!Hug


Thank you so much adenah..hug back dear Hug.,. glad u liked it ..


Originally posted by nikhilageet

Lovely OS MunniClap. very poignant and touching. pls do continueBig smile. would love to read more


Thank you so much Nikhila... glad u liked it.. Embarrassedand yeah it is very emotional to start off with 


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A boy meets a girl, who is nothing but full of life                              
A girl meets a boy, who is miffed with his life       
 No love at first sight, no music in the background
No shy,blushy smiles, no sparks flying in the foreground

          They hit off instantly, with tiffs, fights and masti, 
With time, their tiffs were replaced with unlimited dosti
they shared all their  happiness and sadness
and together, set the house on fire with their madness

Now, the boy is in love with the girl and went to profess his love,
but he was hit by a news which slipped the ground below,
 He decided not to confess, until she is all fine and healthier,
but , took care of her round the clock like a true partner 

 His care and concern is slowly making its way into her heart,
she  shrugs it off...but he made his way into her heart
she is confused with her feelings of missing him, with traits of jealousy 
she found happiness when he is around.. and sadness when he is away


    Eventually she realizes her love for him,                                         
but suppresses her feelings, as she loves and cares for him
He confesses his love before the family,                                              
She refutes his love before the same family

 He learns about her being in love with him,                
and makes her profess her feelings to him
now the family is the hurdle in their their love,
they were even ready to sacrifice their love
                                         

 The family accepts their innocent, pure relation, based on love
and had them engaged which gave a new name to their love
Her health worsens, but he is her strength and her hope,
She gets well, and is on the threshold of happiness with a new hope


The girlMaanvi, whose other name is Zindagi, is all set to walk into the threshold of matrimony with Virat,whose other name is Pyar, together becoming VirMan,a life full of love,  Pyar bhari Zindagi





             
                         
 



 



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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Munni the second part was brilliant. The emotion and Jeevika's frustration can be felt. It is portrayed so simply but makes the impact it needs. You can shown the different perspectives so well as the situation is so complicated with Jeevika's pregnancy, Maanvi's illness and both their desires to the other's well-being. 
Loved it, I really don't know what to say.    

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrav_virman

Awww perfect..just awesome..i am in shortage of words to praise you..everything is written soo perfectly...i just loved virat in this part..virat is just too caring and the way he was cheering maanvi up,ahhh too good..lovely part..plz update soon..:-)


Thank you so much shravani...
appreciate your kind words.. glad u like it ..Embarrassed

yeah for Virat all it matters is her health .. everything comes after that ...

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