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SS: Khoon Ka Rishta...Update -Pt-5/Pg-15-7th Nov.. (Page 4)

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
res :D

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Neha.K.

SUPERBBB IN EVERY SENSE OF  THE WORD...

From the first word, I was captivated...Actually i m at a loss of words..but lemme try what i felt while reading and what m feeling right now...

All the chracters were so real, i mean i cud imagine them, But Jeevika's strong yet helpless chracter always makes me relate even more...
and Mannu, when Jeevika seems real, Manvi is so easy to connect with...

where M said that somehow she knew and she cud felt that J knows abt bmt... OH sooo Manvi types - So realll...

"MANNU" lets out Jeevika in a frail voice - This was heart wrenching.. I can so imagine J saying this...

the scene when Jeevika goes to Manvi after knowing the truth..
JEEVIKAAA  was BANGGG ON!! The way you described the emotions seemed very real and believable..As someone who has gone through the painful process of watching a loved one die of cancer, it touched me to no end the way you portrayed her chracter.

This was perhaps the greatest one-shot, and 2nd Best thing on JeeMan I've ever read so far. 1st was Pooja's  SS 'how life goes on"... the feeling was mutual while reading both writings...

you potrayed every emotion very well Munni... AMAZING AND TRULY CAPTURING...
thank you sooo much for such a brilliant piece of writing..waiting for the next :)

It sucks when it comes to do a serious comment and thats why i dont do... but ur writing forced me to say atleast a plain thanks...your writing skills truly shine through with this OS... Thanksss again Munni :)Hug


Awww Neha this is the bestmbest compliment for any of my OS in any of the forum...MuaahhhHugHugHug

thank you so much for the wonderful ... and kind words.. appreciate every word.. overwhelmed.. hope the rest of the OS lives up to your expectations ... truly touched by your words... "wipes my tears""  you made me emotional JeeHa


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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by urmilsalve

nice one...update soon




Thank you dear .. glad u liked it ..Smile


Originally posted by jannat89

Wooow it was amazing
Cont soon dear


Thank you so much jannat .. glad you liked it Smile



Originally posted by viratmanvi

omg just finished reading its reaally nice do continue ...


Thank you dear... Glad u liked it..Smile

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nobo

It was really nice & ESP..the telepathy thing.. Awesome work
 & the thing that u not only showed every relation But also in the way they SHOULD have shown in show... J's anger is also nicely described

& her taking promise from virat For taking care of HER mannu was also fabulous ...
 Plz do continue... It seems promising


Thank you so much nobo.. appreciate it.. glad u like it..

hope the rest of the OS lives up to your expectations.. and i always love the connection between JeeMan .. it is magnetic and magical . Embarrassed
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrav_virman

Awww i totally loved it to the core..loved each and every line of the OS..they were filled with such perfect emotions.and yu described the characters also too well..plz do continue..


thank you so much shravani.. glad you liked it .. Embarrassed

Originally posted by Gurwi2000

Smilenice oneSmile


Thank you Smile
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooja_Ch

OMG Munni!!!
It was amazing!
There is no doubt that u r an awesome writer!!!!!
I simply loved it..!
Thnx4 PM and do cont and send me pm too..Embarrassed


Awww thank you so much pooja.. glad u liked it Embarrassed appreciate your kind words


Originally posted by shine123

Amazing ...pls pm me wen u update...


Thank you shine .. Smile sure will pm you


Originally posted by virman246

really good continue soon


Thank you Smile


Originally posted by lakshm

beautiful loved the flashback..continue


Thank you Lakshmi . glad u liked it Smile


Originally posted by shaan_khanak

Amazing, do pm me the next part pls.


Thank you shaan.. will pm you ...


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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by girl97



its very nice



Thank you Embarrassed


Originally posted by Saraa.7

OMG.. This is Epic !

Please PM me when you continue !

Well done :)) x



Thank you saara.. glad u liked it Embarrassed


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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepali88

OMG Munni..your wrote the OS..thats greatHug
Wow Munni..Amazing and wonderful Update..i read it continusly .Clap
you are a  wonderful writter..I am speechless now..loves the whole OS..Thumbs UpStar
pl update nexT part asap



Thank you so much Deepali. ..hug back Hug

glad u like it deepali ..appreciate ur kind words... hope the upcoming parts live up to your expectations Embarrassed

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