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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunitha_Swayam

Lovely update dear...First of all apologies for the late reply...gotta come online only 2day...
Lenghty but loved iy...thnx for d PM dear



Awww sunita...please don't apologize.. read at your leisure.. and thanks for liking it.. yeah somehow all the updates are turning longer than i thought LOL

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
di fabulous u have captured each n every emmotions beautifully
gosh reading  d jeeman scene i was imagining it n i was literally shivering
manvi's shoouting at jeevika not leting her cum close jeevika reaction to mannu not letting her cum close
superbly written.

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Criticism??R u nuts...
one of the  Awesomest piece of writings ...Man Jeevika's Rare Single mindedness, the attitude of mannu , mannu & only mannu
 
& as I Also said...Manvi WIL be the worst sufferer if they show this...That was one reason that made me believe that v r not gonna see an abortion As ne1 would prefer dying than living such a full of guilt & tortured life... the feeling of inhaling an innocent's breathes is Enuf to Kill you...More Deadly Than Cancer

Coming back...Virat Jeevika & Viren Manvi bonding also presented in a fair manner, & The JeeMaan cnvo...ufff
 M's frustration, J's only concern awesomely penned out ...& even in such situation J can blame herself for not knowing about M's normal side effects...

Wonderful munni...Just wonderfulll

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Munni. 

The way you have written each of the characters makes total sense. Maanvi's disbelief at Jeevika's thought and decision and her willingness to question that as well as caring for her at the same time, by telling Viren care for di. 

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
superb absolutely brilliant

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
This chapter is like you are watching it play out for real, scene by scene, word by word of how each other feels if jeevika took this major step in the series, I hope it never come trues.

Brilliantly written, maanvi could never carry on living if she knew the baby was no more, maanvi would ie a million times over before anything happen to the baby, I don't think virat could live with the guilt also.

Virat and maanvi or viren could live with them selves if anything happen to the baby, I don't think they would forgive jeevika ever.

Thanks for the pm, please continue soon

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Wow beautiful u've described da emotions beautifully

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