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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 7:11am | IP Logged
WOW beautifully written, what strong emotions you have written, you could imagine the scenes in your head, both sisters are so connected that they both know when the other is in trouble.

I missed a heart beat when viren received the telephone call what has jeevika done?Shocked

do you think this is what will happen in the show, i hope not?  I could not imagine jeevika choosing between maanvi and the baby?

Please continue soon and thanks for the pm


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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Munni Fabulous piece of writing... Fantastic... Really enjoyed reading... I am speechless.. Keep up the great work...Big smile

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
i am speechless...brilliant piece of writing...

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Munni as alwaz fabulous work !!
Loved reading it !!
Am already fan of ur writing..
Thnx 4 Pm..
Cont soon..

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
beautifully written superb

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nobo

Munni...yar u made me short of words this time...I mean Such an emotional piece of writing & very very realistic at same point...wonderful

 I jussst loved the telepathy...The feel of pain when other is in need ...the wiping tears of other when 1 is crying...Fabulous 
 "the sisters hug each other , tightly & silently As if got their life back "...

& of course J's dilemma of choosing one between her unborn & Manvi is SO AWESOMELY penned out...the voices , that hurt,  I REALLY want it to be this Way in show
  & dude it was nice to know about HLA...didn't knew it & suspense is so nicely Maintained...what did J did ???????

Lolz, now I understand y u said we may need Kleenex for ur update...Although I didn't  needed it as I cry really very rarely ...But still it was heart wrenching 

So awesome update...loved it
 Please update soon


Awww thank you so much Priya Hug

the behanas do have telepathy . they are soul sisters.. and who knows better about them than the behanas...Clap

The three voices surrounding Jeevika was a real tough job to pen it down .. the emotions are on a totally different level..

well u will know about J's suspense in the next update.. and this time it will be yet another Kleenex update Priya...HLA matching ..yes it is the deciding factor for the stem cell transplantation...

thank you once again for the wonderful comments Priya.. appreciate itSmile
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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shine123

brilliant...loved the whole update...thnx 4 d pm n continue soon...


Thank you dear.. glad u liked it..



Originally posted by mika17

Dat was written beautifully, am speechless, I think jeevika has aborted her child


Thank you mika... glad u liked it.. yeah will reveal about J in the next update.. stay tuned
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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikhilageet

Munni you are a fantastic writer and this part of your OS really brought tears to my eyes. Jeevika s pain is so real for me being a mother myself and I really really wish the cvs would read your s and other gifted writers on this forum s ideas and incorporate all these scenes. The grief and worry and helplessness which jeevika is feeling, the bond between the two sisters that is what has rarely been shown in the past episodes and for the story to move forward well we as viewers need to see this for us to feel the pain too.
thanks for the PM. Big smile


Thank you so much nikhila...

Jeevika's pain .. we can all relate to how much it will be twitching her heart where she has to choose between her kids...

I am glad u liked the emotional one

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