Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

SS: Khoon Ka Rishta...Update -Pt-5/Pg-15-7th Nov..

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:36pm | IP Logged


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Neha.K. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged

From the first word, I was captivated...Actually i m at a loss of words..but lemme try what i felt while reading and what m feeling right now...

All the chracters were so real, i mean i cud imagine them, But Jeevika's strong yet helpless chracter always makes me relate even more...
and Mannu, when Jeevika seems real, Manvi is so easy to connect with...

where M said that somehow she knew and she cud felt that J knows abt bmt... OH sooo Manvi types - So realll...

"MANNU" lets out Jeevika in a frail voice - This was heart wrenching.. I can so imagine J saying this...

the scene when Jeevika goes to Manvi after knowing the truth..
JEEVIKAAA  was BANGGG ON!! The way you described the emotions seemed very real and believable..As someone who has gone through the painful process of watching a loved one die of cancer, it touched me to no end the way you portrayed her chracter.

This was perhaps the greatest one-shot, and 2nd Best thing on JeeMan I've ever read so far. 1st was Pooja's  SS 'how life goes on"... the feeling was mutual while reading both writings...

you potrayed every emotion very well Munni... AMAZING AND TRULY CAPTURING...
thank you sooo much for such a brilliant piece of writing..waiting for the next :)

It sucks when it comes to do a serious comment and thats why i dont do... but ur writing forced me to say atleast a plain thanks...your writing skills truly shine through with this OS... Thanksss again Munni :)Hug

Edited by Neha.K. - 06 August 2012 at 12:38am

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ItsmeAish IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
omg just finished reading its reaally nice do continue ...

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urmil Goldie

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged

nice one...update soon

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nobo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
It was really nice & ESP..the telepathy thing.. Awesome work
 & the thing that u not only showed every relation But also in the way they SHOULD have shown in show... J's anger is also nicely described

& her taking promise from virat For taking care of HER mannu was also fabulous ...
 Plz do continue... It seems promising

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Jannat94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Wooow it was amazing
Cont soon dear

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Shrav123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Awww i totally loved it to the core..loved each and every line of the OS..they were filled with such perfect emotions.and yu described the characters also too well..plz do continue..

Edited by shrav_virman - 08 August 2012 at 12:59pm
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